***Bad Couple*** (sk ff) (pg67 prt10) - Page 46

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Posted: 13 years ago
As i promised i'm here to comment...so Kashish is still worried bcoz Sujal is still missing...hope he's fine...hmmm,i think he's busy in other works...ok,now I'm predicting things..great!!!
poor girl suffering so much...first with her bad luck n now with her hubby missing...hope she doesn't loose herself completely again...boy,come back fast,your wife needs you!!
Totally forgot about Aamir...wonder what's going to happen next??
Nice chapter...waiting for the next one!!!
PS- I thought about it before n still wonder why you chose the name 'Aamir' for the that character *hint*😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 31

It's four in the morning and the morning Sun had started to raise his head. Kashish's face was dug in the pillow; her tears were dried as she had dozed off due to exhaustion. Her heart shakes her up as she hears the signature three knocks and those words...his voice saying 'Kashish it's me...Sujal...darwaza kholo'. She jumps up and runs to opens the door. She fumbles with the lock in her happy haste and opens the door.

She takes a look at him and in an instant impulse pines to him; tightly holding him close to her. She rests her head on his chest...yes yes...it was him...it was his smell. First time she realized that she found his smell so unique...she realized how much she loved his smell...how much she ached or it. She shuts her eyes tightly as she could loosing herself in the feeling...the feeling of security...feeling like a lost child who had found a guardian.

Sujal looks down at his wife who was holding him tightly. He is perplexed he is confused. More than the horrific incident this had shocked him, his body felt numb. He didn't know what to do. His hands urged to hold her close but his brain argued against it He lifts his hand to sooth her but stops mid way and bunches it into a fist. He does not want to scare her with his touch.

'Kahan chale gaye the tum. Jaante ho kitna pareshaan ho gait hi main.'

Kashish says to his chest while tightly shutting her eyes and clasping herself in his embrace.

'Maine tumhe kitni baar phone kya, wo bhi nahi laga, and then I called your friend too. Tv par news dekhi to tumhe dhundne wahan bhi gayi. Tum wahan bhi nahi mile. Aise karta hai kya koi, ek phone hi kar dete'

'Tum..akele?...mujhe dhundne...tum' Sujal is in an awe at her courage; courage that she demonstrated for finding him. Him...his heart takes a happy leap and he wanted to hug her tight, so that even air wouldn't come in between them. But his reasons got better of him instead he mutters 'Wo...mobile networks band the'

She lifts her head and looks up into his face 'Tum thik ho?'

He nods gazing into her watery eyes. 'I was given first aid'. Her eyes fall on his bandaged forehead with his words. 'I was there for a meeting' He says answering the question lingering in her eyes 'It happened suddenly and few died, few were injured. Guess was lucky. Government officials took us to a protected area. That's why I couldn't call and was late. I am sorry'

Tears roll down her cheeks as she imagines what could have happened. She is unable to stop her sobs and digs her face again close to his masculine chest. His 'sorry' was tearing her heart off all the bottled up emotions.

'Kashish...Kashish, don't cry. Everything is fine...hush...'

His hands finally touch her head and he hats patting her head to calm her down

'Tum...tumhe kuch ho jaata to...' She blabbers in between her sobs

'Kuch nahi hua hai, main thik hoon naa. Bolo, tumne khana khaya?'

She shakes her head causing her lips to brush on his chest

'Nahi khaya? Davai li?'

She shakes head again 'Tum pagal-vagal ho kya? Tumhara koi ata-pata nahi hai aur main sab gadhdhe mein dalke khana khaloon?'

He couldn't help a smile at this and silently keeps patting her head as she is in his embrace. Treasuring the time he is able to spend with her. After a while he speaks up 'Abhi khana khayein?'

'Uhmm...thodi der baad' She didn't want to get away from the comfortable cosy feeling

He keeps on patting her head for some time while she is in the same position. He realizes that she has drifted into a comfortable slumber while looks at her peaceful sleeping face. She has never felt so comfortable or so much at ease ever before.

Sujal picks her up in his arms and takes her to the bedroom laying her on the bed comfortably. She also thinks of getting some sleep and goes to sleep besides her finally deciding on skipping the dinner.

Edited by storywriter - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow this part was amazing loved the security she felt in sujal arms gr8 part cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
good to see sujal back 😃😃 hope kashish is more than happy now 😃😃...
sujal seems impressed by his courage 😃😃 girl has been brave through all this 😃😃
hope this is the new beginning for them 😃😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
woww
nice update
finally Sujal Lauta, woh to aayega yeh to main janti thi,
lekin sab se baadi baat Kashish normal ho rahi hai
but sujal abhi bhi cautious hai, Kashish ko le kar
but Kashish guilt feeling ke saath jee rahi hai, jisse sirf Sujal hi dur kar sakta hai.
beautifully written
great going
plz continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 67
nice part...
glad Sujal is back safe and fine...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Such a beautiful part...Sujal is back n i was right that he's fine
Kashish is sooo happy to finally see her hubby n Sujal is so shocked watching his wife so relieved to know that he's okay and...she hugged him,yay
Sujal is such a sweetheart...still hesitates to hug her back only because he don't want her to get scared.
I can clearly see them hugging each other...lovely couple😳
She don't want to leave him n just want to stay in his arms?? awww!
it can't get any fluffier than this!!!
Who wants food when you are full of love😆
LOVED IT SO MUCH...waiting for the next one.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey..I have posted my new fic 'Love Thy Neighbor'...Please do read it and and comment on it jst like you did for this fic...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/61539596
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Posted: 12 years ago
LIST PLUS UPDATE

Hi dear...

I am gonna update the pm list for all my fics. Please do respond if you want notification for update.

The fics including links those I am gonna continue are-

Love They Neighbor-

Bad Couple-

Jaded Prince-

Any feedback and comments are most welcome...will be waiting for your response...tc

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