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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved the update...
pl cont soon
when will maan get to know the truth
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
nice part...hope dev doesn't find her soon...when will maan know the truth about geet ?
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He drove the car silently

He saw her

Geet:what 's wrong with u

As she about to reply

There are lot of people………………………at the construction site

Two people are fighting…………….

He parked the car.

On e is the site manage rand other person is a union person.

Regarding working hours……………

As maan………………..stepped in.

The union person start screaming loud………………………

Maan gave his famous arroagant look at the person..

Geet in the mean time……………………….looking at the people.

She has no idea why maan brought her to this place

She wanted to run away from the office.

As she listened regarding……………………Mumbai..

She is terrified.

She cannot go back to the place…………………………….

As she is need to be diverted….she looked at the crowd…………..

The union person:oh mr king maker…………………..had finally arrived look what ur manager.is trying to do with our innocent workers…….

He is over –working them…………..

She is surprised with the person 's wide mouth he is talking to Maan singh khurana in that voice.

She can see ,,,,,,,,,,,maan arms and jaws are tightened…………

He looked at the manager…….

Manager:no sir..the person is trying to divert our workers attention……………..

Listen I don't want any mess here…………………..

I want the problem to be solved………with in 15 minutes

And now I don't any conversation nor from the manager nor from the union …………..manager……………………

I want from the workers……………….

Geet shocked to listen the maan's words.

She never thought he is so sensible……

One of workers.told that they are manipulated…

And they will not be any problem right now……….

And another instance………………..and one more things

Even Im revised all the wages ……to double.

with this he took next step…………………………..

towards the car….

He drove back…………to his office……………………..

He want to ask……….geet regarding the upset.matter………………….

But she is disturbed………

His mind lingering…………on the thoughts.

Suddenly the car broke down……………

She came out of the thoughts and looked at him,,,,,,,,,,,

I think the car broke u sit here..i will see to it.

He quickly got down.and check for the radiator………….

It is so hot……………………………….he looked for th e bottle…….

He asked.geet get the bottle……..

Geet handover the bottle..

He open his coat. And folded his sleeves.

She looked at his broad shoulders…………………………..

She looked at him……how many faces this person has..

With out knowing she put hand on the bonnaat……….and winced in pain due to heat.

Geet where is your mind……………………………

And he took his hanky and tie in her hand………and tied up there……………

She looked at the person

An authorative voice when he speaks with his workers………….

A firm when he go for work……………………

She is still looking at him…………….

On the other hand……………………..

Maan is worried about geet's behaiour

But his instinct told that there is something weird happened In Mumbai…………..so that the reason………………….

He is in thoughts……………………………………..

At that time he dropped her to the bus stop……………………………………….

As he returned to his mansion…………………

He turned to find cell…………it is geet's\

He took into his hand.to find wallpaper picture of a man and two girls……………………………

One is geet.and other is………………….a girl is simple beautiful………and the man is like father of both………………………………….

He smiled.and took it to his room…………………..

As it is wall paper setting……………………..

The second picuture is the lady with two kids.

He remembered the two kids at the DPS………………..

And another change………………………

Geet with the two kids………………………………………

He smiled.as the boy resembles the lady in the snap……………………………….

He smiled and place It on the table.

Every body shocked to find his boss smiling seeing at the phone…………………

He went to change

As he put the cell on table.

It slipped…………..and button clicked………….

It is the phone gifted by misha and group…………….…

He checked for recent calls………..

It is voice mail box

At that time…………a call……………………it is from misha

M:hai..geet baby how are u ………….everything is fine………….

And haa………I just call u totell uon e thing .that moron…had arranged some detectives for u………………

And even they came to our college…….and don't worry I priya and kabir managed…here……….and ………………………..haa…………u know na they didn't have that brain to catch me…………..ok.how ar e ur prince and princess…….are they fine………………………………even I want to come delhi yaar……….but not possible…………………….i need to look after the detective group which is after u…………

And don't worry ur in safe place……………sharma family are very good…………….accchee types………………….

And don't worry angel…………….i will catch u later..my dumbo sister is waiting for me.u know na…….my sis panchi.changes her boy friends as her dresses……….and sometimes they mess………..with her…….and being a devil sister I need to rescue her…………………………….

And haa.what about ur hot boss………………………..don't say he even look at u…………u know na…ur the such a beauty……that no ever cannot take eyes from u…………………….

And one more thing………..i learned about ur boss….he is hot DD….

He smiled to the teenager comment……… I know yaar ur still thinking about ur moron……………………leave it yaar……….first concentrate on ……………your boss right now……..bye………………

If any competitor…..just give me a call.i will come and set right that witch…………………………………………

Ok I will catch u later……………………….

He smiled…….

And cut the phone….

Geet what a circle………

Who is this moron

I think geet is sure in problem.what it is

Nee dto find out fast

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Posted: 14 years ago
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great part...hope maan learns about dev fast then only he can help her
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
loved the update...
hope maan finds it out soon...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved the update ..hope Maan finds it out soon


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Next day

Morning………………..

Chandu and other head servants…are running…………….

As fast as they could.

It is time 8 0 clock………………..

And everyone was running……………..at that time……………

As it is time for the lion of the home to have his breakfast

But today he didn't come out of his room.

Dadimaa came out and shocked to find ……

That mr perfectionist is late…….

She hurriedly went to his room to find……his grandson still on his bed…………………………….

She went near to him…….to find shocked.to see the scene

His grand son is smiling……………………………

A cute smile………………

Such a cutee pie.she used to love it when he used to smile………

She felt like she is a 20 yrs teenager………………………….again..seeing his grandson smiling.

And noticed the phone…………………….which he is holding like a treasure donot want to leave it…

She try to took.but failed……………………

She smiled….there must be something on that phone which making his grand son….smile.

May be girl photo.she is in verge of doing typical bhangra.but stopped…but god what ever the reason……………………………….

The person make my grandson.happy..if it is agirl.make sure u make her my grandson…………….s wife……………………….my wish will be fulfilled………………

She is happy and she came out a dancing pose.

Which again shocked by servants…

Some on them literally fall on ground………………..

Maan woke up………………………..

He looked at the photo…………………………..and smiled again.

And jumped to look at the time

Mr msk late…………

Oh no…..

This girl driving him insane………………..

And went to washroom………………………………….

Came out to find geet smiling……………………and serving him at the breakfast table….

Where he smiled……………….and lovingly looking at her……………………

Abhi Kuch Dino Se Lag Raha Hai
Badle Badle Se Hum Hai
Hum Baithe Baithe Din Mein Sapne
Dekte Neendein Kam Hai,

Abhi Kuch Dino Se Lag Raha Hai
Badle Badle Se Hum Hai
Hum Baithe Baithe Din Mein Sapne
Dekte Neendein Kam Hai,

Abhi Kuch Dino Se Suna Hai Dil Ka
Rob Hi Kuch Naya Hai
Koi Raaz Kambakht Hai Chupaye
Khuda Hi Jaane Ki Kya Hai
Hai Dil Pe Shaq Mera

Ise Pyaar Ho Gaya,
chandu shocked…………….to find his boss smiling

He wave his hand

Maan came back

And put his hand on his hair……………..

And he open the car door

To find geet in the car driver dress

Smiling at him……………………

He smiled again
Abhi Kuch Dino Se Main Sochta Hoon
Ki Dil Ki Thodi Si Sun Loon
Yaha Rehne Aayegi
Dil Saja Loon Mein Khwab Thode Se Boon Loon
Hai Dil Pe Shaq Mera

Ise Pyaar Ho Gaya,

Tu Bekhabar , Ya Sab Khabar
Ek Din Zara Mere Masoom Dil Pe Gaur Kar
Pardon Mein Main Rakh Loon Tujhe
Ki Dil Tera Aa Na Jaaye Kahin Yeh Gair Par
he reached the office

Enter the reception

To find geet is giving file

She is in pinky dress……………………….
Hum Bhole Hai , Sharmile Hai
Hum Hai Zara Siddhe Masoom Itni Khair Kar
Jis Din Kabhi
Zidd Pe Ade
Hum Ayenge Aag Ka Tera Dariya Tair Kar

Abhi Kuch Dino Se Lage Mera Dil
Duth Ho Jaise Nashe Mein
Kyun Lad Khadaye Yeh Beheke Gaye
Hai Tere Har Raaste Pe
Hai Dil Pe Shaq Mera

Ise Pyaar Ho Gaya,
and then he enter to find……….

Geet in sasha 's cabin……………………
Banke Shehar Chal Raat Bhar
Tu Aur Main Toh Musafir Bhatakte Hum Phire
Chal Raaste Jahan Le Chale
Sapnon Ke Phir Teri Aahon Mein Thak Ke Hum Gire
and he turned to look at the door…

Where geet enter with……………………..file……………………
Koi Pyaar Ki , Tarkeeb Ho
Nuskhe Koi Jo Sikhaye Toh Hum Bhi Seekh Le
Yeh Pyaar Hai Rehta Kaha
Koi Humse Kahe Us Se Jaa K Pooch Le
Mein Sambhaloon Pau Pisal Na Jau
Nayee Nayee Dosti Hai
Zara Dekh Bhal Sambhal Ke Chalna
Keh Rahi Zindagi Hai
Hai Dil Pe Shaq Mera

he again smiled………

The person shocked…………………
Ise Pyaar Ho Gaya,

Abhi Kuch Dino Se Suna Hai Dil Ka
Rob Hi Kuch Naya Hai
Koi Raaz Kambakht Hai Chupaye
Khuda Hi Jaane Ki Kya Hai
Hai Dil Pe Shaq Mera

Ise Pyaar Ho Gaya. . .
he turned to find the file

Are yeh to adi ke pass hay……aur tume isse kyon laya geet………

He turned to find .adi……

Adi :sir…..are u alright

He didn't believe………………….when pinky gave a shocking news that she saw smiling msk when she handover the service maintained file………………………..

He laughed and gave a pinky a look and then the same news from other people

He came for confirmation

Where he actually saw and he felt happy

He is still in his dream world.when the question arised

Where is geet

Adi where is geet………………………….

His smile changed to anger………………………….

Geet:pls come fast.other wise the smiling……………changes to danger action

But due to his luck.

Geet came to office

He looked at her…..like he is seeing her first time…………………………..

Geet looked at him …………………….

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Posted: 14 years ago
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maan falling for her..
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow he's getting mad in love...

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