~*The Unknown Desire 2(RP)*~part 52 up pg. 64 on 13/08/16

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory
Update was very good.
thanks Nisha 😊 😊 😊

Muskan and Vardaan love each other very much. Vardaan muskaan ko rutha hua nahi dekh sakta and so am sure that he is planning ways...jisse who muskaan ko mana sake
Sahi soch rahi ho tum 😉 😉 😉

she gets very worried when she does not see him in the room
obviously ki vo achanak se kahan chala gaya? 😕 😕 😕

waiting for the next part

continue soon

Thanks a lot dear 🤗🤗🤗

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit
Hi Mehak
Hi Suhana 😃 😃 😃

wonderful update as usual and congrats once again..👏👏👏
Thanks Suhana 😊 😊 😊

Vardaan was busy romancing with Kajal..they both were lost in the wonders of love.

Kajal was so happy that she has got some1 like Vardaan in her life..he really understands her well.he knows how to make her really happy.
Yes she is really lucky to have him in her life and same goes with Vardaan too, 😳 😳 😳 That's why it is said that they are made for each other. 😉 😉 😉

Vardaan loves to tease her..she was so upset when he took too much time to reveal the names of those who love him the most..😉😆😆
Bahut shaitaan hai na vo kabhi mauke nahi chodta hai 😆 😆 😆

Here Shalabh was trying to patch up between Arjun and Anu ..he was trying hard but Arjun was showing loads of attitude..after all Anu didn't tell him her plans..Sunny was teasing Shalabh and even Arjun was getting suspicious..
Arjun ka naraj hona to obvious hai but Shalabh apni setting k chakkar me laga hua hai aur in logon ki vajah se us ka chance miss ho jaa raha hai. 😆 😆 😆

Where has Vardaan gone??? kajal is so very worried for him.

I think he is planning a surprise for Kajal😃
Bus padhti jaao pata chal jaayega ki kahan gaye hain janab? 😉 😉 😉

Wat is Abhay's problem??? 😡😡😡..I hope he doesn't create any problem between Kajal and Vardaan.
Ye to next update me pata hi chal jaayega kuch had tak. 😛 😛 😛

Pls continue soon

Bye

Thanks a lot Suhana, love u 🤗🤗🤗

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: priti11
awesooome..
superb.

fab...

wonderful...

rocking upd.

loved it.

thanx for the pm.

take care.

A big thanks to u Preeti 🤗🤗🤗

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arpita25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

to aaj chance hai kya is k update hone ka? 😉

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

hamesha ki tarah NICE...!!! ab NICE...kaise nahi hoga...iss me apna Raj...Vardaan bann kar jo Raaj karr raha hai...sab ke dil par...
Ye to baat sahi hai na us ka naam Raj bahut soch samajh kar rakha gaya hai na. 😉 😉 😉Thanks Priya 😃 😃 😃

pehla pura part baht romantic tha...!!! ab iss ke bare me jyada nahi likhungi...varna log kya samjhenge...ha ha ha...ke bachhi bigadti ja rahi hai...
accha kis bacchi ki baat kar rahi hai tu vaise? 😕 😉 😆

vaise dono ka nok-jhonk kafi maza aaya padhne me...!!! aur Kajal ke bina kahe hi vardaan ka sab kuch sunn lena bhi mast tha...!!! haaye...dil ki baat sunn bhi leta hai aur samjh bhi jata hai...
Sach me aisa hi pyaar hona chahiye na do logon k beech 😍 😍 😍

salabh...arjun aur anu ke bich me sab kuch thik karne ki koshish karr raha hai...!!! par arjun toh arjun thaihra...mahabharat ke arjun ki tarah kuch jyada hi bhav kha raha hai...!!! vaise uss ka bhav khana sahi bhi hai...anu ki galati jo hai...!!!
Ab kya kare abhi se apni hone waali biwi pe impression nahi jamayega to baad me us k haath me nahi aayegi na baad me 😆 😆 😆 aur Shalabh to apni setting me laga hua hai. 😉 😉 😉

yeh abhay ki prob kya hai...agar uss ne kuch bhi jane...anjane me kajal aur vardaan ke bich kuch bhi gadbad ki na...toh uss ki aisi ki taisi kar dungi...!!! usse meri tarf se warning de dena...huh..
Haan de doongi aur bata doongi ki ye linoess kitne dangerous hai. 😆 😆 😆

par akhir me vardaan kahan chala gaya...!!! usse jaldi se le kar aa...!!! mujhe kajal ki tension nahi hai yaar...bal ke meri halat kharab ho rahi hai...
Sab pata chal jaayega just wait and watch. 😛 😛 😛

chal ab ud jaldi se karr...

Thank u so much Priya dear 🤗🤗🤗

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: raheelu
thanks
👍🏼

your welcome 😊 😊 😊

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: varshita
Super hot update yaar. 😳
thanks dear 😊 😊 😊

You mixed the whole update very well. 👏

once again thanks 😃 😃 😃

First VK's romance than you turned towards Anu and Arjun taking help of Shalabh and finally to Abhay.

haan dono ka khayal rakhna padta hai na. 😉 😉 😉

But i wonder what he knew and where did he rush all of a sudden?

Sab pata chal jaayega read the next part. 😉 😉 😉

Start was awesome where Vardaan and Kajal were romancing u made me blush. 😳

But Vardaan got irritated when Kajal thanked him and he disappeared.😲 Where did he go and why? 😕 Kajal is so much worried about him.

Obviously ab janab bin bataye aise chale jaayenge to bechari ko lagega bhi kaisa.

After all she doesn't know anyone here. 😭

true 😃 😃 😃

Shalabh to apne hi chakkar me laga hua hai na aakhir us ko Mugdha k pass jo rehna hai isi bahane. 😆

Ab shak ho raha hai Arjun ko us par aur Sunny bhi mujhe lagta hai jaldi hi bata dega.😉

Sahi baat hai baar baar bhabhi bhabhi kar raha hai badi yaad jo aa rahi hai apne bhabhi ki 😆 😆 😆

baap re kitna attitude dikha raha hai Arjun Anu ka call nahi le raha hai. 😕

Not fair...Shalabh bhi chahta hai ki vo phone uthaye par itne asanise kahan maane waale hain ye log.

Itne asaani se kahan maane waale hain janab, vo chahte hain ki Anu us ko manaye.

great part and continue soon.

Thanks a lot for comment Versha. 🤗🤗🤗

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 13 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07
Great update,👏 super hot too.😳 Vardaan and Kajal k scene kafi hot and passionate the with good use of that song.😳 Arjun ko sahi shak ho raha hai ab Shalabh pe ki aakhir vo itna interest kyoun le raha hai is matter me 😆 aur Sunny ne bhi aag me ghee ka kaam kiya na.😉 Ab batao ki matter kya hai? 😆 Kitna smart hai ye ladka jo us ne Anu ko phone kar k sab bata bhi diya.😛 Ab to Arjun ko bhaav khaana hi hai na itne asaani se kaise baat maan lega vo ki sun ne lage Anu ki.😉 Par ye Vardaan kahan chala gaya achanak?😲 Kajal ko manana hi tha to aise chod kar jaane ki kya jaroorat thi? 😭
pls jaldi se aage update karo.

R 2

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 13 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: arpita25
Great vow yaar superb, hot and passionate with a lot good scenes. 😳
Thanks a lot Arpu 😊 😊 😊

I loved them and this time the naughtiness between Shalabh an Sunny were so cute with confused Arjun.😆

They are really very funny and lovely too. 😉 😉 😉

He is just trying to find out that who is she jis k liye aaj kal bahut kuch chupa raha hai vo.😕 Aur aakhir matter kya hai jo itna interest le raha hai vo Arjun aur Anu k jhagde me.😆

Bus isiliye apni line clear karne me jo lage hain janab. 😆 😆 😆

Ab gussa to dikhana hi tha to phone kaise uthayega vo.😉 Par ab Kajal ko chod kar Vardaan gaya kahan,😕 bechari ka ro ro k bura haal hai pls bring him back.

Sahi me anjaan jagah pe ghabraaiyegi to hai hi vo na

update kar na jaldi

Thanks a lot Arpita dear 🤗🤗🤗

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 13 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 13 years ago

#80

Part 41:-

"Kahan ho Vardaan tum, pls vapas aa jaao." She was really worried and crying like hell.

Tabhi door bell baji, Kajal bhaagte hue gayi door open karne ye soch kar ki Vardaan aaya hai. Par jab us ne door open kiya to saamne kisi ko na paa kar us ki aakhon se ansoon lagataar aur tej behne lage.

"Excuse me mam."

Kajal saw at a man, "mam ek aadmi ka call aaya tha kuch der pehle. Us ne bataya ki Vardaan sir jo aap k saath aaye the un ka accident ho gaya hai. Vo is samay Life Care hospital me hain."

Kajal was shocked, she was unable to respond, "Kya? Nahi aisa nahi ho sakta…….." she cried with pain.

"Mam hum ne aap k liye ek car arrange kar di hai Life Care hospital jaane k liye."

"Haan chalo." She left in hurry without waiting for a moment she took her cell phone and locked her room and left.

They reached to a hospital "Life Care" which was located in premises outside the city. "Sister Mr. Vardaan Mehra?" that person inquired.

"Un ka operation chal raha hai abhi vo third floor k ot me hain."

"Kya?" Kajal was shocked.

"Relax mam. Chaliye hum vahan chalte hain."

Kajal's whole world has stopped and she really doesn't know what to do she was unable to believe what that nurse told her about Vardaan. "Ye sab kaise ho gaya Vardaan." She just had that question in her mind and she was really unable to think anything else. Thy quickly reached to third floor where she asked once again a Ward boy, "vo Vardaan………."

"Jee kaun?"

"Abhi ek accident ka case aaya hai na jis ko ek truck ne tukkar mar di thi kahan hai vo patient?"

"Vo to OT me hai."

They rushed to that side, the door was already closed and just tan Abhay came there. Kajal looked at him in shock, "Abhay tum yahan?"

"Haan Kajal mai actually yahan se kuch kaam se jaa raha tha bus raaste me accident dekha aur mai hi Vardaan ko yahan le kar aaya hoon."

"Abhay………" she sobbed, "us ko kuch hoga to nahi na? Vardaan theek to ho jaayega na. Dekho na kya ho gaya us ko, mai to bus jara sa naraj hi hue thi us se ki jaane kahan vo bahar chala gaya aur ab ye sab…………." Her sobbes were getting louder and she hugged Abhay.

"Relax Kajal mujhe poora yakeen hai ki kuch nahi hoga us ko."

"Bacha lo us ko Abhay."

"Maine kaha na kuch nahi hoga us ko."

After a few hours:-

"Kya hua Vardaan ko?" This was Mrs. Mehra to whom Abhay called after doctors bought him in ICU. "Kahan hai vo?" she came there with Mr. Mehra.

"Excuse me?" they asked Abhay.

"Aap Abhay hain kya jinhone hume call kiya tha Vardaan k…………."

"Mr. Mehra."

"Jee"

"Kahan hai vo?"

"Operation chal raha hai sir shayad khatam hone waala hoga abhi."

Kuch der baad:-

"Kaisa hai ab Vardaan doctor?" A worried Mr. Mehra asked doctor.

"aap us k pita hain?"

"Jee han kahiye."

"Vo filhaal thodi critical situation me hai aur hum koshish kar rahe hain ki jaldi se jaldi us ko hosh aa jaaye. Jab us ko hosh aa jaayega tab hum kuch bata paayenge filhaal hum abhi kuch nahi keh sakte."

Kajal was hearing all this, "nahi.iii aisa nahi ho sakta. Vardaan theek hai doctor kahiye aap." She nearly shooked doc.

"Aap relax rahiye………humr umeed hai un ko jaldi hi hosh aa jaayega."

"Relax Kajal...Doc ye nahi keh rahe hain ki Vardaan theek nahi hai vo bus ye keh rahe hain na ki jaldi hi us ko hosh aa jaayega to pata chal jaayega ki us ki condition kaise hai."

Par is pal Kajal ko samjhana vakai me bahut mushkil hota jaa raha tha. Yahan us ka haal bura tha ro ro kar aur vahan Vardaan ki maa Mrs. Mehra jab se aayi thi tab se bus chup chaap baithi hue thi aise hi. Un ko is tarah se dekh raha tha Abhay aur fir ek pal k liye us ko laga ki kahin ye un k dimaag aur sehat k liye mushkil na ho jaaye itna bada shock sehna aakhir un ka ek lauta beta tha Vardaan jitna us ne pata kiya tha us k hisab se vo yahin jaanta tha. Abhay gaya Mr. Mehra k pass.

"Sir..."

Bahut dhyaan se kuch soch rahe the Mr. Mehra jab Abhay ne un ko disturb kiya.

"Yes"

"Sir vo..." pointing towards Vardaan's mom, "Vardaan ki mom hai na?" Mr. Mehra nodded in agreement. "SIr mujhe lagta hai aap ko is waqt un k saath baith k baat karni chahiye." He looked at Abhay's face. "Sir mere kehne ka matlab hai mam bahut pareshaan lag rahi hai aur shayad isi pareshaani ki vajah se vo kuch bol bhi nahi rahi hain. Is tarah se chup chaap baithna un k liye theek nahi rahega. Ho sakta hai jyada sochne se vo bimaar ho jaayein to aap un se baatein kijiye un ko bolne pe majboor kijiye."

Mr. Mehra bahut dhayan se baatein sun rahe the Abhay ki aur un ko lag bhi raha tha ki vo shi keh raha hai, "Thanks". He was really touched by the concern he showed to Vardaan's mom.

"It's ok sir."

Ab Abhay jaise hi palta Kajal vahan nahi thi. 'ye kahan chali gayi?' man he man sochte hue Abhay us ko yahan vahan dhoondhne laga.

Here Mr. & Mrs. Mehra:-

"Kya soch rahi ho?" Par unhone shayad dhyaan nahi diya Mr. Mehra ki baaton par. Unhone fir se bulaya unhe tab bhi koi jawab nahi aaya. Ab un se nahi raha gaya unhone apni patni ka haath apne haathon me liya"Vo theek ho jaayega."

ANd now she looked at him, "sach me? Mujhe chod kar to nahi jaayega na?"

Mr. Mehra gave her an assuring smile, "bilkul nahi."

"Kya ho gaya ye sab? Kyoun mere bete ko itna dard diya us ne?"

Mr. Mehra was unable to answer her as it was not easy for him as well. Apne ek laute bete ko is tarah zindagi aur maut k beech jhoolte dekhna bhala kis baap ko accha lag sakta hai? Aur vo beta jis ne aaj tak ek accha beta hone ka saara farz itne acche se nibhaya hai, kabhi apne maa baap ko na sharminda kiya na kabhi kisi se bhi unhone apne bete k baare me ye suna ki un ka beta kuch galat kar raha hai. Yaad aate hain un ki zindagi k vo 12 saal jab vo tarse hain ek bacche k liye, shayad in 12 saalon me unhone aur Vardaan ki maa ne umeed bhi kho di thi ki ab kabhi vo dono maa baap bhi ban paayenge. Duniya k acche se acche doctor hi nahi saari duvayein bhi kara li aur kuch bhi fayda nahi hua un ko. Par shayad kuch accha hona hota hai to bhale hi der se ho par hota to jaroor hai. Ek miracle se kam nahi tha Vardaan k aane ki khabar aur ye sab kuch tab hu tha jab Mr. and Mrs. Mehra ek baar Vaishno Devi ki yatra pe gaye the aur vahan se vapas aane k kuch hafton baad hi un ko khabar mile thi ye. Par yakeen nahi aa raha tha un ko apni kismat pe ki kya sach me ye khushi un k angan me humesha rahegi ye chali jaayegi.

Par jis ko aana tha aaya aur ghar hi nahi poore sehar me Mr. Mehra ne itne badi party di thi ki aaj bhi log yaad karte hain us jashn ko. Maa ka Vardaan hone ki vajah se hi Mr. and Mrs. Mehra ne apne bete ka naam Vardaan bhi rakha tha. Har pal un dono k dil me ek dar baitha rehta tha Vardaan k liye aur ye un ka kusoor bhi nahi hai, shayad apne kismat par se yakeen uth chuka th un ka but jaise jaise Vardaan bada hota gaya vo dar dil k ek kone me chota hota gaya. Kabhi unhone aisa koi kaam nahi kiya jis me Vardaan ki khushi nahi thi aur kabhi Vardaan ko kuch karne se roka bhi nahi. Yahan tak ki jab bachpan me vo sharatein bhi karta tha to bhi us ko kabhi daat nahi padi bus pyaar se samjha diya gaya tha us ko. Vo khud hi itna pyaara tha ki na kabhi kisi ko dukh deta tha na us ki vajah se kuch bura hota tha, aisa lagta tha ki sach me Devi maa ne khud us ko apne haathon se dharti pe bheja hai.

Aaj kahin se vo dard phir se uth gaya aur apne saamne apne bete ko aise dekhna...par Mr. Mehra ye bhi jaante the ki apna dar vo Vardaan ki maa k saamne agar dikha denge aur is pal vo agar kamjor padenge to shayad vo Vardaan ki maa ko bhi nahi samhaal paayenge. Ye mauka hai un ko samhaalne ka aur vishwaas dilane ka ki kuch nahi hoga un k bete ko.

"Mujhe pata hai ki ye pal kitna mushkil hai par..." taking her face in his palms he said, "tum jaanti ho vahan kis dard se gujar raha hai na Vardaan agar tum is tarah yahan baith k ansoon bahogi to kitna dard hoga na us ko?"

Apna kandha Mr. Mehra k kandhe par rakhte hue unhone kaha, "Jaanti hoon, par ek maa k dil se poocho to jab bhi us ka beta kisi dard ya dukh me hota hai to sab se pehle us ko ehsaas ho jaata hai."

"Samjhta hoon vo jitna tumhara hissa hai utna hi mera bhi aur agar tumhe meri baaton pe yakeen hai to samajh lo kuch nahi hoga humare bete ko, is baar bhagwaan itne beraham nahi ho sakte humare saath."

Achank se vo khadi ho gayi aur apne ansoon pochte hue unhone Mr. Mehra se kaha, "mai abhi aayi."

Mr. Mehra ne kuch nahi poocha kyounki vo acche se jaante the ki is waqt un ki biwi kahan jaayegi so he just nodded his head.

Yahan Abhay pichle aadha ghante se Kajal ko dhoondh raha tha aur us ko jara bhi samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki is waqt kahan chali jaayegi vo, fir Abhay k dimaag me achanak se kuch khayal aaya aur us ne kuch dhoondhna start kiya.

Tabhi us ne saamne dekha Kajal mandir me khadi thi bhagwaan k saamne jo ki ek chota sa mandir tha jaisa ki aam taur pe hospitals me hota hai. She was crying hard.

"Maine kya bigada hai aap ka? Har baar aap ko mujh se koi na koi pareshaani hoti hai na. Kyoun aap har baar us insaan ko mujh se cheen lena chahte hain jis se mai bahut pyaar karti hoon. Pehle aap ne mujh se mere papa ko cheena, phir mere dadu mujhe aur hum sab ko chod kar chale gaye aur ab Vardaa...nahi is baar mai aap ko kisi bhi haal me jeetne nahi doongi bhagwaan is baar aap mujh se aur meri zindagi se koi khel nahi kehl sakte hain. Maine aaj tak sab kuch has k saha hai aur aap ka har decision maana hai sir jhuka k kabhi koi shikayat nahi ki aap se par is baar aap k is decision ko mai aise nahi maanogi bhagwaan."

Abhay ki aakhon me ansoon the aur ab vo shayad samajh raha tha acche se kis gehrai se Kajal pyaar karti hai Vardaan se. Pehle us ko Vardaan pe yakeen nahi tha aur bus us ki sacchai ka pata lagane k liye hi us ne Vardaan k liye ek pvt. detective laga rakha tha par kal raat me hi jab us detective ne ye sab reports di thi Vardaan ko ki kitna accha insaan hai vo tab garv hone laga tha Abhay ko Kajal k selection pe phir bhi us ne kuch din aur us detective ko ye kaam karte rehne ko kaha.Aaj subah suabh us n phone kar k batya tha Vardaan ko ki accident ho gaya hai Vardaan ka aur fauran hi bina kuch soche samjhe Abhay jo us waqt Pune me hi tha nikal gaya tha vahan se.

"Nahi bhagwaan tum Kajal k saath aisa nahi kar sakte ho aur is baar tumhe Kajal ko vapas karna hi hoga Vardaan."

Yahan Kajal nahi jaanti thi ki jab vo bhagwaan se apne Vardaan k liye jhagda kar rahi thi to vahan maujud koi shaksh us ki baatein sun raha tha aur apne aap ko samhaalne ki koshish bhi kar raha tha.

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Sorry guys mujhe pata hai after 3 months ye bahut kam hai but i assure u guys that i will update it again asap as u guys know i am too busy now a days i hope u guys will forgive me soon and do read and comment. 😉 😉 😉