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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
Nice ff...
loved it
do add me to ur pm list
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: tonyahk

Hi Teja

this part was also very nice as always.

liked maan's selftalk about geet. very interesting.

so this maan knows how to show shasha her place.

can't wait for the story to unfold

continue soon buddy

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hi tonya
thanks for ur comments yaar...
i really love to read all ur comments...
thanks for encouraging me dear...
luv u
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
awesum update
luved it
would luv to read more
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
wow so mr stranger is
maan
cant wait to read next part
sounds damn good
love it
lovely update
pls cont soonnn
thanks pm
thank yu so muchhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
loved the update...
so maan is mr stranger but geet doesnt know it yet...
they hired her...
lets c wat happens when he meets her in office
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
thank u all guys for ur wonderful comments
i loved reading them
and also thanks for liking my updates...
i will update tonite again...
luv u all guys
teju❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87

Ishq Hai Yeh

Part -8

Evening – Handa haweli

Geet is in her room sitting on her bed with her laptop while mr.handa came to her to speak about his trip for 2 weeks.

Mr.handa:geet beta.(entered the room)

Geet:jee papa.(put her laptop a side and turned to her father)

Mr.handa:geet I m going on a business trip for 2 weeks and may be it even takes more.

Geet:teek hai papa..u don't worry I will be ok here.

Mr.handa:no geet I don't want to let u be alone.u told that ur old friend meera has returned hain na.

Geet:haan papa..

Mr.handa:they y don't u ask her to come and stay with u for few days…until I come back.

Geet:but papa….

Mr.handa:dekho beta…if she is with u I can do my work peacefully without worrying about u…how can I live u all alone and be peaful some where…..

Geet:teekh hain papa….i will call her and ask…and let u know….aur flight kab hain?

Mr.handa:kal subha…..may be u will be still in sleep then

Geet:teekh hain…to main meera ko abhi phone karungi.

Mr.handa:teekh hain beta…take care…bye

Geet:bye papa….happy journey.

Mr.handa:thanks beta(leaves the room).

Geet calls meera and asks her to be with her for few days.meera agrees to geet as she also gets more time to meet dev. Meera says that she will come to her house tomorrow. After speaking to meera for some time geet closes the call and goes to sleep.

Maan on the other hand is sleeping peacefully after many days thinking about geet.

Next day:morning:8.00a.m

Khurana mansion

Maan finished his work out and just came out of shower. All the while he is thinking about geet. After so many days his secret smile was back on his face. He remembered the days when he used to watch geet going to her school daily from behind tree. how he used to forget the surrounding when he sees her eyes, how he used to smile when she smile, how he used to feel the pain when her tears touched her smooth skin, how he was ready to do anything to stop those tears, they tear him apart, make him feel weak,.

He remember how he used to leave a rose daily for her on the park bench. Park bench….hmmm…her fav spot….how she used to share her happiness, how she used to come alone to cry out her sorrows…but never she was alone actually…she always thought she was alone there…while laughing and jumping in happiness and while crying in painful moments…but no..she was never alone…he is there…secretly….sharing her joy and pain….always…how he used to write her letters as mr.stranger….how her innocent face made him crazy…..

Maan came out of his thoughts when nakul came to call him for breakfast. He went to breakfast table..only thing in his mind….geet…geet…and geet…

Unknowingly he is smiling…smiling at nothing…looking at no one….still lost in thoughts.

Daadima noticed maan not having his food and looked at his face. She is shocked…shocked to see MAAN SINGH KHURANA……..SMILING…

Daadi(self talk):omg..aaj maan ko kya hogaya?...maan…SMILING…!!!!kuch to hain…par aisa kya hain ki maan time ko bulgaya..khana ko bulgaya? Kya koi ladki…nai nai nai…par…iska smile to aisa hi hain…hmmm…1st I must conform it to myself…I will leave for today…if I find anything different in him even after…then I will surly see him.

Daadi:maan I think aapko office jana hai.

Maan comes out of his trance and answers dadima and leaves for his office.

Maan:jee dadima…I m leaving..

Handa haweli:same time:8.00 a.m

Geet was in sound sleep when meera came to her room slowly without making any noise.she went beside geet's ear and shouted.

Meera:GEEETTT…….😛

Geet woke up with a jerk. She is now fuming on meera.

Geet:aaarrrhhh…..meeraaa…….i will kill u today.😡

Meera:ok sure..if u even want to know the time…..let me tell u its 8.00…and I want u to come with me. first to shopping then, then lunch, then movie, then…..

Geet: stop stop stop meera….

Meera:hmm…tell me wat?

Geet: who told u I am going out with u?

Meera: me? Aur koi hain kya.

Geet:hah…funny…and I m not coming.

Meera: not coming…no way..u r coming.

Geet:meera plz listen…I should go to office.

Meera: office?...wat office…its only two days yaar our studies completed. Don't u wan to enjoy? And wat office/ which office? I don't get u geet…

Geet; oh meera listen..yesterday I told u na..that I m attending an interview..

Meera:haan to?

Geet: wo job mujhe mil gaya.

Meera:wow that's good news geet…but no one joins in job the very next day.do they?

Geet:haan may be no one…but not me?

Meera:oh god…geet this is not fair…u can join afterwards na

Geet: sorry meera its my boss order.

Meera;wat boss!! Abse boss..is boss ki to mein…aure tell me which company u joined?

Geet:khurana construction.

Meera: GEET

Geet: oh meera..now y r u shouting?😡

Meera: geet…do u remember dev?

Geet:haan…my memory is not too week yaar.ur bf hain na.

Meera:haan…us ka full name yaad hain?

Geet:nai to.

Meera:geeettt….he is dev…dev khurana. Its his company u joined geet.

Geet:oh..nice to hear…but wat there in it?

Meera;wow geet isn't it awesome news.

Geet:oh shut up meera…let me go now..i must not be late on my day 1 in office.

Geet leaves meera and gets ready for the office. She wears a green kurtha top and a jeans ties her hair up leaving small part of hair on her sides with matching ear tops and her normal sandals.

Precap: they meet

Plz…plz…plz…comment guys…

Actually I thought to write their meeting also in todays updays…but as I had less time and also its going as long update.so, plz don't be angry on me and they will meet in next episode for sure.

Hope u like it.

Plz comment and press like button…

Thank u guys who pressed like button and who commented.

Ur

Teja.😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
awsome update.
cant wait for them to meet.
thx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
awesome update yaar...
i thought they will b meeting today but its ok...
will wait for next one...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
awesome ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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