***Bad Couple*** (sk ff) (pg67 prt10) - Page 5

PART 3

s-foreign tour pe jaane ke lie paise chahie hote hain, jo ped pe nahi ugte hain, aur planning bhi. Le jaake raaste pe rukwaunga kya?

k-ok fine ! you go to hell ! I am going to my college !

s-college? Are you sure?

k-where else can I go? But if I'l go to the college just the day after my marriage then...oh no..what would people say..everybody will taunt me..make fun of me...uff ! but I also don't wanna stay in this filthy house of yours, whole day !

s-I thought you gonna go to your mom's place for some pag-phera ritual or something !

k-oh yes ! I completely forgot ! I should better rush !

She runs into the washroom and locks the door from inside, before Sujal could even protest.

s-HEYYY !!!!!!!!!!!

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Sadly, Sujal had to wait for whole 45 minutes for her to come out.

But he wasn't the person who would stay still, he would bang at her door on regular intervals, causing Kashish to get more irritated on him and yell.

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She is sitting in her mom's place.

Mom-chal, bata Sujal kaisa hai?

k-langoor kahin ka !

mom-chup kar! Apne pati ke bare mein aisa nahi bolte.

k-seriously maa, aap logon ki akal mein paththar pad gaye the kya jo Aamir jaise ladke ko thukraake aapne meri shaadi isse kara di

mom-Kashish, ab tu shadai shuda hai, you should concentrate on your new life, har kisi mein achchaiyaan hoti hain, Sujal mein bhi hongi. Aur, aise shadai ke baad apne puraane rishton ke bare main sochna galat hai.

k-what the hell ! mom, kya shadai ho gai to pyaar ka switch off kar doon, as if there is a switch. Sach to ye hai ki, I don't love Sujal, neither can I.

mom-I hope life makes you mature

k- I am mature

mom-khair, main aur tere papa Karan ke paas jaa rahe hain

k-what???????????? Bhaiya bhabhi ke paas???????? US????????? Why????

Mom-arre wo kitne dino se keh raha hai, ho hi nahi paa raha tha. Waise teri bhi shadai ho gai hai, hum soch rahe hain wahin settle ho jaye

k-no ways mom ! [she hugs her mom] mera kya hoga?

Mom-arre kya hona hai, teri shadai ho gai hai. Ghar bass gaya hai

k-mommm !!!!!!!! how could you leave me alone

mom-jaise tu mere saath rehne wali hai

k-kya maa, waise bhi wo mujhe pasand nahi, main to soch rahi thi jhagda karke aapke paas aa jaun.

Mom-chup kar pagli

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Sujal is working in his office when somebody enters. His face lightens up as he looks up seeinhi his best buddy Yash there.

s-hey buddy !

y-hey !

s-baith !

y-to kaise hain hamare newly wed Sujal Garewal ! mooh mitha nahi kara rahe?

s-saale tanker ! mann nahi bhara tera kal pike?

y-saale, tanker main nahi tu hai. Waise, kal shaadi hui aur aaj office?

Sujal's phone rings

He picks it up.

A shrill female voice from the other side yells at him.

'are you mad? Yaa tumhara dimaag kharab hai?'

s-what? [he is bewildered] who is it?

k-main Kashish bol rahi hoon !

s-tum tameez se baat nahi kar sakti?

k-tumhare saath? Bikul nahi ! kyunki tameez se baat insaano se ki jaati hai, tumhare jaise saandh se nahi?

s-acha tum kya ho? Baat baat pe kundne wali, daant khinchaane wali bandariya?

k-kam se kam tum se to behtaar hoon, tutta hua pippa !

s-pippa?

k-haan wo metal ke cans aate hai naa, unhe baar baat laat maaro to wo kaise tedhe mere nahi ho jaate, waisi to shakal hai tumhari

s-arre kabhi apni shakal dekhi hai aaine mein jaise papite ke jhaad ke beech kharbujaa latak raha hai !

k-arghhh !!!!!! tum...

but before she could complete she sees her mom entering the room , and she knows her mom wouldn't like her talking in this manner with Sujal.

So, she changes her tone to a bit normal.

k-emm...hmm..khair, job hi hai. Shayad tumhe yaad nahi, pag phere ke baad tumhe maa ke ghar se mujhe pick karna tha

s-yad hai mujhe, main ab tak pohonch bhi gaya hota agar tumne mujhe aise baton mein nahi lagaya hota to

k-what?????? Main?????

Maa looks at kashish

k-haan haan, thik hai. Jaldi aa jao

s-hmm

she disconnects the phone.

Originally posted by: -purnima-

a new FF 👏👏 ... dats gud ...
read both the parts together 😆😆😆... the bestest part of this FF 😍 ... SK are married from first part itself ... a big tension of whether SK will meet, when they will meet , when they will marry 😆😆😆... in sab ke baare mein sochne ki zarut nahi hai 😆😆😆...wo to hai..sk are married happily yaa nahi, kya pata

Loving Sujal 😳😳😳 ...typical sujal characterstics 😆😆😆...a difference that he is not a business tycoon i guess 😆...He wants to become one & is he Suzaaal here too 😉😉😉... hope he doesn't drinks too much 😆😆😆
But i knw u love suzal..hai naa
As 4 the concept i am already love with it 😳😳😳Thanks ... & "Shadi ke baad pyaar hote hote ho hi jata hai " 😆...wo to hai

The only problem in FF wud be how they will fall in love when they are poles apart 😆😆😆prob to h & also Kashish loves some1 else ... waise who is Aamir Ali ☺️ 😉😉...kaha naa uska bf, jo Dr hai

will wait to see ow story progresses 😳😳...continue soon 😊😊... & all the best for new FF 👍🏼 Thanks dear, and thanks for the lovely comment

Originally posted by: pinky901

🤗dhasu part ..are fight jo hui ekdum typical dhasu type..👍🏼 Thanks dear..

chalo ye to acha hai ki ye normal couple hai i mn aam tour pe husband-wife main takqrar 1st night ke baad hi shuru ho jatii fir chahe wjah kuch bhi hoo..ab inke case main 1st ngt to thi na fir wo bhale hi logo se diff ho ...aur fgt bhi to dhasu hui hmm😃 yudh bilkul hai na

well ye bahut acha hai ki finally..finally ye dono aamne saamne aaye aur jis andaz mai intro hua..haye...tabhi ye sabseee unique couple hia..grt couple ya best couple to her koi hota hai ye hi to ek akle "bad couple 'hai😃😉 wo to hai

To janab ko party ka bahutt shauk hai ..waise ye shauk kabse hua..pehle to kabhi malum nai tha hume..hmm..ye naya sujal hai dear well idhar kashish wait kar rahi thi ab wo bhi kya kare usse asa karne ki "instruction "jo mili thi mumma se"pyar se rehna"" ☺️ well kehte hai intezar ka fal meetha hota hai aur is intezarr main kashish ko mauka mila sujal ko gaurrr se dekhne ka i mn photo mmain hi parr she admit na ki her hubby is handsum to ek seedi to milgaii..ab dhire dhire aage chali hi jayegi .. 😉hmm..well the way u describe his living style it depicts sumwat his daily life as he is enjoying his life and his bachelorhood aur uske familly bhi nai thi to abtak azad panchi the janab ab unhe panchi se sher banna padega aye heye..priya sher kyun..zara explain to kar😉

well so soon its morning here and kashish wakes up first..hmm is she typical bride ...😉😆 arre kya typical bride itna late uthegi? bolo?

well the way she thgt ki sas hoti to zindagi bhar tane detii and he dont mind kya confidence hai boss hubby ko lekar..hmm not baddd😃

well the way she woke him up is actuallyyy sooo cuteee at very first time..a little bit hesitation ahh luvly..and yeah he actually looking delicious without shirt..are uske naii apni baat ki maine...☺️

hmm and the topic thy chose to fight abt is jus sooo typical..omg..u are drunk,partying and i'm waiting...silly to wait, dont call me silly..hahaha🤣🤣

well actuually u knw wat i think thy dont hav ny reason to fight abt but ab pyar to inhe abhi kkarne ki izzajat nai hai are aapne nai di hai na arre main kaun hoon, karle pyaar

abhi inhe wo permission to bechare kuch to karenge na to bas thy chose dis way..oh so she knws she is beautiful and smart wel i guess this time i also think abhi tak k she is smart..kitni cleverly she said she is lin uv with dr.and he is not like u live in 1 bedroom house and most of all..hume honeymoon pe jana chahiye as we r nwly wedded very well said...cleverly..and yes hw fast is she..she also declares she want to go for hawaii.well dis time i think kashish is smart and clever unlike previous1 😎😍

and sujal ji wo bechare ek dum bolti band hogai unki waise not different kash ke saamne he alwys behave like this but yr he improves his sense of humour much more then before and yeah bahut maza aane wala hai in dono ki happening but not so happening fight dekhene main😍

hmm so mam yaha kuch sensible hai as she is a lecturer and knws wat is rgt for her and thats y she dont get married with dr..well i having a feeling abt sum smartness and cleverness here alsoo...lets c

so janab kafiii practical hai and not so fond of fantasy n all..he knws it all wat is needed and wat time is suitable for him or them to go and he knws hw to manage everythg exceptt his luv life and wife hmm

well its seems interesting and hillarious with lots of masala..😃

oohh godd see jaise in ke paass fgt karne ko kuch nai tha waise mere pass bhi likhne ko kuch nai tha aur inhi ki tarah faltu main bahutt kuch likh diya ab ye teri headachejus like managing sk and their fgts nd life... ..and i cnt help myself..i knw sensible likhna hota hai but u knw me..hope u dont mind dis time...😳

har koi pagal samjhe ga mujhe ..😕 naa dear..u are my swwethrt

dear bada, rapchik comment tha, dekh ke to mera mann garden garden ho gaya, tussi chaa gaye. aise hi comment karna. har ek line mein kuch chupa hai, uska saar bakhubi samjhi ho tum. kya baat hai ! mazza aa gaya !!!!!!!!!!! thanks a zillion dear

Originally posted by: sweetangel_25

hmmm...hum zara out of town kya gaye...apne nayi fic bhi start kar di...aur do parts bhi hogaye...jab ki hume sirf ek hi pm mila tha...but hum bhi wo hai...jise dur se bhi khushboo ajati hai 😆😆😆 arre aap ke darshan hi durlabh hai

ab what to say about the fic...i was bowled over by the first part...it was perfectly described...arranged marriage... Thanks a lot

she didnt even know the guy...milna chodo phone tak nahi kiya kabhi...common problem 😆😆...apne hi attitude me mast hai...friends and partying...are ullu...shadi ki party de raha hai...jisse shadi kiya hai...use to ab tak dekha tak nahi...arre photo to dekha hi hoga naa

acha ki kashish ne ...she gave him a dose right in the morning...Teri jaisi hai, he...he

but even she is not less...but both were equally nervous too seems like...ghussa kam...nervousness me zyada bol rahe the 😛...sujal wants to get dominating on day1 itself...but she answered him right...dono barabar hai...Ram milaye jodi..he..he

title justified right here 😆...aur ye shock...she 'loved' sum1 else...amir ali qureshi...ohh...mujhe bhi bohot pasand hai..mad parents...(again common problem 😆)...itne ache ladke ko reject kar diya...only for religion sake..is stupid ke liye arre sujal ko stupid kaha tune/

...but may be God knew better...these two are perfect for each other...😆

its gonna be fun i guess...are you planning for a comedy? 😆...will work i guess...but dear...sab kuch side par...after PKR...(if m nt wrong)kya?

...a fic from you finally on marriage...so plz...comedy n all side par...thodi romantic yar...😳...after all neelu magic hona chahiye..😳

aur jaldi jaldi cont karna...last fic jaise nahi...warna me sabko bol dungi...ki ur free now...final exams over hogye...nahi bolu na? to jaldi cont kar..😳😆😆

Thnks for the funny comment, ab kahin gayab hui naa maregi tu😉

Originally posted by: kashishdabest

hey neelu sweetheart!! first of all congrats on ure new ff..i am really happy to see a new concept from you..just want to say loveeed the first 2 parts..they were simply great..its a different concept..and in this..Sujal and Kashish are already married...sounds really interestng..i am looking forward to reading the future parts to see what happens..and hw there relationship progresses..hoping for some romantic moments and our main leads falling in love..gr88 start..keep it up..luv summi xxx

Originally posted by: spvd

part 2
wow what a start of first morning...
Sujal came back DRUNK?
thats so unfair...
cont soon dear...

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

nice part

shadi ke baad ki pehli hi subah dono jagad pade...what a beggining to their married life.

Both of them cannot tolerate each other.

continue soon