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Posted: 14 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Pumpkinn

From the conversation that Sujal Kashish had for the fist time , they really didnt seem as strangers to me . I mean they talked with such a ease it was

fun reading it ...😛
When Kashish said that she loved someone else ,I was like oh no but When she asked that they are not going for honeymoon I was like she is really something to discover more ...😊
The best part was when Sujal comment that she is in love with Amir khan , man he do have a good sense of hummer ...😉
I really liked Kashishs reaction and thinking process when she saw shirtless Sujal sleeping beside her ...😉
And she even agreed that he is actually handsome I meann who doesn't ...😃
And Sujal saying " Aamir Ali Qureshi to main hoon nahi ki mujhe subah subah uthke hospital yaa clinic jaana pade ,hum jaise tuch logon ko office hi jaana padta hai "
Was good one ...😊
All in all the update was fantastic ...👏
I loved reading it ...😊
Waiting for next ...⭐️
Thnx for pm ...😊


wowesttt and awesomest comment !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! love it !!!!!!!!!!!!! thnks for having fun while reading the fic...😉...yeah..the have so much more to discover..waise kashish ko bass Hawai ghumne se matlab tha..haan ji hamare sujal ka kaafi achcha sense of humour h..shock hui bechari shirtless paake..he..he..ab itna handsome pati h to, bolna to padega hi naa...thnks for specifying wht u liked the most..thnks 4 likin it..awesome cmmnt..aise hi cmmnt karte rehna...muaaah
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: monikaseth

hahahah sujal you made het wait and you drink 2nd mistake you take panga with newly wedded wife very bad awesome part dear thank you for pm and this part both fight like monkey



he he he..u called them monkey..i cld actually imagine it😆...yeha panga bhi le liye...aur 1st day mistakes bhi karli...aage dekhenge kya hota h...funny comment...liked it..thnks
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice fic...

Sujal and kashish married and fighting already...

Pls PM me wen u post the next part...

Waiting for more...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
baap re...kashish ka gussa...
really nice and exciting part...kind of a new concept and a different kashish...
and sujal to hamesha hi best hota hai...
vidushi.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
hey
gr88 ff
conti sooon plezzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
a new FF 👏👏 ... dats gud ...
read both the parts together 😆😆😆... the bestest part of this FF 😍 ... SK are married from first part itself ... a big tension of whether SK will meet, when they will meet , when they will marry 😆😆😆... in sab ke baare mein sochne ki zarut nahi hai 😆😆😆...

Loving Sujal 😳😳😳 ...typical sujal characterstics 😆😆😆...a difference that he is not a business tycoon i guess 😆😆😆😆... & is he Suzaaal here too 😉😉😉... hope he doesn't drinks too much 😆😆😆

As 4 the concept i am already love with it 😳😳😳 ... & "Shadi ke baad pyaar hote hote ho hi jata hai " 😆😆😆😆😆...

The only problem in FF wud be how they will fall in love when they are poles apart 😆😆😆& also Kashish loves some1 else ... waise who is Aamir Ali ☺️ 😉😉...

will wait to see ow story progresses 😳😳...continue soon 😊😊... & all the best for new FF 👍🏼

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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
🤗dhasu part ..are fight jo hui ekdum typical dhasu type..👍🏼
chalo ye to acha hai ki ye normal couple hai i mn aam tour pe husband-wife main takqrar 1st night ke baad hi shuru ho jatii fir chahe wjah kuch bhi hoo..ab inke case main 1st ngt to thi na fir wo bhale hi logo se diff ho ...aur fgt bhi to dhasu hui hmm😃
well ye bahut acha hai ki finally..finally ye dono aamne saamne aaye aur jis andaz mai intro hua..haye...tabhi ye sabseee unique couple hia..grt couple ya best couple to her koi hota hai ye hi to ek akle "bad couple 'hai😃😉

To janab ko party ka bahutt shauk hai ..waise ye shauk kabse hua..pehle to kabhi malum nai tha hume..hmm..well idhar kashish wait kar rahi thi ab wo bhi kya kare usse asa karne ki "instruction "jo mili thi mumma se"pyar se rehna"" ☺️ well kehte hai intezar ka fal meetha hota hai aur is intezarr main kashish ko mauka mila sujal ko gaurrr se dekhne ka i mn photo mmain hi parr she admit na ki her hubby is handsum to ek seedi to milgaii..ab dhire dhire aage chali hi jayegi .. 😉hmm..well the way u describe his living style it depicts sumwat his daily life as he is enjoying his life and his bachelorhood aur uske familly bhi nai thi to abtak azad panchi the janab ab unhe panchi se sher banna padega
well so soon its morning here and kashish wakes up first..hmm is she typical bride ...😉😆
well the way she thgt ki sas hoti to zindagi bhar tane detii and he dont mind kya confidence hai boss hubby ko lekar..hmm not baddd😃
well the way she woke him up is actuallyyy sooo cuteee at very first time..a little bit hesitation ahh luvly..and yeah he actually looking delicious without shirt..are uske naii apni baat ki maine...☺️
hmm and the topic thy chose to fight abt is jus sooo typical..omg..u are drunk,partying and i'm waiting...silly to wait, dont call me silly..hahaha🤣🤣
well actuually u knw wat i think thy dont hav ny reason to fight abt but ab pyar to inhe abhi kkarne ki izzajat nai hai are aapne nai di hai na abhi inhe wo permission to bechare kuch to karenge na to bas thy chose dis way..oh so she knws she is beautiful and smart wel i guess this time i also think abhi tak k she is smart..kitni cleverly she said she is lin uv with dr.and he is not like u live in 1 bedroom house and most of all..hume honeymoon pe jana chahiye as we r nwly wedded very well said...cleverly..and yes hw fast is she..she also declares she want to go for hawaii.well dis time i think kashish is smart and clever unlike previous1 😎😍
and sujal ji wo bechare ek dum bolti band hogai unki waise not different kash ke saamne he alwys behave like this but yr he improves his sense of humour much more then before and yeah bahut maza aane wala hai in dono ki happening but not so happening fight dekhene main😍
hmm so mam yaha kuch sensible hai as she is a lecturer and knws wat is rgt for her and thats y she dont get married with dr..well i having a feeling abt sum smartness and cleverness here alsoo...lets c
so janab kafiii practical hai and not so fond of fantasy n all..he knws it all wat is needed and wat time is suitable for him or them to go and he knws hw to manage everythg exceptt his luv life and wife hmm
well its seems interesting and hillarious with lots of masala..😃

oohh godd see jaise in ke paass fgt karne ko kuch nai tha waise mere pass bhi likhne ko kuch nai tha aur inhi ki tarah faltu main bahutt kuch likh diya ab ye teri headachejus like managing sk and their fgts nd life... ..and i cnt help myself..i knw sensible likhna hota hai but u knw me..hope u dont mind dis time...😳

har koi pagal samjhe ga mujhe ..😕

Edited by pinky901 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38

hmmm...hum zara out of town kya gaye...apne nayi fic bhi start kar di...aur do parts bhi hogaye...jab ki hume sirf ek hi pm mila tha...but hum bhi wo hai...jise dur se bhi khushboo ajati hai 😆😆😆

ab what to say about the fic...i was bowled over by the first part...it was perfectly described...arranged marriage... she didnt even know the guy...milna chodo phone tak nahi kiya kabhi...common problem 😆😆...apne hi attitude me mast hai...friends and partying...are ullu...shadi ki party de raha hai...jisse shadi kiya hai...use to ab tak dekha tak nahi...acha ki kashish ne ...she gave him a dose right in the morning...but even she is not less...but both were equally nervous too seems like...ghussa kam...nervousness me zyada bol rahe the 😛...sujal wants to get dominating on day1 itself...but she answered him right...dono barabar hai...title justified right here 😆...aur ye shock...she 'loved' sum1 else...amir ali qureshi...ohh...mujhe bhi bohot pasand hai..mad parents...(again common problem 😆)...itne ache ladke ko reject kar diya...only for religion sake..is stupid ke liye...but may be God knew better...these two are perfect for each other...😆
its gonna be fun i guess...are you planning for a comedy? 😆...will work i guess...but dear...sab kuch side par...after PKR...(if m nt wrong)...a fic from you finally on marriage...so plz...comedy n all side par...thodi romantic yar...😳...after all neelu magic hona chahiye..😳
aur jaldi jaldi cont karna...last fic jaise nahi...warna me sabko bol dungi...ki ur free now...final exams over hogye...nahi bolu na? to jaldi cont kar..😳😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey neelu sweetheart!! first of all congrats on ure new ff..i am really happy to see a new concept from you..just want to say loveeed the first 2 parts..they were simply great..its a different concept..and in this..Sujal and Kashish are already married...sounds really interestng..i am looking forward to reading the future parts to see what happens..and hw there relationship progresses..hoping for some romantic moments and our main leads falling in love..gr88 start..keep it up..luv summi xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
part 2
wow what a start of first morning...
Sujal came back DRUNK?
thats so unfair...
cont soon dear...

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