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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ishq Hai Yeh

Part -6

Next day morning-8.00A.M

Geet is sleeping peacefully when her mobile rang for the third time and stopped ringing. Again her mobile started ringing…its 4th time when geet woke up yawning and even without noticing the number she picked up the mobile and answered the call.

Geet:hellooo(in her sleepy voice).🥱

Caller:geet…r u still sleeping?!!😡

Geet:kyun…any problem for u?🥱

Caller:haan…problem for me. Now wake up….

Geet:hmm….good night…🥱

Caller:GEEETTT😡

Geet(jumped on her bed and sat): y r u shouting meera….omg my ear….😲

Meera:r u still sleepy..?😡

Geet:oh meera….y did u call me at this time?

Meera:come on geet…u must be here in an hour…..i dunno how….but NOW…

Geet:r u crazy?how can I come to Australia now?😕

Meera:arey geet….not Australia….to mall…our fav mall.

Geet(surprised):u r in INDIA…..wo bhi DELHI mein?😲

Meera:haan…..

Geet(making fake angry face):u dint tell me!😡

Meera:haan….surprise…ab jaldi aana…we r waiting.

Geet:we?😕

Meera:haan u come and see….bye

Geet:I will be there in an hour…bye.

Geet got up and got ready in 30 mins.she went down stairs. This is the breakfast time of mr.handa. He is sitting at the table and eating……..saw geet coming.

Mr.handa:geet…how come u woke up so early!!!😲

Geet:haan papa…meera came…I am going to meet her in mall now.

Mr.handa:oh…have ur break fast beta…u can go after it.

Geet:nai papa…she is waiting….i will have there.

Mr.handa:teekai beta.take care.

Geet:jee papa..bye

Geet went out of handa hawali.

same time at khurana constructions

maan as usual ready to leave to office.he had his breakfast,took dadima's blessings and left khurana mansion. Now he is in his car to leave for the office. He sat in the back seat busy with his laptop. The car stopped at the signal and again started. Within seconds the car stopped with a jerk.

Maan(shouted on driver): whats this??dont u know how to drive?

Driver(scared):sorry saab….some one had fallen before our car.

Maan:clear it out….quick.

Maan again turned to his laptop. Driver got out of car and now speaking with some one outside. Actually fighting with some girl.

Girl:arey bhayyaji…mein sorry kehrahi hoon na.

Driver:kya aapki sorry se car the head light wapas ayega?agar mera saab dekhliya to?.😭...zaroor mera naukri to gayi aaj…wo bhi aap ki waja se.😭

Girl:bayyaji phikar mat karo main paisa dedoongi.

The driver was still arguing with the girl when maan got frustrated 😡and stepped out of the car to stop the stupid argument and fire the driver for wasting his time.

Maan came towards the both and stopped seeing the girl who is aurguing with his driver.he is shocked …ofcourse surprised to see her.

Maan(slowly whispered):geet!!!!!!😲

May be his words dint even reach the drivers ears. In the middle of the road he just stood staring at her.

The driver after few moments saw maan came out of the car and is staring at them with his angry look on his face. The driver almost panicked seeing maan.😕 But maan is still staring at geet in a surprised and shocked mix expression on his face.

Driver:saab aap..so..so..sorry saab…yeah sab is ladki ki wajah se hui.woh hi achanak gadi ke saamne aagayi….isme mera galti nahi hain …saab…😕

Its then maan came out of his shock and gave an angry glare to his driver and his one glare is enough for the driver to close his mouth.😡

Geet(to maan): dekho ji is mein inki koi galti anhi hain.galti meri hain. I came infront of the car. Actually I m crossing the road while signal is red…as I m talking on mobile I dint see that signal had turned to green and dashed ur car…sorry ji……I will pay for it…..for head light.😊

Maan just gave a cold glare to geet and turned to his driver and told him to start the car. 😳

Maan(to driver):chalo.

Maan sat inside and the car went off with in secs leaving geet still in the middle of the road staring at the car.

Geet: how rude.i have said sorry and he dint even reply me….such a stupid…sadu.😡

Geet went from there to mall all the way she is cursing maan for his cold and rough behavior. When geet entered the maal 2 hands came from back and closed geet's eyes.

Geet:meera….😃

Meera:oh u found.

Geet:don't be silly yaar…u called me here so who else will close my eyes?

Meera:ok ok…now come on some one r waiting to meet u.

Geet:acha…kaun?

Meera:kudh dekhlo…aur batav kaisa hain who!

Geet:wo…????😕

They both walked in to a coffee shop. Meera lead geet to a table where a man is sitting waiting for them.

Meera:ok geet….meet Mr.dev…..dev khurana…….my bf.

Geet:ohhh…..to yeh bath hain….😊

Geet(to dev):hi dev….i m geet…geet handa.

Dev:hi geet…she told every thing about u and how close u r to her. Its really nice meeting u.😊

Geet:same here….so told every thing about me…cool meera……

Geet and dev shook their hands.

Dev:she speaks non stoply….i call her as FM.

Geet:acha…from when u started speaking more!!!!!

Meera:from the time u left me geet.😔

Geet became sad all of a sudden.😔

Geet:I miss u a lot meera(hugged meera).🤗

Dev(to light the situation):ohhh girls stop it…u r going tooo senti 😉

Geet(broke the hug):haan yaar….tooo senti(smiling).😃

Meera:chalo…yeh sab chodo and order something…..

The three ordered their coffes and sat chit chatting.meera told geet how dev and she met in their college first time.how they became frns.how dev confessed his feelings….and all other stuff.

Its 10.30 a.m…..geet almost forgot about her interview. She remember when she got call from mr.handa.

Mr.handa:geet…u left ur certificates here beta…don't u need them in interview?

Geet(jumped from her seat):😲interview…..oh shit…I forgot papa…can u please send then I will collect near the office.

Mr.handa:teekh hain beta…I will send them…all the best do well.

Geet:jee papa.

Geet cut the call and turned towards dev and meera. They both r looking at geet.

Meera:kya hua?

Geet: I must go yaat…quickly…its already 10.30.

Meera:but…..

Geet: no meera I have an interview at 11.30….i will be late….see u in evening….bye guys…sorry plz…need to rush.

Meera:kaha?😕

Geet:baad mein batavungi???bye…

Geet rushed out of mall leaving dev 😕and meera😕 in confused state.

Precape:interview at KHURANA CONSTRUCTIONS…😕

Plz….comment….and press like button….plzzz

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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
loved the update...
so they finally met...maan knows her but she doesnt...
so was it a secret love from maan's side...
but he went away angry but y...
b4 maan can make friendship seems dev got to know her
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
Nice part..
Thanks for the PM..
Continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
so maan knows geet
but she doesnt
interesting
amazing update
pls cont soonnn
thanks pm
thank yu so muchhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
awesome ...

loved it ...

continue soon ... plzzz ...

thnx 4 d pm ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
awsome update.
love it
maan kws geet but she doesnt knw,
love it.
do continue plz
thx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
lovely updates teju...just caught up with this FF...
please add me to your pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
so maan knws geet but geet doesnt
ooo secret luv from maans side
amazing update yaar
mr stranger willb v much surprised to meet geet at kc
thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
wow loved it yaar...awsome one !!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
Hi Teja,

thanks for another interesting and awesome post dear. loved it to the core.

loved maan's immediate reactions when he saw geet on d road. but sadu, didn't even speak a word with her. chalo...MSK is a king in hiding emotions. but i'm wondering, for how long he can hide them.

can't wait for them to meet in office...


please continue soon dear.

143

Tonya

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