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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jazzerette

Gotcha!!


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Jazz you changed colour - wow congrats!! Wahoo!!
This was so...umm...oh it was such a happy-shappy wala update!! The one that gives you this warm feeling inside and puts a huge smile on outside!!
🤗

Ajay seems to be the catalyst that would bring Vicky and Meera closer. His importance in Meera's life, a stranger who has come to be her family, a brother that she loves with all her maternal feelings...it was lovely to see that bond. Vicky got to see it first-hand...and how much more there is to Meera than just her stern self.
I had never imagined this character - he just sprung up one day outta the blue!

Maan, Geet and Nik. This was my happy-shappy wala part.

Me too - it's complete inspiration n a lot more of mental perspiration!!

Maan is right. Nik is still around. Even I can feel his presence still...in whatever Geet is today, its him. She is hiding, still mourning...but its different from what she was after her mother's death. She was indifferent then, now she is in deep pain...she feels.
Couldn' have said it better!!

I am at loss to describe the scene that unfolded. Nik's birthday deserved celebration. And glad Maan made her see the fact.
Hain naa - just cuz a person is dead doesn't mean you don't be happy there were there in your life!

In a way, Maan not only celebrated Nik's birthday but gave Nik a gift of Geet's smile. Heartfelt, genuine smile.

And the way he baited Geet...to draw her out...fabulous update!!

I am so bad at words...all this is way less than what I am feeling right now. I don't know how you would title it, but for me it was a Gift.

Awww thanks so much - Chapter ka title dekh!!


Originally posted by: ninand

a brilliant update.. loved Ajays interaction with Vicky. . . his gradual knowing of Meera, yet the way he didnt impose and left..😊

Yeah he is a gentleman naaa...and gradual is better than overkill dontcha think?
aww.. celebrating Niks birthday- what a wonderful way to remember him and rejoice in what they had shared..
😳 Awww blush blush

Geet and Maan's dynamics are really changing, in a big way.. again in a very unimposing, unassuming yet warm kind of way..
🤗 Ninooo🤗

very well written.. DO post the next part soon.😳

Thanks!



The reason I've clubbed ur posts is cuz I love ur responses, and keep looking out) - whenever u guys don't reply I feel like I've written shit!!

So thanks a load gals...
love
Edited by mechantefille - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: paponecon

how sweet...their gradual bonding...loved the part...u r too gd...its the only way tt come out geet from her sorrow to speak about nik and their love...maan is going to the exact pace...but really u r too gd...


Aww thanks so much yaa!

blushing!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
hiii amru...
well ur update always leaves a pleasnt smile on my face with its endearing content
well coming to ajay..he is one adorable kid...protective about meera...and has now already started bonding with vicky..
so i sincerely hope there are more vicky - meera-ajay interactions to come...
the entire ajay-meera-vicky part was very well portrayed and never made me feel realise that i am missing maneet scenes...
coming to maneet convo...
again the way u have progressed their interactions...which is gradual yet realistic and lays a foundation for their future friendshi/relationship
its good that they both are bonding over nik...
nik is indeed a guardian angel who is sorely missed by one and all...
this is one mature maan who knos how to take the convo in a positive manner with a fruitful conclusion to it...yah at times there are hits and misses😆...
prob his business acumen is being used by him well in interpersonal relationships too
well i was completely floored by maan when he made her mood..and convinced her to celebrate nik's life not this death..he surely knos how to play with words...now thats what i call a mature and ideal convo...it just took few words from him to make geet mull over her behaviour and convince her to take a positive side of everthing...
i am sure maan is on his way to bring back the old geet...
well its quite surprising that inspite of not knowing nik personally or even geet for that matter yet manages to turnaround the situation completely...
i love this maan
and ofcourse kudos to u for writing such fab part
keep writing sweetie
love u and ur ffs
BTW i got my results and i passed sweetie...just felt lik sharing it with u

reva
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maanujaanu

dat was short n sweet

luved it
so finally Geet n Maan r bonding


Short??? It took 2 hrs to write!! but thanks.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shalve

awesome update...loved it...



thanks babe😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Vidushi89

Oh wow...

I was not expecting this...srsly yaar...

Now i have to give you huggss n kisses...muaahh...
Love you dear...

Maan is so sweet...
Geet is behaving like older days...
Superb.

Updt soon.


Viduuu - Aa gayi!!

tha na out of the blue!!! Geet like older days? Not yet - you haven't seen enough yet!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Water.

Btw, loved the update...

Short hai...mini...I should say...like short minis...haha for a joke...laughing at myself...🤣
But...they r bonding...loved it...awww cake for Nik...the angel...
So sweet...
want more action...
Action speaks louder than words...even though in Geet's condition i know words are soothing...hehe😆
I m guessing I have gone nuts...today..


Rachooo😡 - chal - di naa update - abhi footage mat kha!!! ROFL - short minis - ur such a mad crazy gal re!!

Yeah Nik toh is an angel only -Geet and Maan humans with flaws naa...but yeah some words really sooth and I'm sure even Maan doesn't realize how much he's helping her!
Thanks 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago


Awww thats so cute!!!! thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nazsij

awesomeee like always...loved it...maan and geet ki bonding bad reha hai...and vicky and ajay ki bonding ki shuruath bhi acha hai...loved this part so much...


I love Ajay - he reminds me of my cousin - albeit a less mischievous one!

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