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Posted: 14 years ago

wow ... mind blowing parts...

curiously waiting 4r nxt...

pl update soon...

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updates as always...love emmm 👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome parts...
loved it..
so finall maan confessed...
loved it to core...
thnx 4 d pm...
and cont soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
now the story is move on let check what next how geet understand maan plz soon update
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved both update i feel sad 4 maan
he trying is bst
awww i want geet to undrerstand him
plzzz show sum passion frm geet
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Posted: 14 years ago

Heyy

Awesome updates

Awnn Maan is so deeply in love with her. I am waiting what Geet answers him. So im guessing in the comming episodes Geet will see him a new life.

Maan talked about Shoria, and in a way im glad that hes not asking her to forget him or let him take Shoria's plabace which I thought was really sweet. Maybe that was what was holding Geet back.

Cont.soon


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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updates dear
loved it...
update soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
i am trying not to go in 2nd thread.. so this will be over
150 page..
no point me making a 2nd thread.. ots of parts coming up
:)
xxx

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Posted: 14 years ago
KOSH/Aagosh
Part 20


Maan "you are my wife! Only my! & the thought you talking about... Why is it disgusting? - why?" he shakes her! "- why is it disgusting? Answer me geet.
Geet "leave me! Mujce chor tu!"
Maan "nahi! First answer me. -why is it disgusting! What relationship we share that it makes our relationship disgusting?"
Geet "we don't share any relationship. Specially not the husband & wife. That marriage was a compromise! How could you even think I will take you as you my husband! Maan wake up from the dream world. This is the reality! Try to understand my point of view."
Maan "there are nothing to understand! Nothing! & how dare you forcing talli on me! You knew very well that I don't like her. You know that! You just did not play with my heart! You also played with hers. What makes you even think because you have told me to merry her & I will!"
Geet "you have to merry one day or another!"
Maan "I am already you married. We married in front of the whole world."
Geet "that was the way me saving you & ani! Nothing els!" maan left thoughtless with the last word. What does she mean by saving them!
Maan "what do you mean?" he asked suspiciously. "what are you hiding geet?"
Geet "let me go!"
Maan "no!- not before you tell me what truth you are hiding from me!"
Geet "dushant killed shoria!" maan instantly left her hand! The truth he always wanted to know! The truth he have been waiting for past 10 years! Because of this there was some hatred started to grow within him!
Maan "next!" he holds her hand again.
Geet "because he had some string attraction towards me! Shoria knew! & to win me he killed him!" geets voice was shaking. Barely could utter a word. "he made the situation of me leaving the house unless I merry someone! & only person was mature enough was him! But how could I merry him! My husband muderers! He also had the whole plan to ripe our whole family apart! & shoria always wanted to see them together. How could I break his dream. That's why that day I married you. Maan dug his nail on geets hand in anger. It sarttted to bleed yet she did not make a noise.
maan "that b****! Why haven't you!" he was about to walk out when geet blocks his way!
Geet "no! If you tell this to everyone the whole family will break & I cant afford to break shores dream!" maan looked at geet in shock yet so lovingly like his love just increased with every passing second.
Geet "dushant have changed now. He is recreating every second! That's why he him self not able to establish his life because somewhere he knows, & takes the responsibility of my damage!" tears dropped down. Maan instantly removed them. But geet backed way...
Geet "don't force your self in to me! Please!" geet cried holding her hand! I never looked at you in that way or I will! Please!" she cried & ran way. Maan left in shock & confused.

Maan "there are no way I am leaving you alone! Nor I am leaving my life without you."

He flowed geet.

Later on the afternoon geet avoided maan in every possible step. The thought he loved her since the age of 14 left her shaken! What she have done! Involved him!
Maan "why are you avoiding me!"
Geet "maan! Tu ja ahiase!"
Maan "no! You will be with me! Every second! Every moment! Just like you used to!"
Geet "maan!- Move!" she looks at him for few second then was about to walk off when maan hold her hand infront of everyone. She snapped in stately.

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Posted: 14 years ago

kosh/Aagosh
Part 21


Lady "awe! If he is calling you this lovingly go na beta!"
Geet gives her a uncomfortable smile & flows maan.

Talli sat at the corner. Heart broken. She felt like crying every time how maan possisevly takes geet way.
Geet "what is it?"
Maan "I want you!"
Geet "enough! How can you even think like this maan! I have told you! Nothing! Nothing at all like this will happen! "
Arjun stood there, where geet failed to realise!
Arjun "you have to move on now or later! Why not now! You can not leave in shores memory forever!"
Geet looked at both in shock!
Arjun "it's you who always decide what to do with your life & being a father I am taking that right. I am not letting you destroy your life."
Maan stood at the back arm crossed. Confident with what's his father was saying.
Geet "papa ab bhi!"
Arjun "what's wrong? I see no reason for your no! It's time for you to move on! & maan is perfect!" geet gave one angry glare to both & walked out.

She did not like this force nor she wanted to move on. Maan flowed in her bedroom.
Maan "why are you denying?"
Geet "enough! It's enough! Why don't you understand!"
Maan "I don't want to!"
Geet "maan! You are in high temper now! Young! You don't know what you are talking about. You need time to think everything through!"
Maan "I have! & for past 10 years that's what I am thinking. I only love you!"
Geet "you don't! You don't live me! It's the thought! Because the thought of me being your wife! It somewhere pressurised you to have feelings for me!"
Maan did not like that word at all.
Maan "how do you know I have no feeling for you! How do you know? Have you ever seen me how I stay wake night after night to see you! Have you ever seen me in those past 10 years... Have you ever turned round to see me hiding behind the pillar for you. Have you ever seen me?
Geet left shock...
He takes her to his room forcefully... Giving her all the letter he wrote in past 10 years...
Maan "have you ever read any of my letter? Have you ever tried to understand my feeling! It's always you! Always you!"
Geet "maan! This is wrong?" he relax his finger on her lips!
Maan "don't you dare call my love wrong! You might not live me but I do. & that's one of the best thing happen to me!

Maan ruses out... Leaving the engagement hall...

It's 4 am when maan returns. Geet again worriedly sat in the hall. Waiting for him.
Geet "kha tha tu? Do you realise how worried everyone was!"
Maan "tujce mathlab! You always think I am wrong! In everything!" he was drunk & nearly stumbled when geet catches him. Helps him.
Maan "you thunk my love is fake! Not true!"
Geet "maan! Go & sleep!"
Maan "no! No I won't!"
Geet takes him to his room then leaves for hers.

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