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Posted: 12 years ago
part 25
OMG honestly these people have lost it...
Kashish had an affair with a married man and shes behaving as if shes too naive...
i dint understand this...
they are in a live in relationship right?
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 25
OMG honestly these people have lost it...
Kashish had an affair with a married man and shes behaving as if shes too naive...
i dint understand this...
they are in a live in relationship right?
cont soon...


Cm on dear, hvin an affr dsnt mk her a s**t...shez hvin live in with whm?...shz lng ovr with boss aft her suicide attpt...n abt this wildness...yes shz naive
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART 26

s-huh? b****

k- What?!

He puts away the phone nd takes another swig

k-Tum gali kisse de rahe ho?!

Kashishgrabs the drink out of his hand, usse laga ki usko ko kuch ulta seedha keh raha hai

Sujal turns his head drunkly and looks at her with his red intoxicated eyes

She looks angrily at him

s-Huh?...[Starts laughing drunkly..] K..Kashhh...-hi-c...Kash...Kazzz

k-Are you ok?

Kashish asks

s-Shhh...shhh

k- Huh? Chupp kyun kara rahe ho?

He walks his two fingers on the table towards her

She looks down at his hand.. ki ye kya naya game hai

Phir Kashish ko bhi lagta hai ki at least piine se to better hi hai, wo bhi 2 ungli rakh deti hai tapping one slightly in waiting gesture

He grabs her hand

k- Kya? Chodo haath mera..

She tries to pull away her hand...par otna bhi try nai kar rahi

s-Shhh shhh

Puts his finger on her lips

She is all quite, she even stops trying to pull hand away

s-Shhh bo..boht..bohot...boltzi..ho...bohot-hic-

k- Tum bhi bohot pii rahe ho na.. just giving you competition..

She says iwith a wistful smile dheere se pulling away her hand out of his grip..

He smirks

s-tum...tumhari wajah se...tumhari..

k-kya?!! Kyun?! Maine kab kha piina ko?

s-Muj..mujhe...do..do cheezein ..do se sukoon..milta h...tum..aur ek..al..alcohol...tum zo...milti nhi..kya karu...peeni...padti h

k- I. main... I am with you.. nahi hoon kya...

s-Nah ! Nah !

Againn his drunk laughter

s-Khuz ko...mere hawale..karzo

k-Sujal seriouly.. piikar naa pata nahi kya kya bolte ho..

Then she smiles bada wala at least aaj Italian to nai bol raha lekin.. Thank God

k-Tumne p rakhi hai, tumhare hawale kyun karun.. jiss sin sober hoge uss din whatever you say

s-What..whateve..? huh?

k- Huh exactly. Ab chalo yahan se.. bohot pii li. Tumhe bathroom mein band karna chahiye paani ke alawa kuch nahi milega piine ko

Kashish pakadkar takes him outside baki sab ko bhi bahar nikaalti hai wahan se, chapad chapd daante hue all the time... Ria aur Zach ko keh deti hai nahi chale to police aa jaegi, Raj ke liye..."fire " kaam karta hai, Sujal ko support khud hi kar diya... aas paa thoda gurad se bhi keh diya ki thodi help kar do

Sujal aur Raj to ek saath ek dusre ko pakadke do dost stagger kar rahe hain singing a drunk song and with huge bottles in their hands

Raj-Pata..hsi..bey...s****

s-Huh?

Kashish badi walsi limo type ki taxi hire karti hai.. sab usme aa jaate hain

Raj and Sujal take another swig

Raj-Tu..tu naa.,..tu s**** devdas hai aur..aur..mai na...-hic...chunnilal

Kashish dono ko dekhti hai ki kya bakwas kar rahe hain..Sujal ko to devdas aur chunni lal pata bhi nahi hoga ki kaun hai

Sab gadi mei bhare hue hain jab ye baat ho rahi hain... Ria and Zach making out on side...opposite seat mein Sujal beeche mein, Kashish khidki ke bahar dekh rahi hai and Raj bakwas. kar raha hai

s- Huh?

r-Avveyyy devdasss sheeshe se sheesha takrayeee

Apni bottle se Sujal ko pila deta hai

s- Cheers?

Sujal bhi apni bpttle Raj ko offer karta hai pilata hai kuch kuch girata hai

Kashish poora ignore kar rai hai

r-Suzzal..yar..tu..tu..mera..dozt nhi...bhai hai...bhaiii h tu meraaa

Raj hugs Sujal

s-Fratello!!![Brother!!!!]

Sujal yells and hugs Raj back

Kashish ko lagta hai gay ho gaye dono talli hoke

They reach

k- Ria tum Zach ke yahan jao

Raj crawls out

Sujal struggles to hold his weight but falls down

Kashish pakad leti hai bhag ke

s-Caduto[fell]...sono caduto...[I fell]

He blabbers laughing drunkly

k- Piyo aur piyo. Jab thobda kharab hoga tab hi akkal ayegi

s-Sono caduto... Kazzz

He keeps on laughing

k-Tum mujhe thanks bolne ka bajaye kya bakwas keh rahe ho Italian mein? Main hi pagal hoon, tumhari tension leti rehti hoon

s-Il mio Kazzz [My Kazzz]

Sujal is glaring at Kashish drunkly

k- Ilmio kyo hota hai?

Sujal phir uthte hue gir gaya, abki baar baith gaya goes to take another swig par bottle to khatam

Kashish uthane ki koshish karti hai

Sujal bottle jhatak raha hai kahin se nikal jaaye

s-I WANT MORE DRRRINKKK

k- SHUTT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!

s-BEREEE [DRINKKK]

k- Sujal chup!

s-KAZZZ

k-Khade ho!

She tries to pull him up

s-Kazzz

He shakes his head vigorously

k-Sujal please khade hone ki try karo...

She says sweetly...trying everything anger, daant , laad...

s-Khade????? ...hic-khaaa..khade..???? huh?

Sujal ki hindi idhar udhar ho gai piike

k-Stand? Stand up.. please...

He shakes his head with drunk wali smile

k- Please. For me?

s-Love ...love..me...amore [Love]

Kashish nods ki haan haan zarur kyun nahi whatever gets him to his room

s-Loveee meee

k- Of course I do... warna yahan thod hoti tumhare saath

s-Loveee...love me nowww nowww ...hic-

k-Now? What do you mean.. I do love you...what else? C'mon please stand up lets go .. please

s- Kizz me...kizz me baby

Kashish ko lag raha hai ki usko Crystal samajh raha hoga..

k- If you stand up and got to your room

Sujal phir uthte he knees pe gir saa jaata hai

Kashsih thodi aur try karti hai.. nahi utha to help bula kar laegi, aisa bahar natak achha nahi lagta.. and she knows ki agar Sujal sober hota to usse bhi bahar humiliation hoti

s-Kazzz

He hugs her tight

Kashish pe weight rakh ke jaise taise khada hota hai

She stokes his hair..

k-Sujal chalo na yahan se ...

Dono girte padte phochte hain Sujal ke room tak ..

Raj accidently locks the room andar se aur so gaya

Kashish Raj ka door baja rahi hai with full might par koi response nahi..

k- Uff ab isse kya hua..

She tries even calling him but he is drunk like dead to the world

Kashish looks at Sujals

k-Kahan jaoge ab? Mere saath aaoge?

She looks at him jaise to bache ko indulge kari rahi ho

Sujal gives his drunk wali pyaari si smile

k- Kya karoon main tumhara?

s-Kazzz...il mio Kazzz [My Kazzz]

Points at her

k-Yah yah.. il mio Sujal.. jo bhi

Wapas se she takes his weight and somehow manages to drag him to he rroom

s-Bello Kazzz [Beautiful Kazzz]

Kashish gate holkar andar lati hai

k-Bello??

s-Piuttosto Kazzz [Pretty Kazzz]

Kashish bechari soch rahi hai ki dictionary kahan se milegi Vegas mei

s-Il mio Kazzz...kazzz...Suzal e Kazzz

k-Yes yes Sujal il mio Kashish.. and Kashish il mio Sujal.. right?

Kashish leta deti hai bed par Sujal ko, takes off his shoes and socks...

Sjal uth jaata hai...roaming aimlessly in the room..it's effect of pill working on him

Kashish thak haar kar sofe par baith jati hai.. looking wearily at Sujal

He opens the mini bar and takes out another bottle

k- oh Sujal..please not anymore.. so jao naa thodi der.. kal pii lena..

He walks to her and sits near her feet keeping his head on her lap

s-Kazzz-hic-Kazzz-hic-

k-Sujal...

s--hic-

She keeps her hand on his cheek stroking his cheek

s--hic-

He kisses her palm

She is a bit shocked but happy also embarrassed

She thinks it's some Italian French thing all the kissing and complimenting...

He grabs her hand, opens her palm and puts his hand under her

Pours the liquor on her palm and starts licking and sucking her hand

Ab Kashish kya kare...she is enjoying all the sensations it is bringing her.. but chahti bi nahi ki Sujal aur piye

s-You..you..-hic-...you..make..me..drunkkk...you...you..Kazzz-hic-

k- Haan sab meri hi galti hai

Edited by storywriter - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
My poor sujal gaya kaam se 😆😆😆...
Kashish darling seriously in need of french dictionary 😆😆😆...or better Sujal shud start giving her classes teaching her french 😆😆😆...

yday she in his room today he 😆😆😆 wonder how he will react in morning 😆😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
part 26
nice part...
all are so lost in the nasha...
only Kashish is sober...
poor her...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART 27

He grabs her hand, opens her palm and puts his hand under her

Pours the liquor on her palm and starts licking and sucking her hand

Ab Kashish kya kare...she is enjoying all the sensations it is bringing her.. but chahti bi nahi ki Sujal aur piye

s-You..you..-hic-...you..make..me..drunkkk...you...you..Kazzz-hic-

k- Haan sab meri hi galti hai

She says... finally morality winning

She takes he hand away and tries to take the drink out of his hand

s-Kazzz...kiss me...kiss me...I..I am drunkkk-hic-...bacio [kiss]

k- Yes sure you are drunk. I'll kiss you when you are sober.. you stink

s-Kizzz

k-No kiss. No il mi, no bachio till you are drunk

s-Voglio fare l'amore con u [I want to make love with you] Kazzz pleaseee Kazzz

Kashish is like huh ?!! kya!!!KYA!! par kuch kehti nahi

k- No..you are drunk; that's your punishment for drinking

s-Suzzzal likez..Kazzz

He again keeps his head on her lap

s-Likezzz her a lorrr -hic -really likez

She strokes his hair..

k-If that is so then why don't you ever listen to me? You don;t do anything for the person you like, you don't like me you are just saying that...

s-Suzaal -hic- Suzaal is lonely..needs..Kazzz...Kazzz

k-Kashish wlil be with Sujal when he acts properly like a gentle man...

Dil par pathar rakh kar she says

Sujal ankhein band kar leta hai murmuring..Kazz..Kazzz

Kashish sehla sehla kar sula dete hai ... beech mein humming some tune.. to help him sleep aur baalon mein hath pher pher ke..

Thodi der to baithti hai waise hi lekin Sujal ka sarr bhi bhari hai, pair so gaye Kashish ke

So kafi mehnat ki jaati hai uthne mein bina disturb kiye

Sujal ke sarr ke neeche takiya rakha, chaadar udaaya usse, takes off his watch and wallet, jaakar saari drinks ki bottle chupa deti ha, agra khali kar di to pay karna pad jayega.. Kashish ko aise bekaar ke kharche pasand nahi

Kashish ko pata hai ki chupaane se bhi Sujal rukega nahi, kahin aur hake pii lega par kam se kam jav tak uske kamre mein hoga tab tak to nahi piyega naa

Kashish ne itna bhi nahi socha ki Sujal ke pine ka ye faida hai ki wo Crystal ke pass nahi jaata...par Kashish nadaan hai itna socha kahan

Ab agli subah

Ria aati hai wapas kamre mein

Sujal to wahin pada hua hai sofe pe

Kashish bed pe soyi hui thi

Ria aake key se door kholti hai zor se awaaz karke

Kashish uth jati hai awaaz se-

k-Hai kaun what?

Looking idhar udhaur...

Ria is looking at Sujal

k- oh tum aa gai

Ria-oh he was with you.

k-- haan Kal Raj ne gate andar se lock kiya aur khola hi nahi

Ria-I guess, you two should shift together

k- What? Tum bhi piikar bakwas kar lo, sab to wiase hi bakwas karte rehte hain

ria-What did I say? He is always Kazz Kazz. I am with Zach. Ypu two can pair up

Kashish uh jaati hai, kapde nikalti hai nahane dhone frsh hone ko

Ria-Have fun with him, usse bhi kyun sukha rakh rahi hai

k- Please Ria.. I don't.. he isn't ...don't be crude... main aise hi kisi ke bhi saath... ek baar galti kar chuki hoon phir se bas kise 2nd motive ke lie kisi ke saath kuch nahi karungi and waise bhi Sujal responsible type ka ladka hai... he would feel too responsible if anything happens.. main nahi chahti ki jo friendship hai wo bhi tut jaaye

Ria-You told me you like him

k- Like karna alga hai.. I like him and I don't want to lose him because of some silly thing or senseless fling

r-You can date him

k- Agar koi sober ho to kuch ho...

She says getting irritated and frustrated... jaise uska man nahi karta kya... Sujal to saare open signal deraha hai.. par Kashish to drunk nahi hai naa.. nahi keh saki ki main nashe mein thi to maine kiss kar diya.

r-Ask him for a date and you know...he is sooo cute when he is drunk

k- Tum 1 ko choose nahi kar sakti ho kya ... seriously Ria leave him alone now.. you had your chance and you blew it

r-Can't I admire a good looking man?

Kashish wants to say not Sujal...but only says

k- I am against shameless ogling. Main jaa rahi hoon nahane . Stay away from him!

Kashish says frowning and going into the bathroom..

Ria shrugs

Kashish jaldi se 15-20 min mein sab karke bahar aa jaati hai

Ria bed pe so gai thi

Kashish ke baal se cheetein Sujal par padti hain

He opens his eyes

Kashish apna breakfast order kar rahi hoti hai phone par ek hath se apne baal jhatakte hue.. seedhe karte hue...usse to pata hi nahi ki Sujal par cheetein aa rahi hain

Sujal straightens up and stretches himself

Kashish phone rakh kar turns to dekha ki Sujal uth gaya

k- oh tum uth gaye, good! [she smiles] Tea?coffee? :)

s-Tea

Kashish order kar deti hai

s-Kash

k- Hmm?

s-Come here

Kashish jaati hai Sujal ke paas

k- Kya hau? Kaise ho? Do you have a hang over? Pata hai kitni pii leihi ka-

He hugs her...resting his chin on her shoulder snuggling around her hair a bit

Kashish chup.. kuch 10 seconds ke liye

He kisses her cheek...

s-Thanks..you are the best

Kashish is shocked into silence

k- uh.. huh.. ahem. hm.. ohh okkk...thanks I guess...I.. tum brush kar lo

She moes away..

Breakfast bhi aa jata hai to Kashish laga deti hai sab table par

Sujal gets up and looks at himself in mirror

s-Man! Not much hangover...wonder pill [He thinks to himself]

Sujal ko pasand aa gai goli.. and about thankin Kashish wo uska do din khayal rakhne ke liye kiya as Kashish naa hoti to wo surely gutter mein hi pada hota

He knows ki chapad chapad ke piche she cares and takes care no matter kitna bhi soche ki ab ignore karegi...he knows islie islie to chpad chapad sehta h warna kab ka suna deta, F*** off keh deta, vaffanculo...in Italian..

Bathroom mein Sujal brush karne gaya to realize hua ki uska toothbrush to doosre room mein hai

Kashish ne breakfast laga diya to dekha ki Sujal brush karte karte bahar aa gaya

k- Tumhari chai aa gai.. tum kuch MERA BRUSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ewww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SUJAAALLL!!!!

He looks at her innocently...jaise wo to bhola bhala bachcha hai

s-Huh? What?

k- Tum mera tooth brush kyun use kar rahe ho!!

s-Well..to brush my teeth

She marches to him taking the brush out of his mouth

k-Mera hai!!!

Sujal jaake dhoke aata hai mooh..showing his teeth

k-Apna use karo.. nahi hai to hotel ka use karo, nahi hai to apni ungi use karo

Kashish ke haath mein Sujal ka saliva aur paste laga hua brush

k-eww ...

Kashish jaaakr hath dhoti hai ar brush bhi...

Sujal mand mand muskura raha hai

k- Dimag to sharaab ki bottle mei doob gaya hai tumahra..

s-WellIi got to taste your mouth

Sujal bade aaram se tea leke keh deta hai

Kashish gaps...muh khul gaya Kashish ka ki kya bawkas kar raha hai in somewhat sober mode

k-I...you... tum... Sujal ye...-tum...tum mujhe naya brush dilaoge bass!

He nods

s-But you can also use mine

Kashish narrows her eyes

k-No, thank you. I don't like tasting alcohol or its remains...

s-Vome on...my mouth doesn't taste bad

k-Alcohol does

s-Or you can enjoy the taste directly

He smiles

k-No, I don't want the additional smell too

She gives him a plastic mocking smile

Sujal hasne lag jaata hai, he loves teasing her

Kashish is all flustered and slightly red... ab usse lag raha hai ki isse achha to drunk Sujal ke sath hi bakwas kar le at least then he doesn't embarrass her too much

s-Care for a walk Kash?

Kashish nods

k-Sure

He holds her hand

s-Come

Kahsish chal padti hai, happy holding hands with him

They go to the pool side, wahan jahan pehle din gaye the

Sujal bhi aage badke puts his arm around her shoulder

Kashish ek bar to dekhti hai ki isse kya hua, phir she also shrug ki kath rakhne mein kya hai..

So she put her hand around his waist

Uss pool ka haal aaj bhi uss din jaisa hi hai

Sujal jaake phir pool ke paani mein pair duboke baith jaat hai

Kashish bhi baith jaati hai

k- Aaj hum log kahan jayenge?

He looks Kashish

s-Wherever you say

Sujal ki ankhein intensely Kashish ko dekh rahi hain

k- Mai kya bolun.. mujhe to kuch samjh hi nahi aata, itni mushkil se kal koi jagah dhoondi socha ki kuch aacha aur naya dekhne ko milga.. pata chal strip show hai...sab aisa hi hai yahan Vegas mein kuch bhi karlo..

He chuckles seeing her pout unconsciously

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Posted: 12 years ago
part 25
chalo finally sab bewde logo ne drug le li hai taki woh log guttar main naa pade hue mile
seriously yeh log kuch zyada hi drunk hai
ab dance ki baari, Kashish ka idea hai
par yeh kya????strip dance
ek to sab ke sab bewde upar se aisa hot dance
Sujal ko lagta hai woh pee kar zyada hot ho jaata hai, arre no darling, tum sober hi bohut acche lagte ho
Crystal ne Sujal ke drunk hone ke wajah se mana kar diya
yeppy
nice update
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 26
Kashish ko immediately Italian sikhna parega
lekin ek baat hai Sujal clearly signal de raha hai Kashish ko ki woh kya chahta hai.
pyaar kitna karta hai pata nahin, par woh chiz zaroor karna chahta hai.
Kashish kya itni naa samajh hai??? yaa phir samajh kar bhi ignore kar rahi hai.
Sujal aur Raj Devdas Chunilal, woww, yeh wala sach main brillaint hai Neelu
Raj ne door bandh kiya
now Sujal in Kashish 's room
last part kaafi hot tha
but now i think seriously kashish ko koi decision lena parega
Sujal out of control ho raha hai.
good one
nice part.
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part 27
thank God, ki sujal ne i want to make love with u wala line Italian main bola, warna peetta
Kashish Sujal ka sihnal samajh raha hai, par koi decision nahin le paa rahi hai,
lagta hai, first time garbaad hone ke baad woh aur ek heart break afford nahin kar sakti.
Ria ne accha kiya, Sujal wala line chod diya
woh samajh gaayi kuch nahin hoga yaha, intelligent girl
ab Kashish ne bhi usse mana kar diya Sujal se dur raho.
finally subah hoti hai, Thank God Sujal ne uth kar yeh nahin kaha I want drink, tea liya
yeh magic pill kaam kar gaayi
not much hangover, infact sober
Kashish ki brush use kar li usne, yaha par bhi Sujal ne clear indication diya, sober halat main
not in italian, in English
but yes, next yeh log kaha jaate hai dekhna parega in wild Vegas
nice part
beautifully written
waiting for the next
by the way Neelu, u know Italian???? if no, then brillaint job.itna research, well done dear.main bhi kuch Italian word sikh rahi hoon. Thanks.

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