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Posted: 14 years ago

KOSH/Aagosh
Part 22


MY BLODGEY UNEDITED


She stood in front of shores picture. Lost in her thought. She did not want to move on & here maan won't give up! He will do every possible thing to make her guilty- everything!
Geet "what shall I do?" she cried! "what can I do?... I don't like him! I never ever seen him in that way!" she covered her face. Then suddenly two strong hand covered her waist. Hugged her from the back. The warmth was so inviting! She instantly lost her self. Falling in his embrace. Her ready eyes twinkled. & then his lips engulfed hers. His tongue invaded her mouth. It felt so smooth. So tasteful. Geet closed her eyes with the pleasant pleasure & when he eventually freed her... Geet slowly whispered "shoria!"
Maan instantly broke way... Even in him, in his touch she only sees him! Something he have to leave with...
Maan "maan! Just maan!" geet opens her eyes... Pushing him off instantly. Shocked. But maan comes back with a force. Bringing her back in his embrace. He gently stroked her cheek...
Maan "I love you... Only you. Why can't you give our relationship a name? Why is it impossible? Why can't you think like me!"
Geet "maan! Leave!" she straggled again. Talli was passing by when she seen this. She peeped through window as maan closed the door!!!!! Maan & geet in there embrace. Well she could easily guess geet was straggling to be free. She ran off in tears again.
Maan "I love you... I love you!"
Geet straggled with each word yet somewhere those words was melting her...
Maan "I love you!"
Geet "maan try to understand! Leave me!"
Maan "you know I will do something stupid in anger! You know me very well!"
Geet "that's why leave me!"
Both feel on the bed. Maan stroking her ceek with his nose...
Maan "I love you... I love you... I love you... I love you... Love you... You..." his voice disappeared as there lips met. Geet closed her eyes instantly. Trying to block every thought as possible! She never looked at him in this way or she will, but the other fact was she could never leave him to die! She knew maan more then anyone! Better! Even if she refuges him now he will end doing something in anger...
He was drunk yet he had the control... It's the same feeling as shoria used to kiss her. It was maan but she could only see him. No one els.. As he changed position from one side to another... His light brown eyes.. Looked exactly like shoria. Was she ilusinating or was it really him... A certain glow came in her face. Which gave maan the strength to go further without realizing geet only thinking it's shoria. His hand slowly took off her dupataa... Untying her hair... Something he always loved. Her untied hair. Her beauty was more vibrant. It stood out. She gave another smile as maan kissed her forehead... Exactly the way shoria used to... He slowly took all her bangle off, one by one... Then gently stroked his index finger Along the collar line... Sliding her blouse down.
How couldn't she believe this wasn't shoria. Everything... Every step he was living her like him... How couldn't she! His lips flowed gentle kiss. Tweaking her sensation. Re waking her physical desire. Geets hand slowly slides round maans neck. Gently giving him peck... Her eyes still mild close... Barely seeing anything with we tears. Only shorias thought... He kissed them way along with turning the light off.




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Posted: 14 years ago
KOSH/Aagosh
Part 23


sorry for mistakes

MY BLODGEY UNEDITED


After 1 hour... It's only 6am. The morning sun started to burn geets bare skin. Maan covered them both. Closing the curtain. She was in deep sleep. He left her exgusted... But this step was nesesarry other wise she would never accepted him as her husband! she spines round coming more in to maans embrace. He smiles twisting his hand round her bare back... Slowly sweetly kissing her hair... She smiles in her sleep.
Maan did not sleep all night! Yet he couldn't ignore to capture this beautiful moment... He kissed her forehead. Her lips was still whispering of shorias name... It did hurt him somewhere, but he had the confidence that this name will be replaced with his soon. Very soon... He gently took his cloths from the side... He wanted geet to confront everything! With out any argument accept the fact what just happen few hours back. It was his love... Just his... He kissed her again before disappearing.

Maan woke up near the afternoon. Took a cold shower... He could still smell geet within him. Just her. His whole bathroom smiled along with him. He just wanted to run outside & hug her... Kiss her... Love her... Over & over again...

Maan gets ready & walks out near the afternoon. Finding all the lady giggling... Getting everything ready for the wedding! No geet! He looked worried.
Maan "mom! Where is geet?"
Tallis eyes was bright red but he did not care. He wanted to know where was his wife.
Avantika "I think up in tress!" maan hurriedly went up... Amongst the cloths geet sat there with her diaries. Her long wet hair dribbling with waters. There was tears on her eyes. Drop by drop started to wash all the ink way...
Maan "geet!" she did not turn round. Just looking at the town that laid at far corner...
Maan "geet!" she still did not look... Then in one jerk he picked her upon his arm. She still did not look at him...

Luckily there room was not far way... He took her in his room... Made her relax... Then cupped her face... "why you are not scything anything! Geet...! - tu Mujce bath ku nahi karti! Tu bath kar na! Geet!" she pats her cheek but she turns round hugging the pillow tight. Crying... Maan kissed her exposed back... Just like the way shoria used to do when she was upset... Angry... Then he hugged her tight. Slowly bringing her in his embrace.
Maan "tu roh ku rahi hi! Just tell me why are you crying... Geet all to me!"
Geets dupatta was on the floor while her big long skirt covered the whole bed... Still in maans embrace. The fact, how could she tale this bug step... Even knowing in her thought... Her brain there was only shoria. Maan was no where! They staied like that for hours until geet spoke up...
Geet "I need time!"

After 2 weeks...

Anis weeding was all done. Everything seems to calm down allot while geet could barely look at talli. She had that guilt in her! Something geet could not face. Maan noticed, & he also noticed her distance from him! She barely talk or barely even look at him! Time! Something she needs to go through! She needs accept the fact. The fact she needs to move on! The fact maan is her husband.

Arjun "take her out somewhere!" avantika agreed, they knowing maans intention in every way he is not willing to leave geet...
Avantika managed to convince her to go with maan.

Everything is ready. Maan packed the last thing. Geet touched everyone's feet & off he went.

Dushant somewhere did not like it, but he needs to accept the fact! Geet never be his.

Maan "tu tik toh hi na!"
Geet nodes.
Maan "tujce pata hi ham kha ja rahi hi!"
Geet nodes for a no.
Maan "shimla!" another role of tear dropped from geets eyes. "mujce pata hi... That you & bro went there for... He hesitated for a minute... The thought geet have touched by someone els except him, somewhere he did not like... & the thought she always is shorias! ... He drove. Blocking everything. Knowing well that's something he have to live with. Something he could not change... Something he respect... That how much they loved one another. How much they belongs to one another even after his dead... She kept him alive with in her. How lucky is he. Will she do the same thing for him.

They arrived at the airport.. & then to shimla.

Same hotel! Same room! Everything was same! She could not understand maan! Why he reminded her everything of shoria.
Geet looks at him questingly... Maan smiles & cups her face.. "I want new memory over your old!"
Geet sadly smiles...

First couple of days she staid quit. Maan did everything to cheer her up... Somewhere she felt touched that any one could love her in this extent!
Both stood near the lake.. Maans non stop bak bak! Started to irritate geet.
Geet "tu chup karega! Aur me javo!"
Maan "mane ka kha?" geet roles her eyes & was about to walk way when he comes & hugs her from the back. Walking along with her. She felt comfortable. Did not push him way. Maan smiles.
Maan "dinner!" geet nodes...

Geet "tujce ka khana?"
Maan "why don't you cook something!"
Geet "umm!"
Maan "why you being so cold cold! Can't you be my normal geet. Like the way you tell me off! & shout... & pats my cheek. Geet burst out in laugh. Messing his hair up going back to there hotel.
Maan "I was thinking of shopping for everyone."
Geet "ha... Ani will come round when we are back!" maan roles his eyes.
Maan "no! Shopping for us! Not the whole family!"
Geet "stop being so selfish!"



next-
after 2 years...
epilogue



MY BLODGEY UNEDITED

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Posted: 14 years ago

maan revalation too amazing

love it
poor talli
wonderful update
pls cont soonnn
thanks pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
haye rabba ... kia dhaasu updates thay ... Maan is a sweet heart ... he is repeating evry thing the way shoria did . so that the memories can be replaced and she doesnt have to go thru so much pain ...



Edited by sindu555 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
pleaseee Update more ...

Thank You Thank You Thank You
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome parts..
loved it...
thnx 4 d pm...
do cont soon...
Edited by priyanki - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Heyy
Lol fast updates :P
Maan is so presistant lol it's cute. Awn Shoria has a permanent spot in her heart (:. Sorry soft spot for Shoria :P
Omg it's ending so soon?? It is because of a reason or was it planned as a SS (sorta SS :P) ? Reply please.(:
And looking forward to the end.

Star ⭐️
Edited by starasdf - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thx a lot for all this wonderful updates.
I liked the way maan was being honest with his love n his intention.
It really hurts to hear someone else's name from ur love.
But maan took it positively n ever did give up.
Shoria will always be Geet's love.
A fact tat Maan knows.
Glad tat Geet asked for some time, giving their relationship another chance.
Maan need to show his affection towards Geet not his angry mode, she would accept Maan's love.
This is really. U planning to end this story.
Why so fast?

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update dear
loved it...
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome nd fabolous update


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