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Ratna

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Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#481

Amruta 🤗...what a beautiful update...a new beginning for sure...loved the way Maaneet woke up and talked to each other properly for a change...Geet helping him understand the other dancers was sweet...when she started getting angry i was like oh no...there goes the peace...thanks to Naani ji she saw the real purpose of Maan's dance...thank u my dear for the awesome idea...to show Nik as an angel...it was really touching...lovely pic ⭐️ ...really appreciate your effort to show us what u described...it did the job...so no worries about the technicalties...plz continue...love u sooo much...TC 😊

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ninavi

@ninavi

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#482

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#483

Hi,

just started reading your story. Couldnt stop - have read only till chapter 8 but turned up here to say how much I love it already.

Your story is unique, your emotions or the practicality till now - well defined and the dialogues lovely. I wonder how I didnt read it till now - I remember opening your prologue page a number of times and thinking about a lazy read someday.

I am a diehard maaneet fan - and there's no maaneet till chp8, I dont even know if there will be an existence of their relationship and the intensity of it - yet I'm so involved in the story😊 I must tell you, this doesnt happen much😃

I repeat, your writing style is wonderful and your plot is solid.

Looking forward to reading the following chapters and commenting more👏

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#484

I am on chapter 11, and I just loved Nik's father's words before he died. They are so true, and sharing them with geet seemed the right thing to do... very well written chapter😃

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Deepa

@harshdb

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#485

so beautiful dear. really.

Maan dancing as shadow & the picture u showed us (heart shape). Geet performance. both conversation on the next day morning. Dadimaa's comments on the Maan's concept of dance. I just cont describe.

for the

update.

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Tyro

@Tyro

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#486

awesome...

beautifully written...

liked the way they talked...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#487

have read the whole of season one and am terribly sad - i know its a maaneet story - but the nice characterisation of Nik and the tragedy of Geet's life just brings out tears in my eyes...

lovely 😳

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#488

i love the way you set the deal - what a natural and prompt way to do it - wow, just love the khurana clan😆

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#489

finished reading all the parts - wonderful - amazing - totally mesmerising...I loved it through and through...

Your plot is very nice and the emotions the characters feel shine through your words - Maan's apology was heartfelt and the change in Geet's demeanour is subtle . Her initial reaction to the video and finally knowing Maan's purpose was very nicely shown ... loved Nanimaa's words, in difficult times - sometimes it takes somebody else to point out the obvious...

Pls do continue soon...i'm breathlessly waiting for your update 😃