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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
loved the update...
maan very eager to know abt geet...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62

Geet phone rang…..

Maan:on the line

Geet there is a party at the client place

We need to go…………………

Get ready in the evening

Party.at the evening.

How can I;as adi bhayya is not there

She looked at pinky….

She informed pinky.she is in relif because

Rohan and pari are great kids they never trouble anyone…..

As she is getting ready

Pinky came into the room

Wow geet aaj party mein sab ke nazar tum par hogi………..dekhna………………………

Kya karoon……………………….

Naii pinky.i don't like anyone attention…….

Wow geet ur so lucky

U know every time…………..

Sasha and………others………… trying to get him……….

At that time……………

Maan is at party

In his black.toxedo.looking extremely handsome………………..

Ladies are gaped at him…………..

He is near at the bar

And then mr Mehta came…………….

He introduced into his son

Mr rahul Mehta

A person came…………………..

He is good………..

He is going to say

Then the person………………….

His eyes are transfixed at the hallway

Saying wow……beautiful.

Maan turned to find

His angel at the door

She is in white saree…………………

Looking like angel from the different world

Her free hair

Flowing

Everyone party eyes are on her……………………

She is fixed on looking at him

His looks

He saw rahul disguisting eyes on her

Cannot bear a minute

He moved towards her

And dragged her to the corner……………………

His eyes are fix on her

Just then rahul came and introduced with her

She felt uncomfortable for his gaze.

She want to runaway

She cannot stand………….

Maan see this from distance……..

And within a minute she is in dance floor

Sir I don't know how to dance…………………….

Maan is not speaking.

As his senses is filled witn her

Her smooth skin of the waist………………..

And her scent……………….

He is not in his senses.

Moving……………………………

The song starts………..

Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai Dhadkane Meri Sunn, Tujhko Main Kar Loon Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun.
Zindgi Ki Shakh Se Loon Kuchh Hasin Pal main Chun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun ... Whole 2x
Jo Bhi Jitne Pal Jeeyu , Unhe Tere Sang Jeeyu
Jo Bhi Kal Ho Ab Tera Use Tere Sang Jeey
Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo , Chahe Jo Ho Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu
Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai... Repeat [ 1x ] - Em|D|C|G,Em|C|Am ..
Mujhko De Tu Mit Jaane , Ab Khudse Dil Mil Jaane , Kyu Hai Yeh Itna Fasla...
Lamhe Yeh Phir Naa Aaye , Inko Tu Naa Le Jaane , Tu Mujh Pe Khudko De Loota...
Tujhe Tujhse Tod Loo Kahi Khudse Jod Loo , Mere Jism O Jaan Aa Teri Khusboo Odh Loo
Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo , Chahe Jo Hona Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu
Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai... Repeat [ 1x ]

Bahoon Main De Bas Jaane , Siney Main De Chhup Jaane , Tujh Bin Main Jaaunga Kaha ... ?
Tujhse Hain MujhKo Paane...Yaado K Woh Nazrane , Ek Jinpe Haq Ho Bas Mera
Teri Yaado Main Rahoo , Tere Khwabo Main Jagoo
Mujhe Doondhe Jab Koi , Teri Aankho Main Milu
Jo Bhi Saanse Main ... Sang Chalu
Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai... Repeat [ 1x ] ..

they lost in each other


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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
rahul here also...i so hate him...nice part...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
wow great update
but dont u think it was too short?
anyways i loved it

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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
Awesome part l
loved it
i have a request u inst of writing song ,
download song u cant cont stroy more space will get.
sory dont mind
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66

Both are lost in each other

Suddenly she realized that………………………….

And her flash back…………………………………….

His sister saying……..to her

Choti………….

Didi………….

Pata hay……………………..

Didi aap hamesha iss chand ko kyon dekhtee hay.

Kyonki yeh chand hamara takdeer likhtha hay

Tak deer…………….

Ha usee chandini raat mein………..ek sapnoon ka rajkumar ayaga….safeed ghodi par aur tuje lekarchalaya jayaga……………….shaadi karegaa………………

Nahii didi……………….mein apko chod kar nayee javuga………………………….

Lekin didi …..mein rajkumar se shaadi kyon karoo…………….pehle apke shaadi hogi naa..

Kisne kaha hay tume………………..

Just then mein ne…

Turned to find their father looking at the two princess…………….

Mere dono pari oo ke liye rajkumar ayege…………………aur dono khush rahenge…………………………….

They both hugged their mohindar……………………….

Suddenly tears falled from the eyes……………

He saw it and hugged her……..

As the tears are tearing him apart

He felt like hundred needles pierced her heart.

He hugged her tightly

And her sobs and trembling……………in his hands………

They stayed for longer………………

Suddenly the light s are on………

And she left for home.

Wait I will drop u……………………………………

And they drove to the car……………

Tears are flowing………………..

She is alone………………………

He stopped the car.and hugged her

Geet please don't cry…I don't know why.but I cannot see tears..in your eyes…………….

Just then she fainted………\

He got panicked…………..

And he drove her to his mansion………………………

He took her to his room……….

Made her to sleep on his bed..took his sandles off.and called nakul t o call doctor………..

The doctor came in…………………………..

He examined her

I think she is too stress and she had not taken her food……………properly

She needs to take rest…………………

And gave medicines\

And don't worry she will be open her eyes soon………..

And he left there…………….

Geet open her eyes…………………

She found her in a strange room……..big room……………………

And neatly arranged………………

As she about to get from the kingsize bed……

He came into the room……………..

Geet:take rest…………..ur not well ur fainted….that is why…………..i brought u here….

U need to take food and also medicines…………………………….

Other wise who are going to look after ur prince and princess…….

She is shocked about him…………

Maan singh khurana…is the same person who make the office people life hell………………………………….

And she don't want to change his mood.

So quickly she ate the food and also medicines.

Nowit is too late….so u take rest……

And I will be in the other room.no need to worry………………………

And take rest……………………….

With that he donot want to conversation………..as..he knows she never opens up.

And the tears………………

Why she is so upset.

What should be happened to this 18 yr old girl……………………………..

As she need to take care of 2 little kids…….and also her father……………………

Something drastic happened…….

And he know he need to find out the fact..and who is the person…………behind this…………….

And he needs a person who he can trust

Yes…

Aditya

I mean adi………

His father is accountant here…and now he…..

Brilliant and loyal to khurana constructions and also khuran a empire…………

Yes………

I need to talk to him when he returns from Mumbai…………………….

And misha also talking about some detectives………………………………..need to find out the truth

I know geet ur strongs……….and u never share pain to anyone…..but I will make sure to find out the truth ,,,,,,,,,,somebody had hurted u a lot………and I will also find the truth and also person…who is behind all these

And I will promise to make his life hell…

I will make sure that ……………………….

The person caused tears to my angel's life……………………..

With firm decision he closed his eyes

To find the geet in his dreams…………………………………….

He knows the entry of geet had made his life……………………………..

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Posted: 14 years ago
#67

great update...once maan gets to know the truth i'm sure he will make dev pay heavily

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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
loved ur ff plz add me in ur pm list waiting for next updates
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
loved the update...
waiting for maan to know the truth
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
nice story..pls updte soon and pm me

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