ManeetFF Dancing Frm The Ashes link on pg146 - Page 50

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

Hi,

just started reading your story. Couldnt stop - have read only till chapter 8 but turned up here to say how much I love it already.

thanks - welcome aboard

Your story is unique, your emotions or the practicality till now - well defined and the dialogues lovely. I wonder how I didnt read it till now - I remember opening your prologue page a number of times and thinking about a lazy read someday.

Yeah i do that too with a few FFs - there are quite a few lined up! 😆

I am a diehard maaneet fan - and there's no maaneet till chp8, I dont even know if there will be an existence of their relationship and the intensity of it - yet I'm so involved in the story😊 I must tell you, this doesnt happen much😃

I repeat, your writing style is wonderful and your plot is solid.

Thank You - it means a lot!!

Looking forward to reading the following chapters and commenting more👏

I am on chapter 11, and I just loved Nik's father's words before he died. They are so true, and sharing them with geet seemed the right thing to do... very well written chapter

have read the whole of season one and am terribly sad - i know its a maaneet story - but the nice characterisation of Nik and the tragedy of Geet's life just brings out tears in my eyes...

i love the way you set the deal - what a natural and prompt way to do it - wow, just love the khurana clan😆

Yeah dont u just - I love Vicky - he's my fav

finished reading all the parts - wonderful - amazing - totally mesmerising...I loved it through and through...

Your plot is very nice and the emotions the characters feel shine through your words - Maan's apology was heartfelt and the change in Geet's demeanour is subtle . Her initial reaction to the video and finally knowing Maan's purpose was very nicely shown ... loved Nanimaa's words, in difficult times - sometimes it takes somebody else to point out the obvious...

Pls do continue soon...i'm breathlessly waiting for your update 😃

Originally posted by: undisclosed

amru!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...i had to read this as soon as i got the pm!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...maaneet finaly had a civilized conversation...i loved the ease with wich they woke up ...took a shower...had lunch and talked 😍...i got scared for a minute when geet got mad that maan had been in her performance but thankfuly she recovered...ok i am dreaming of what's next😍...waiting for the next part and btw i loved the drawing👏

Originally posted by: PerfectYaRav

Amruta 🤗...what a beautiful update...a new beginning for sure...loved the way Maaneet woke up and talked to each other properly for a change...Geet helping him understand the other dancers was sweet...when she started getting angry i was like oh no...there goes the peace...thanks to Naani ji she saw the real purpose of Maan's dance...thank u my dear for the awesome idea...to show Nik as an angel...it was really touching...lovely pic ⭐️ ...really appreciate your effort to show us what u described...it did the job...so no worries about the technicalties...plz continue...love u sooo much...TC 😊

Originally posted by: mechantefille

Originally posted by: harshdb

so beautiful dear. really.

Maan dancing as shadow & the picture u showed us (heart shape). Geet performance. both conversation on the next day morning. Dadimaa's comments on the Maan's concept of dance. I just cont describe.


for the

update.

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Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

hiii amru...
so u r back
i was waiting for this update for ages...and wow what an update..

Meri beaucoup!

now this is the first proper convo that maneet are having, shedding all the cold vibes that they used to share when in each other's presence..

loved the way u shaped up the entire convo and made it look really fabulous...

There had to be some comfort level naa

geet watching the videos and getting angry on maan and then her nani showing her a different perspective and made ger realise that she is misinterpreting ppl around her and making her life miserable...

She's in distrustful mode - so she's confused and not thinking straight!

and then the note really cracked me up with u confessing that maan's silhouette looking like that of an ape...i cudnt stop laughing..

C'mon - it does look funny!!!

but this was simply fabulous update
keep writing sweetheart
and love u and ur ffs
and will be eagerly waiting for the next part...hopefully soon😉
reva

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Geet behaving nicely with Maan. I think first time she has interacted with him nicely & must say he too. Nice Update. 😊
Happy Independence Day.

Originally posted by: jazzerette

Further reply in sap green :)

Originally posted by: esha143

really nice update...good to see Maan n Geet interacting like friends for once...n Man seeking her help in understanding the troupe members...n the explanation Nani gave for the dance...n made Geet realize what she has been doing unknowingly...hopefully she will try to come out of her shell now...