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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved Isra-Farhan story also. Haaha she wants Farhaan to be hero by punching Prashant.Nice update.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey there just completed reading all the parts & hooked up to this ff
plz pm me
already send you a buddy request 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello ji,

I had already left when you updated and am terribly angry on you for this...

Well, caught up on last 3 chaps - they were amazing as usual. But I am missing Maaneet interaction - when are u going to show the development between them - and also Vicky - Meera?

Loved the Isra and Farhaan episode. Good turnback 😃

Update soon😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amruta 🤗...hi dear...missed u so much...awesome update...glad that idiot Prashant got what he deserved 😡...loved the way Geet was happy for her friend...plz continue...thank u for the PM...TC 😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
Darling...when is the next update coming up?
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter 43

''I'm in trouble'', he whined

''What have you done'', his brother asked in alarm''

''I think I've fallen for an employee.'

''Meera?'', smirked his brother.

''She's been ignoring me. Apparently, it's not proper office behaviour'', he said air quoting sarcastically.

''I knew I had a good reason to hire her.'' Maan nodded approvingly.

''You're not helping!''

''What's the problem, man. Just turn on your charm full blast; I've never seen it fail.''

''Tried and tested'', he replied, in a bored voice. ''It doesn't work on her.She wants me to woo her. ''

''She said that?'', Maan asked disbelievingly.

''She hinted as much. And I don't think it's going to go anywhere until I leave KC ' it's good tomorow's the last day.''
Maan nodded distractedly. He still hadn't told Geet that he'd be leaving. He had no clue had she's react.
As if on cue, the door pushed open and Geet walked in. She had walked into the studio, just then' her jeans still on, and her jacket unbuttoned.
Her steps stopped short on seeing Vicky there and in her typical blunt manner she spoke what first came to her mind.
''Vicky? What are you doing here?''
Before Maan could interject, Vicky replied. ''Babe, I'm coming back to you. Our separation is over - now no one can keep us apart''. He waggled his eyebrows, flirtishly and made a mock bow.
But, geet hadn't paid any attention to that. She glared at Maan, he anger rising every minute, before she stalked out.
Maan yelled out to her and followed her outside, only to see her start the jeep. He ran as fast as he could and jumped in, before she could drive away.
"Geet - listen , I was going to tell you, ok''
She didn't listen and just drove on, the speed increasing by the minute. Everytime he spoke, she accelerated. So Maan, kept shut, waiting for her to respond. She didn't.
She finally drove to stop infront of a building. Her gaze was lost on something unseen and she kept it away from him. He waited quietly, watching the day progress from morning to noon.

Maan never let his gaze move from her face. The fact that people stopped and stared was of no consequence to him. A fear came over him ' he hadn't had that feeling for a long time. She seemed lost ' but at the same time, he knew she was aware that he was around her ' that she was thinking about him.

He didn't know how long his heart banged against his ribcage, but he did nothing to alleviate it ; he only waited; looking at her sorting the thoughts, that seemed to be running through her. It was hours before she stopped staring into space. The day had faded and the wind was cooler.

She frowned suddenly, and touched her cheek. It was wet - a tear. She stared at it , when he heard him call out her name gently.

Before she knew it, he was holding her close to him, comforting her. She held herself together, when she felt him hug her close. It took her only a split second, before she gave in to her tears and hugged him back.

''I c-c-can come and see you in your office, can't I?'', she hiccuped.

''Any given time of the day'', he whispered softly, stroking the back of her head.

more coming up tomorrow or the day after! - shall update in the same post.
love
sorry for the delay!
Edited by mechantefille - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was beautiful!!

It was so splendid...the bond that these two have formed...so deep!!!

Waiting for you to add more as you have mentioned.

But this last scene remains with me forever!!!


Edited by jazzerette - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
luved it awesomeee
n waiting for u 2 update it fully
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yippie u updated...I did not see it...
Poor Geet...
Sensitive and caring Maan.

Poor Vicky...
loved the update...cannot wait for more
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Posted: 13 years ago
gona be back home by the beginningo f next month - so I'll be free-er then to update - am so sorry bout the delay.
love
Amruta

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