ManeetFF Dancing Frm The Ashes link on pg146 - Page 58

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

La la ... i feel like singing out aloud in office...😆

I know the feeling!!!

thanks you for a lovely mini-update...

I think I should just copy and paste jazzarette's comments - she's expressed everything so well😳

Yeah she has a habit of doing that, naa!!

Both your parallel tracks are amazing...

Vicky and Meera:

Both are discovering that there's more to the other than they have seen...their acquaintance would likely grow into a bond of trust driven by Ajay - he's very cute and I loved it that he adapted to Vicky so easily - i guess he'll love anybody who takes care of his Didi😃

Yeah kids tend to adapt quick right! I sometimes envy them that!And Ajay is a sunshine child!

Maan and Geet:

Our honeybunches - there seems to be a major change in Maan's character - from the rough arrogant self - punishing leader of KC, he's had a significant transformation in his character - he always had a soft heart inside which is now visible on the outside - i am glad dadima's wishes are coming true...Loved it how he always seems to pave a way into Geet's solitude and she doesnt seem to be able to deny it - infact its great that she finally started sharing her thoughts with Maan and I am sure Maan will bring back her original self..

Wasn't he always a big softy - n his leftover guilt and his compassion for her is making him want to make things right for her...or help her at least.

the last scene of their argument over hobbies was truly amazing ... Maan has started to understand her loss and she has started to uderstand that Maan wudnt hurt her...

thanks thanks!!

Lovely...i think i have done enough analyssation of characters - when it comes to maaneet, i just dont seem to be able to stop 😆

Now for the most important part:

"PLS UPDATE SOON" 😆

Loved it😊

😳

Originally posted by: esha143

nice update...so the friendship is growing between them...good to see the friendly banter they shared...hope to see such light moments more...

Originally posted by: harshdb

cute,




natural, emotional update.

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

hiii amru...
well ur update always leaves a pleasnt smile on my face with its endearing content
well coming to ajay..he is one adorable kid...protective about meera...and has now already started bonding with vicky..

Revvv!! Heya!

You know Vicky is my Sunbeam Guy - he's always happy n positive - must be all that exercise that he does! 😆 So Ajay had to get along with him!

so i sincerely hope there are more vicky - meera-ajay interactions to come...

Done - darling - it's done!

the entire ajay-meera-vicky part was very well portrayed and never made me feel realise that i am missing maneet scenes...

Awww geees!! Blush
coming to maneet convo...
again the way u have progressed their interactions...which is gradual yet realistic and lays a foundation for their future friendshi/relationship
its good that they both are bonding over nik...
nik is indeed a guardian angel who is sorely missed by one and all...
this is one mature maan who knos how to take the convo in a positive manner with a fruitful conclusion to it...yah at times there are hits and misses😆...

Thanks thanks...Yeah he's spontaneous with her and even he doesn't realize how that's happening!!😆

prob his business acumen is being used by him well in interpersonal relationships too
well i was completely floored by maan when he made her mood..and convinced her to celebrate nik's life not this death..he surely knos how to play with words...now thats what i call a mature and ideal convo.

This comes from the years of being a playboy I guess - or rather The Charming Khurana that he used to be!!

..it just took few words from him to make geet mull over her behaviour and convince her to take a positive side of everthing...
i am sure maan is on his way to bring back the old geet...
well its quite surprising that inspite of not knowing nik personally or even geet for that matter yet manages to turnaround the situation completely...

In all honestly - this was a complete inspiration - i never mapped this out - it just came to me!!

And sometimes you don't need to know the person for long naa - As I said - they're kindred n they recognized each other!

i love this maan Me too- Me TOO!!
and ofcourse kudos to u for writing such fab part
keep writing sweetie
love u and ur ffs
BTW i got my results and i passed sweetie...just felt lik sharing it with u

Wow congrats - lets party gal!! oh n am replying to ur Pm that I had forgotten to! cant do that thru my phone!

reva

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

Originally posted by: vardah23

im really in love with this FF...seriously the way u portrayed the love of Dev n Geet it was soo beautiful n thn he died n she was all broken up..n thn Geet and Mayanks Chemistry is the cutest...everyone deserves a friend like tht who can understand them completely...

Your FF is a complete package!