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Zahra

@-Zahra15-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#791

loved all the parts...at least that talli knows ke maan doesnt love her but his wife, geet...n geet cnt she understand that he loves her...he only used her for her ownself...an admist all these poor maan kept on suffering...continue soon n thnx for the pm...cnt wait to read what happens next...

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gangesegb

@gangesegb

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Posted: 14 years ago

#792

wow!!!!!!!

all da updates were simply amazing...

loved it...

plz cont soon...

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saadi88

@saadi88

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Posted: 14 years ago

#793

ohh.read all the updates in 1 go..beautifully written,i must say.just luvd the way maan xpressed his feelyngs..superb.do cont. Soon.

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#794

Maan "in your selfish reason you have forgotten that a heart falling for you!" maans word came back with same strength. No weakness. Like nun of her word have any effect. "what's my fault? Hu! What's my fault that the day I realize the meaning of wife... I only looked for your face! The day I understand the real word of love I only found your name!"
Geet left speechless! She could not believe he would say such words!
Maan "what's my fault that every second, every moment I only dream of you... Every letter! Every gift... Every object only reminded me of you!"
Geet did not utter a word!
Maan "what's my fault that a 14 years old boy lives in a hostel with the thought worry, he have a wife back home! His every thought... His every second passed by worrying how well you be! What you must be doing! That fact he have a wife-... Left him with a hope... Left him on a dilemma yet he fought to find his heart. Which only love you!"

Maan "love bro! Always do! I can live a life with you lost in his thought but I can't live a life you being lonely... With someone els!... I can't see my life without you. i literally have tears in my eyes .. and a strange pain in my heart ... I cud feel every emotion ... I love u love u love u lots for wrtiing these lines .. they're beautiful ...

loved the confrontation ... atleast now Geet cant deny his feelings towards her anymore ...

thank god Maan made it clear to talli that he's not interested

thank u shooo much for the awesome double updates

love ya

Sana

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Supriya

@priyanka86

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#795

thanks for awesome updates..

part 18-Maan "like she waits for bro! I will wait for her forever!"

that was lovely.. finally talli knows the truth..gud for her and maaneet as well

part 19- there argument was much needed.. how can geet b so selfish..

she din't find it wrong to marry shoria's younger brother bt when he has sum

feelings for that's wrong and disgusting.. y? she felt hurt by maan's behaviour but

what about him geet never thought of his feelings be it there marriage talli or now..

pls continue soon will b waiting for 😲

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bahane

@bahane

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#796

thank you very much
interesting conversation between maaneet👏⭐️
sometimes we prefer to be in past memories rather than accepting to change our view ,and i think geet is afraid to start a new relationship specially with a strong and pure love from maan side
please continue soon ( please update your other ffs tooo)

Edited by bahane - 14 years ago

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Aashi_saphire

@Aashi_saphire

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#797

super duper updates!!!👏
lovd it!!!😃
waiting 4 d next1 !!!😳

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kareena32

@kareena32

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#798

FINALY maan has tell her what is in his heart i like it both are in bad situation i wonder what will happen now that maan had confront geet she wont accept him that easily she loves shoria very much