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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
Nice part sujal and kashish just need a small reason to start fighting with each other.
Sujal is back to his work but Kashish feels unconfortable in going to college from the fear of facing all the teasing.
She get upset on hearing that her parents will be going to US...they were her biggest support.
please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
loved the concept...sk are married in 1st part but fight bhi shuru hogi...baqi sari fics se different hai...ab in dono ko fighting karte hue bhi dekhe gae...
plz con't soon and add me on ur pm list...plz plz
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
Sujal and Kashish shock me with every update... 😆
They way they talk with each other and call weird names to each other is hilarious ...😛
They seem more like a teenager GF-BF rather tham a "arrange" marriage couple ...😉
And the way Kashish talks with her mother about Sujal that how wrong were they to marry her with him and calling names to him shows how a good friendly realtion she shares with her mother ...😊
After her parents shift to US it would be only Sujal and Kashish ...😊
Sounds soo much fun ...😆
Awesome update ...👏
Loved it ...😊
Waiting for next ...⭐️
Update soon ...😊
Thnx for pm ...😊
Ans lastly with every update I m falling more and more in love with ur "BAD COUPLE "😆😆




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Posted: 14 years ago
#64

PART 4


A few days have passed in their life.

In these few days they fought every moment they were together.

They would realize when they would actually think about it that the fight was actually useless and petty but still something would happen and they would end up fighting.

Apart from fighting Kashish and Sujal were also getting acquainted and accustomed to the changes in their life.

Even then the fights were becoming part and parcel of their life causing disharmony and disturbance for both of them.

Kashish would do what he will say, clean the house , cook for him, iron his clothes, serve him food but Sujl kuch bol de kar ne ko to Sujal ko do baatein sunaye bina chodegi nahi.

Sujal bhi aajkal used to ho gaya hai Kashish se, so he chooses to ignore her rather pick up another fight.

k-listen !

she says to Sujal who was getting ready to go to office.

s-hmm

k-maine decide kiya hai

he narrows his eyes questioningly.

k-ki..ki..i am fed up fighting, roz roz ke ye jhagde...to islie its better we ignore each other, kam se kam shaanti to bani rahegi.

s-ok, cool.

He takes his bag and walks out.

k-cool

He goes.

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Its evening and he comes home.

k-you are early?

s-party hai .

k-kab? Kahan? Kitne baje? Mujhe bataya kyun nahi?

s-i was not sure and its some old friends and all. Get ready, we have to rush.

k-Oh God ! what will I do..its time bhi...

s-rush ! fast ! make it quick !

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At last they reach the party.

Kashish wears a gorgeous anarkali suite, while Sujal choose to keep it simple with just trouser and shirt.

As they enter the party all the friends hound them as they wanna meet the newly wed.

Sujal goes with his friends leaving Kashish with the ladies.

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Its late, the party has almost ended. Only handful of people are left.

Kashish was sitting at a corner on a chair the whole evening, as Sujal was too busy with his friend to even bother about her. And so, she was left to vent on her own with all the strangers.

Sujal walks to her after a while.

S-Kashish, lets go home.

She looks away, pretending not to have heard him.

s-Kashish , I said lets go !

she is looking away

s-cant you hear? I am talking to you ! [he is irritated]

she looks at him, crossing her arms.

k-of really? You know me? [says in sarcasm filled tone]

s-what???? Kashish lets go !

k-why should I go with you?

s-why? because I am your husband !

k-really? You are? Are you sure I am your wife? or you just had short term memory loss during the party?

s-have you lost it. Start talking rubbish and come with me without another word

k-Don't use that tone with me ,Sujal !

s-oh yeah? [he rolls his eyes] then what should I do?

k-apologise !

s-what????? I apologise to you?

k-yes ! You apologise to me ! because you made me wait all alone here , whole evening. While you were merry making and patying with your friends

s-oh! Are the delicate darling who cannot talk to people around?

k-no I am not ! but you are supposed to be caring ! instead of getting drunk with your friends you should pay attention to you wife !

s-drunk????? Who said I am drunk? I deliberately didn't drink much because you would make a hue cry about it

k-you liar ! I can smell the alcohol in your breath ! apart from that, why would you want me to be there with you, if I will be there then how would you ogle the girls and flirt with them .you womanizer !

s-I womanizer? You are out of your mind ! don't force me to open my mouth about your relationships !

k-what???????? [she is shocked as well as pinched by his words, as everyone present at the party is gazing at them] how could you...say...such...you are a...[she is hurt and her eyes are moistening]..I tried to...but you..

s-I am a what???????? Huh?

Seeing the argument getting ugly, Yash steps in

y-kya kar rahe ho tum dono yaar? Ghar jao, faaltu mein scene create ho raha [whispers to them] job hi jhagda hai ghar mein niptao, please

Edited by storywriter - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
@vidu-thnks 4 reading

@jyoti-thnks dear

@tehzeeb-thnks

@lalulla-thnks

@monika-arre dear, sujal kanjus nahi practical hai thnks 4 liking our bad copuple dear

@spvd-thnks dear

@dazzling glory-yes...drop of a hat and they are fightingnaa jaane kya hoga inkahehe.thnks for the comment dear

@cute_samrah-welcome back, good to see uin dono ke ghar ka naam fight club rakh dena chahie...he...he
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: kashishdabest

hey neelu sweetheart!! fantastic part...once again..it was brilliant..i was laughing all the way through reading there remarks about one another and there last convo on the phone was just hilarious!! lol it was really funny for sure..and very enjoyable..fantastic part..can't wait for the next..do update soon dear..and i knwww u missed mee..i missed u 2 dear..lekin i read all ure ff's..aur mein poori koshish karungi to not go anywhere now and make sure to drop a comment wen possible..abbhi jaldi update karna..luv summi xxx


thnks for liking...😊...ladai bhi funny tarike se karte hain, unko uss show 'hass baliye' mein jana chahie tha...kam se kam ladne ka koi to fayda milta😉...ab vaada kiya h, dekho naa tutee...gayab mat hona samjhi naa...love u dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
Heyya Great ff :)) Plz add me to ur pm list :))
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: -purnima-

... Kashish is too much 🤣... my poor sujal 😆😆😆.. kitne ache ache naam mile usse ... Langoor, pipa ..& even from his friend tanker 😆😆😆... it seemed name day for sujal 😆😆😆...

what a terrific start to a happily married life 😆😆😆... i mean first day mein yeh haal hai i wonder if they survive together even for 1 week 😆...

poor sujal... usse pehle nahne bhi nahi diya 😆😆😆... bechara office ke liye late hogaya hoga 😆😆😆

kashish needs all the best 👍🏼.as she wil be all alone as her parents are leaving 😆. ladai karke kahan jayegi 😆😆😆

SK phone par bhi ladte hai 🤣 ...God bless the couple 😆😆.. i mean bad couple 😆😆😆


haan sujal ko to naam mile.kashish ko bhi to sujal ne kam naam nahi diye...haan sabse ankho kick start diya h dono ne apni married life ko😉...1 week mein kahin khaa naa jaye ek dusre ko...kahin haatha-paai naa ho jaye...dono ek dusre par bhaari h dear...your comments were as usual hillrious...loved them
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi

the up is good
toh kashish doesnt wan to go the college as all her collegues will taunt her
aur yeh sahi bhi hai shaadi ke bad he college but sujal reminded her of the pad phera ritual
toh kashish aapne maa se milne ke liye jaate haai aur jaake unse sujal ke baare mein bohot saree buraia karte haai
obviously sujal ko jaante he kitna hai jo usse woh pasand aa jaayege par uske maa bhi sahe haai she have to give time to her new relation
aur har insan mein he aachai hote haai
par kashish she is stubborn
anyways so kashish sujal to remind him that he will have to come to pick her from her maa's house
par yaar kashish aur sujal dono he mujhe laagta haai gaali ke debate competition mein jaana chahaye
kya gaali dete haai dono
wah
anyways dekhte haai aage unke zindage mein kya hota haai
i am loving it
plz cont soon and pm me


thnks 4 likin...college wali baat shai pakdi tune...burai nahi ki.bas langoor kaha 😆...pasand nahi to, pasand karne ki yaa janne ki koshish bhi nhi karti madam...lovely cmmnt...thnks
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: pinky901

nice uup

thy fight like two stupid people and her mama tries to mak her u/s is not looking any worthy here she is in no mood to cease fire ne sooner
hmm finally we cn see sujal smiling and talking cheerully atlst with his buddy and wat a timing boss the way she blabber ouut is rather shocking..thnk god phone was not on speaker..nahi to sujal ki watt to pakki thi fir ek aur tanker khali karna padta
well so he will go to pick her up its gud we cn see 1 more cat fight dere
so kash family is thinkg of settle i us ohhh poor kash but on the other note may be she cn enjoy more as she will not have ny kind of fear and u knwww.wat i mn..oh u r clever n knw wat i mn..
i'm ceasing here only..

thnks dear...dono hi ladaku vimaan h..😆...haan kashish ke saamne to hasne ka mauka hi nahi milta...sahi timing pe ph kia k ne...ohhh haan achcha hua ludspkr pe nhi tha, par kashish itna chikhti h ki loudspkr ki zarurat h kya?😆 khair tanker wali baat zara elaborate karna😊 any kind of fear? kiska? nahi dear ur extra sayanii.u elaborate...i am waiting to know my ans dear...lovely comment

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