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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
hey dear congrats on new ff...

part 1
wow interesting concept...
Sujal Kashish already married...
but Sujal is being very silent rather indifferent to Kashish...
hmm...
wonder why...
thanks for the pm and i think i need not say but still add me to ur new pm list...
cont soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
Hey
Thanks for starting this new FF. Its a very interesting start. You have beautifully narrated all the fears and apprehensions that a bride faces in an arranged marriage...and it is even more difficult when the girl and boy have never meet.
Thanks for the PM...please do add me to your PM list
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23

PART 2

She is welcomed into his one bedroom apartment by his mother.

After the formal ceremonies, she is made to sit inside the slightly decorated bedroom as the guests leave.

Sujal's family was staying over at some other place for the marriage as his apartment was too small too accommodate his big family.

She looks at the clock to see that it is already 1:30 am, but she thought it would be too rude if she would sleep without even meeting him.

She was tired from all the exhausting ceremonies, and also her heavy jewelry and lehenga was adding to her difficulties.

She looks around the place, too find it as a typical bachelor's bad; which was made a bit presentable for the day.

She was sure if she would try to open any of the cupboards, then those rolled up clothes of his would surely fall on her. She chuckles at thought of it.

She looks at the side table, to take a look at the photo frame. It had Sujal's photo in it. She looks closely. He had masculine features, square jaw, tanned complexion, pitch black eyes, dark here, but his features would soften as he would smile; as he was smiling in the picture. He was actually handsome, she thought to herself, quite nice.

She again checked the clock to see the time, an hour had passed.

It was 2.30 am now, but he hadn't come. He was not even in the house. Where was he she wondered.

+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

The morning light falls on her face and she opens her eyes.

She must have fallen asleep while waiting for him.

Her eyes fall on her side, and she witness him sleeping besides her.

He is lying on his stomach and was in deep slumber, and top of it he was shirtless !!!!!

She felt like shouting , OH MY GODDD !!!!!!!!

But she takes a deep breath too calm herself, as she reminds herself that he is her husband now.

So, what ! she doesn't know him even !

She glances at the table clock. Its 9 am.

OH MY !!!!!!!! she thought, she slept till so late !!!!!

If in laws would have been living with her then they would have surely made her life miserable by taunting her. But, the truth was they were not living with her. There was only him with her, and I am sure he doesn't mine, she thinks to herself.

She thought it would be good if she would wake him up, atleast they could introduce themselves.

She is hesitant and confused about how to wake him up.

She presses both her lips and pushes her hair behind her hair.

k-emm...excuse me...!

She pauses for a moment.

k-emm...please wake up

he is still in his deep sleep.

She takes a deep breath.

k-sujal ! Sujal !

when he still doesn't get up then she walks upto him and slightly nudges him.

He grumbles in sleep.

k-please get up ! its 9.30 ! Sujal !

he slowly opens his with difficulty and looks at her.

s-whaa...?

Ewww...he smells of...she thinks to herself.

She frowns hard.

k-were you drunk??????? [she asks in an agitated manner]

she rolls her eyes and gives him a hard look

k-wooow !!!!!! [she says sarcastically]

He gets up.

s-so what? We were partying.

k-partying? Partying? Great !!!!!! and I was waiting !

s-did I ask you to wait? You should have slept. It was silly to wait !

k-don't call me silly !

s-then shut up ! my head is paining, give me some black coffee !

k-why should I?

s-because you are my wife !

k-so? Did I ask you to drink? It was so silly to drink ! Go help yourself ! I think you just needed a trophy wife, but bad news is I am not the one.

s-why do you talk so much? Can't you just shut up?

k-because you irritate me !

s-You irritate me more !

k-really? You should be thankful for getting a wife like me !

s-why? [he asks raising an eyebrow]

k-why? Because I am beautiful, intelligent and smart !

s-you are just pompous !

k-I don't care what do you think, I don't want any relationship with you. I love somebody else !

s-really? Then why didn't you get married to him?

k-i surely would have, but my family didn't agree?

s-why was he unemployed? Or had he become deaf after tolerating your non stop talking? [he laughs at his own joke]

k-ha ha ha, very funny [she mimics him]. He is a doctor. We couldn't get married because he is from different religion, his name is Aamir.

s-oh you were dating Aamir khan? [he chuckles]

k-no ! Aamir ali Qureshi ! and he is not poor like you, living in a one bedroom flat !

s-[he raises his eyebrow] its my choice where I live ! I live here because I don't need a mansion and I am not stupid to buy a huge flat for only myself, when I hardly stay in home. [he says in a serious tone]

k-[she rolls her eyes] I don't wanna listen to your philosophies. I bet you don't even know my name.

s-Kashish Sinha. You are a lecturer in an engineering college.

She looks at him.

k-hmm correct.

He gets up from the bed.

s-by the way, I should get going. I am already late for office !

k-office??????? Tum office jaoge?

s-haan to? Aamir Ali Qureshi to main hoon nahi ki mujhe subah subah uthke hospital yaa clinic jaana pade, hum jaise tuch logon ko office hi jaana padta hai.

k-[she rolls her eyes, she hates his tone] I meant we just got married

s-i know that, thank you for the information [he says sarcastically]

k-i mean humein honeymoon pe jaana chahie, ghumne jaana chahie

s-[he raises an eyebrow] tumhe honeymoon pe jaana hai?

k-Hawai !

s-mujhe bohot kaam hai, and some bog contracts are lined up. Ek-do mahine baad sab nipat jayega to chal lenge. Tab tak finance bhi aa jayega.

k-see you are a miser.

s-foreingn tour pe jaane ke lie paise chahie hote hain, jo ped pe nahi ugte hain, aur planning bhi. Le jaake raaste pe rukwaunga kya?

k-ok fine ! you go to hell ! I am going to my college !

Edited by storywriter - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: spvd

hey dear congrats on new ff...

part 1
wow interesting concept...
Sujal Kashish already married...
but Sujal is being very silent rather indifferent to Kashish...
hmm...
wonder why...
thanks for the pm and i think i need not say but still add me to ur new pm list...
cont soon...


thnaks dear...wonderful comment...very happy to see you here...thanks a lot for liking it...love u dear..i hope in the nxt part u give a more detailed analysis😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Hey

Thanks for starting this new FF. Its a very interesting start. You have beautifully narrated all the fears and apprehensions that a bride faces in an arranged marriage...and it is even more difficult when the girl and boy have never meet.
Thanks for the PM...please do add me to your PM list
continue soon


Thanks for liking it..one thing i wanna say is that...i really loved ur comment and you were a strong contender for star comentor award..dil chune wala comment...but i have away the awards already...but i am sure in coming parts i'l see better comments than this..hai naa?...i loved how you read between the lines and appreciated the effort i made to showcase the dielemma of a newly wed girl...love u dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
@iqbal_neha-thnks

@ecstasy- special welcome to you, as you are my newest reader, hope you like my fic and give your feedback on it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
hi
the up is mildblowing
so kashish is waiting for sujal but suajl he is nowhere
very bad
poor kashish she waited for him so long and finally driffted off to sleep and next day morning
she finds sujal sleeping beside her and he was without shirt hai
but this is new to her to lil bit uncomfortable i can understand
anyways the morning convo is really funny
suajl ka har diagoloue yaar too good
he is practical and have sense of humor too
looking forward to know how kashish handles her new life
and mariage
and suajl love to see him n a roamnctiac and tough avatar too
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
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From the conversation that Sujal Kashish had for the fist time , they really didnt seem as strangers to me . I mean they talked with such a ease it was
fun reading it ...😛
When Kashish said that she loved someone else ,I was like oh no but When she asked that they are not going for honeymoon I was like she is really something to discover more ...😊
The best part was when Sujal comment that she is in love with Amir khan , man he do have a good sense of hummer ...😉
I really liked Kashishs reaction and thinking process when she saw shirtless Sujal sleeping beside her ...😉
And she even agreed that he is actually handsome I meann who doesn't ...😃
And Sujal saying " Aamir Ali Qureshi to main hoon nahi ki mujhe subah subah uthke hospital yaa clinic jaana pade ,hum jaise tuch logon ko office hi jaana padta hai "
Was good one ...😊
All in all the update was fantastic ...👏
I loved reading it ...😊
Waiting for next ...⭐️
Thnx for pm ...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
hahahah sujal you made het wait and you drink 2nd mistake you take panga with newly wedded wife very bad awesome part dear thank you for pm and this part both fight like monkey
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi

the up is mildblowing
so kashish is waiting for sujal but suajl he is nowhere
very bad
poor kashish she waited for him so long and finally driffted off to sleep and next day morning
she finds sujal sleeping beside her and he was without shirt hai
but this is new to her to lil bit uncomfortable i can understand
anyways the morning convo is really funny
suajl ka har diagoloue yaar too good
he is practical and have sense of humor too
looking forward to know how kashish handles her new life
and mariage
and suajl love to see him n a roamnctiac and tough avatar too
plz cont soon and pm me


thnsk 4 liking the ud...thnks 4 liking..and finding it funny..wht do u mean by tough avatar, do clarify. thnks for comment. love u...
Edited by storywriter - 14 years ago

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