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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
maan has already fallen for her...
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He is looking as her seeing first time

Geet what happened to him.

Why he is looking at her………….

On the other hand she is worried as her cell is missing…………..

And she knows ……..it is important………………………………

She is searching from the morning.

Her face Is dull…………….confused.

Sir……..

Sir.

Maan came back to senses…………………….

He looked at her…..

Sir………

Who geet………bring me.mr mehta's file..

She looked at him.

He turned his chair………..

What's wrong with u.maan……………….why your seeing her like that ……………………..

Geet.get ready for presentation..we are working…on..

In 30 minutes.clients are coming………

Geet yes sir…..

Move into the cabin,,,,,,,,,,,

Meantime bumped with sasha……………………

Sorry maam..what's wrong with u miss handa………can't u see and walk……..and why are u doing moon walking……………..

Sorry maam………..as she is confused and dull from morning…………the things are going…………out of control.

In meantime…..presentation……………………..

What should I do now…….

She is still in her room.

It is past 15 minutes there is no sign of her,

He is restless……………………………………….

Out of frustutation………………………

He came to her cabin.

He enter the cabin,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

To look the sight……..stopped at his tracks………

Hair locks on her face….

She is resting on her chair…………………….head throw back of the chair……

Eyes are closed…………………….

He just stared the beauty……………………………….

He observed the tears….on her face………………………….

Night……………

She came home………..

Find rohan and pari are sleeping at the couch itself.

She made them sleep on their bed………………………..

She changed………….

And want to call misha…..

But she find that her cell is missing,

With the thoughts she slept……………

A car reached her flat…

The door opened……..

Finally ifound u.

She open her eyes.to find……..the person which she does not want to see In her life time……

DEV SHERGIL.

She said …………………no don't come near to me.

No..

She quickly open her eyes………………….in sweat………………..

She cannot sleep throught out the night………………

Next day she quickly rushed to office………………………….

And then the thought…

Geet……………………………….

No don't come near to me…………………

There Is something…………………….

Again the same nightmare……………………………

Tears are flowing from the beautiful eyes…………….

He cannot see them.

Geet.

Unknowingly she hugged him……….

He return the hug……………………….

She is crying……………………………

She suddenly she realized that leave him and ran to her washroom…

Maan is super duper confused…………………….

He realized…….there is something wrong…

He put the cell on the table and moved into the room………………….

She came from the washroom………………………..

And looked at the cell.

She smiled…….happily…………………………

She open the photo.

Didi………………………pata hay .dar gayee.thi………………………..

Maan is looking her from the binds.

He smiled on looking the smile on her face………..

He will do anything for that…………………

Next 10 minutes the presentation started………….

Sasha and others are looking at her with weird faces………..

She started and finished……………………….the presentation……………………………

Where maan face is brightened………………….

On his thoughts………

He got a call from dadimaa……………………

He attent dadimaa call……..as she is going to visit her cousin……………..

He put the phone to look at adi.congratulating……………………….geet………………….

Adi is always very much protective to geet.

And pinky bubbly…………friend…………………..

Sharing sweet moments………………………..

His life will be filled with happiness.

But a thoughts stickon his mind.

Why is she is crying..

And who hurted like this…………………….

I need to findout……………

But how………………………………………

Next day………….morning…………

Adi went to Mumbai along with sasha …………for the project of highways………………….

And next………………

Pinky and rohan are getting………..ready for school….

Bell ring…………..

He checked…………...and ring again…………………………

To his surprise the door open by little girl………………….of the school………….

Pari open the door to find the same uncle……………….

She looked at him with questioning eyes..

Kaun hay pari……………………

Who school wala uncle maasi……………………….

Maasi……….maan chuckled………………feel something…………had removed from his heart.

He smiled looking at geet's little copy.

The same hazzle eyes……………………………………

In her pink uniform..

Then came rohan………………………..again the question look………

What's wrong withu both..

Ur getting late for ur school bus.

Rohan complete ur breakfast now……

And pari…………………….donot leave ur food………other wise……ur not going to get choclate cake at the evening…………..nor ur little Barbie doll…………………………….

And rohan..make sure she also does her home work at the time before go to bed..

Ok.

Now pack ur boxes……………

Get ready…………………….

As she is saying………………………

Shocked to find……………….

Msk at the door….

Looking at her

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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
a super duper update...loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
FANTASTIC...PLEASE PM ME...PLS CONTINUE
Edited by amita5 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
loved the update...
hope soon msk finds the truth...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56

Sir………………

Aap………..sir

Both rohan and pari looked at their maasi……………………..

She turned…..to them………

Just then…………..bus horn……………………

Oh no bus horn……..

They both ran…giving sweet kiss on their maasi.and ran to the bus…………………………….

Geet waved them…………..

Bye maasi.

Bye school wala uncle………………………

He looked at them…………….

He then returned to geet…………

She is in her night suit…some flour on her fore head…….

Messy hair.but still look cute………….

Sir aap yeha

She is scared what happens that he know that she is adi sister………….

She is still in thoughts

Not seeing that he is actually checking her out……………..

The baby pink night suit.

At that time………there…..is a phone call….

She lifted the phone.

Are geet.mein adi …

Jee bhayya………

Mein puch gayee….mein 2 din ke baad ate hoo.telephone bill barawa lena.bhool gayya tha

Don't worry bhayya.mein bar dungi…………..

Teek ay….

The phone line gone……………….

She turned to maan………………….

Sir aap ne bata ya nahii………………………ke aap yeha kya kar rahi hay.

Maan confused and fumbled with words.

Who mein,…….woh…………………

He is still fumbling…………………….with words..

Who paani..

Kya aap paani peen eke liye itne door mere ghar aye hay……

She is going on.

Least noticed that he came near to her……………………..

He is looking at her …….her eyes while talking becoming big and her twisted lips……..and the baby face…………….he is admiring not paying any attention to her words………………….

Just then she stopped as he is staring at her……………………

Tum kaun ho geet……………………………

She became shocked…………..for the question

And why are u crying……………………..

And why u are scared on listening to the word Mumbai……………….

And why u hugged me on that day like that………………………………

And where…are rohan and pari's parents……………………….

And why are u staying alone………….

He is asking questions.

Not realizing that he is coming forward………………

And ……………geet is going backward.

She is to the wall…………………and………….he came dangerously forward……….and she is now cornered………………………………

Sir…….her voice is not came out of the throat…….

She just looked at him..

The maroon office attire……………………

Broad shoulders.

The perfect jaw line and M Shaped lips……………..

And most important hypnotic dark intense eyes……………………..

He is perfect handsome………………dhak dhak boss..

As the office staff murmers………………

So near ……………………..

She is trembling………………

Where maan is completely lost in the hazzle eyes which is looking at fear………………………………

The small pettiee nose………………………….

And the forehead………….witha a eye lock………………………

He sees the most beautiful face infront of him…………..

They lost in their eyes…………

Suddenly…………………..the bell rang.

And he moved.

And she open the door……to find………………….the milk boy,

Are didi……………….bill…………..milk ka…………………………..

Jee…………bhayya……………….

And then.she moved into her room…….for get money…

He look around the house.

Three rooms….

One room is like a person

And a photograph of rohan pari and meera 's photo

And also geet photo

She looked lovely………………

And she paid the milk boy ……………..

Sir 9 0 clock office we ar egetting late

With that she ran into her room………….

She came on peach color salwar

Hair is open..

She is drying her hair………………

Water droplets.

He is loosing.

Hey ladki muje pagal karke nahii chodege……………………….

She is extremely beautiful……..

she turned to find.

Are yeha maan sir.\

And why he came here……………………………………

And why he is asking questions…………………………..

She came out

Sir..cofee…………..

He just want to see her through out his life…………………………….

Sir….cofee….

No thanks……..

Then they drove to the office…………

Just then………..

Misha's phone.

Ha misha bolo……

Kya baat hay baby……tuu teek toh hay na………tu ne mere messages ka bhi jawab nahii diya don't worry is everything alright……..

Ha mishu mein teek hoo.

Who mera cell mera pass nahi tha..office mein thoda busy.

Hey I need to talk to u regarding ur boss…..

What.

Chill maar yaar.

He is a nice guy……………………he has a affair at his college.and she left him for money………………………that day onwards.hearet broken...so don't worry……………..

And his family only dadi……and don't worry his family.is also good…

And by the way….he is the most eligible hot bachelor of delhi.

U can try him………….

She winks.

Shut up misha.

As maan is observing……and the name mishu………funny girl.

And what the hell she told…………………….and why geet is blushing…………………..

He smiled……..

Ok mishu I will call u later…………………………………………

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Sir………………

Aap………..sir

Both rohan and pari looked at their maasi……………………..

She turned…..to them………

Just then…………..bus horn……………………

Oh no bus horn……..

They both ran…giving sweet kiss on their maasi.and ran to the bus…………………………….

Geet waved them…………..

Bye maasi.

Bye school wala uncle………………………

He looked at them…………….

He then returned to geet…………

She is in her night suit…some flour on her fore head…….

Messy hair.but still look cute………….

Sir aap yeha

She is scared what happens that he know that she is adi sister………….

She is still in thoughts

Not seeing that he is actually checking her out……………..

The baby pink night suit.

At that time………there…..is a phone call….

She lifted the phone.

Are geet.mein adi …

Jee bhayya………

Mein puch gayee….mein 2 din ke baad ate hoo.telephone bill barawa lena.bhool gayya tha

Don't worry bhayya.mein bar dungi…………..

Teek ay….

The phone line gone……………….

She turned to maan………………….

Sir aap ne bata ya nahii………………………ke aap yeha kya kar rahi hay.

Maan confused and fumbled with words.

Who mein,…….woh…………………

He is still fumbling…………………….with words..

Who paani..

Kya aap paani peen eke liye itne door mere ghar aye hay……

She is going on.

Least noticed that he came near to her……………………..

He is looking at her …….her eyes while talking becoming big and her twisted lips……..and the baby face…………….he is admiring not paying any attention to her words………………….

Just then she stopped as he is staring at her……………………

Tum kaun ho geet……………………………

She became shocked…………..for the question

And why are u crying……………………..

And why u are scared on listening to the word Mumbai……………….

And why u hugged me on that day like that………………………………

And where…are rohan and pari's parents……………………….

And why are u staying alone………….

He is asking questions.

Not realizing that he is coming forward………………

And ……………geet is going backward.

She is to the wall…………………and………….he came dangerously forward……….and she is now cornered………………………………

Sir…….her voice is not came out of the throat…….

She just looked at him..

The maroon office attire……………………

Broad shoulders.

The perfect jaw line and M Shaped lips……………..

And most important hypnotic dark intense eyes……………………..

He is perfect handsome………………dhak dhak boss..

As the office staff murmers………………

So near ……………………..

She is trembling………………

Where maan is completely lost in the hazzle eyes which is looking at fear………………………………

The small pettiee nose………………………….

And the forehead………….witha a eye lock………………………

He sees the most beautiful face infront of him…………..

They lost in their eyes…………

Suddenly…………………..the bell rang.

And he moved.

And she open the door……to find………………….the milk boy,

Are didi……………….bill…………..milk ka…………………………..

Jee…………bhayya……………….

And then.she moved into her room…….for get money…

He look around the house.

Three rooms….

One room is like a person

And a photograph of rohan pari and meera 's photo

And also geet photo

She looked lovely………………

And she paid the milk boy ……………..

Sir 9 0 clock office we ar egetting late

With that she ran into her room………….

She came on peach color salwar

Hair is open..

She is drying her hair………………

Water droplets.

He is loosing.

Hey ladki muje pagal karke nahii chodege……………………….

She is extremely beautiful……..

she turned to find.

Are yeha maan sir.\

And why he came here……………………………………

And why he is asking questions…………………………..

She came out

Sir..cofee…………..

He just want to see her through out his life…………………………….

Sir….cofee….

No thanks……..

Then they drove to the office…………

Just then………..

Misha's phone.

Ha misha bolo……

Kya baat hay baby……tuu teek toh hay na………tu ne mere messages ka bhi jawab nahii diya don't worry is everything alright……..

Ha mishu mein teek hoo.

Who mera cell mera pass nahi tha..office mein thoda busy.

Hey I need to talk to u regarding ur boss…..

What.

Chill maar yaar.

He is a nice guy……………………he has a affair at his college.and she left him for money………………………that day onwards.hearet broken...so don't worry……………..

And his family only dadi……and don't worry his family.is also good…

And by the way….he is the most eligible hot bachelor of delhi.

U can try him………….

She winks.

Shut up misha.

As maan is observing……and the name mishu………funny girl.

And what the hell she told…………………….and why geet is blushing…………………..

He smiled……..

Ok mishu I will call u later…………………………………………

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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
maan is very eager to know about geet...nice part
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
awsome i loved it !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
ur ff is simply awesome
plz PM me by the time u update the next part
thanx
and good job

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