~*The Unknown Desire 2(RP)*~part 52 up pg. 64 on 13/08/16

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: arpita25
to aaj chance hai kya is k update hone ka? 😉

Dekha chance bhi tha n update ho bhi gaya. 😆 😆 😆

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shreya

@XoxowpdXoxo

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#92

congarulations and celebrations🥳 finally update ho gaya ye baat alag hai ki chhota nupdate tha lekin phir bhi update to hua😆😉 lekin ye kya kiya vardaan ka accident kyun karwa diya isme😡😡 vardaan ko bilkul thik kijiye jaldiii

bechaari kajal kitna pareshaan ho gayi ye sunke😭😭😭 aur vardaan ke parents ko ye lag raha hai ki kahin unke eklaute bete ko kuch ho na jaaye😭😭😭

abhi ke liye itne hi comments jab tak aap vardaan ko thik nahi kar deti hain uske baad long comments dungi jaise hi wo thik ho jayega😭😉😊

continue soon 😊

shreya😊

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#93

sachhi me tune update kiya hai...main yakeen nahi karr pa rahi hun...kha mere...nahi nahi...apne hi sarr ki kasamm kha kar bol de...ha ha ha...😆

chalo...kuch toh aaya hath me...yeh chutku sa part hi sahi...

vaise maine toh sirf update ki baat kahi thi na tujh se...Vardan ki accident ki baat toh kahi bhi nahi thi...aur tune...huh...😡

ek toh itna late update...upar se vardan ko hospital bhej diya...!!! tu samne hoti toh...mere hatho se peet karr tu bhi iss waqt kisi hospital me hoti...huh...!!!! teri behtari isi me hai ke vardan thik thak rahe...!!! varna tu mujhe janti nahi hai...😡😆

vaise Kajal kitni dukhi thi...aur Vardan ke parents bhi...aur tu update karr ke chhup gayi...peet ne ki darr se...😆

vaise sach kahun...toh mujhe pata hai ki vardan ko kuch nahi hoga...kyoun ke jitna main tujhe janti hun...tujhe peetna bilkul bhi achha nahi lagta...n tu isi liye kuch bhi galat nahi karegi...!!! par tujhe toh galiyan deni hi thi...so maine de di...mera dil thanda ho gaya...😆

kajal kafi ro rahi thi...bhagwan ke samne...n ye jo uss ki baat sunn rahi thi...wo uss ki honewali saas hai na...!!! chalo achha hai...vardan ko apne parents ke samne kuch bolna hi nahi padega...😉😛

abhi vardan ko jaldi se thik kar ke wapas le aa...varna tu kabhi bhi thik nahi ho payegi...😆

vaise ye tujhe mera comment kamm aur dhamkiya jyada lagg raha hoga...!!! par sach bhi yehi hai...ke main tujhe dhamkiya hi de rahi hun...!!! okay...ab next part sayad 2012 ke Happy Dussera ke time par hoga...hai na...😡😆

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Preetika/Elena

@Windsof.Heaven

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#94

Hey Vertika .

i read your whole ff love the every part of it

.omg vardan ka accident ho gya oh no bechari vardan ki mom kitni dukhi hain aur uske dad bhi .

and kajal bechari kitna ro rahi hain hope sab theek ho jaye .

very emotional part .

cont'soon

n thanxx for the PM

love

ayushi.

Edited by sainiayshi14 - 13 years ago

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#95

Nice part

Kajal is shocked to hear about Vardaan's accident. she panics and does not understand what to do. she is relieved see Abhay there. He tries to console and give her hope. He even calls Vardaan's parents there.

They are both shattered to see their son in such a critical condition.

Mr. Mehra is tocuhed to see Abhay's concern for his family. He tries to console his wife.

Abhay finds Kajal at the temple praying for Vardaan's safety and recollects all the things which he had investigateg about Vardaan. He can see how much Kajal loves him

please continue soon

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varshita

@varshita

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18
update ho gaya ho gaya ho gaya😆🥳

Yahi dekh kar mai bhi khush ho rahi hoon ki finally madam ko apne kisi fic ko update karne ka khayal to aaya. 👏 🥳

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varshita

@varshita

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#97

Nahiii ye kya kar diya tune. 😲 😲
Bilkul accha nahi tha ye update mere liye matlab itne dino baad update karegi vo bhi itna bada shock degi hume Vardaan k accident ka, not fair.😕 😕
Tum aisa kaise kar sakti ho humare saath?😡 😡
Kuch bhi ho jaaye ab jaldi se us ko theek karo kuch nahi jaanti mai aur mai Kajal aur Vardaan k parents ko aise nahi dekhna chahti. 😭 😭
Abhay k Vardaan pe najar rakhne se ye accha hua ki sab log time se Vardaan k pass time se pahuch gaye aur us ka proper treatment start ho gaya. 🤔 🤔
Ab to Abhay ko bhi yakeen ho gaya hoga na ki kitna pyaar karte hain Kajal aur Vardaan ek doosre se aur Kajal ka dard to mujh se nahi dekha jaa raha tha.😭 😭
Sach me Kajal ko zindagi ne itne dard diye hain ki poocho mat, bus ek Vardaan hi us ki khushi tha but ab us ki bhi aise halat hai.
Mrs. Mehra ka dard to shayad shabdon me keh paana mushkil hai, apne ek laute bete ko is haal me dekhne k baad kisi aur dukh ki jaroorat kahan rahi hogi. 🥱 🥱
Humare Vardaan ko jaldi se vapas laa do and try to update this fic soon.

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shreya

@XoxowpdXoxo

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: varshita

Yahi dekh kar mai bhi khush ho rahi hoon ki finally madam ko apne kisi fic ko update karne ka khayal to aaya. 👏 🥳

hehehe ... mera ye reaction maine sabse pehle post kiya tha jab maine pm dekha tud ka 😆 😉 😊

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desaiprachi07

@desaiprachi07

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#99

Great update 👏 but it was not expected yaar. 😭
Tum se aise umeed nahi thi itne jaldi Vardaan ka accident nahi hona chahiye tha 😲 ab dekho kya haal hai is time Vardaan ki parents ka aur mujhe to sab se jyada Kajal k liye bura lag raha hai. Vo kya itne buri hai ki bhagwaan baar baar us ki is tarah se imtihaan le rahe hain.😡 Bechari Kajal kitna gum sahegi itne kam umar me?😕 Abhay ka Vardaan pe najar rakhna ek tarah se theek hi raha na kam se kam vo time pe pahuch gaya na ? Ab Abhay ko bhi yakeen ho gaya na ki Kajal aur Vardaan ki relationship fake nahi hai 😊. Mujhe Vardaan k parents k liye sab se jyada bura lag raha hai apne eklaute bete ko aise dekh k kya beet rahi hai un pe.😔
Please jaldi se theek karo Vardaan ko and please try to update soon.

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#100

Hey dear...hope u are doing well..😊...seems like U are really busy...as kaafi waqt me bas ek hi UD hua...however...I cant complain...main to bas abhi abhi ayi..😆😳

Coming to the part...Vardaan met wid an accident...😭...and uski halath bhi critical hai...it hurts me to realize that...lekin mujhe tum par pura bharosa hai...he has to be fine...samjhi na? 😈

Feeling really sad for Kajal...especially the way she tells Abhay to save her Vardaan...and also speaks to God......

And yes...this update had special attention on Vardaan's parents...and sumhow I loved the portion most...u have depicted it all very beautifully...Vardaan was actually a vardaan for them...and now on the verge of losing him...the fear and pain in indescribable......but u did amazing!! 😊

Hope u continue soon dear...😊