MG-In love with enemy thread-3 updt@114 new thrd ! - Page 14

i read it b4 u updated me i m speechless

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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww me speachless😍😍😍😍awesome awesome update👏👏👏👏

R u updating or not reply na, n ha wat did u said in ur post on pg1 thanx, hw dare u say dat stop dat crap formalities tumara haq banta hai yaar humpe (right frnds) aur jaise Salman kehta h dosti mein no thank u n no sorry. Luv u darling.

Hey wen r u going 2 continue Rendevous n plz dont end dis soon m not telling u 2 stres 2 much but take ur tym dear bcoz i m in luv wid Incognito even falling again n again n yeah luv ur punjaban also but not as much as u knw he...he...he...he...he...he.

You really wanna knw hw ws it...let me tell u...i read d update last nite around 1 am...n it ws soooo fantastic,intrstng,romantic,thrilling...phew...i ws nt able to sleep .....bcoz i ws thnking wats gonna happn nxt.....ohhhhh geet's outburst...so touchy....again i wud say m speechless n i dnt hav enuf words to praise you.....thanx for such a lovely ff....wud b waitng for nxt update....

THAT WAS A REALLY AWESOME UPDATE.......................U DESCRIBED GEET'S PAIN SO WELL.........................CONTINUE SOON.......................

congrats for the new thread......

First of all congrats for the new thread in love with enemy truly deserves it and it's one of my fav ff's 👏

Omd I an speechless after reading this update and I mean the way you composed the while thing beautiful. Awe adi is upset and has made himself hate geet as he believes she doesn't love maan and that she refused to recognize him which made this belief stronger and the fact that he saw her with dev irked him to think that she's living a happy life with dev while his chief is suffering the pain of geet not being with him. When adi called maan I really liked how you portrayed his emotions my eyes moistened at maans pain of hearing geet going to be someone elses but then he thought between himself of letting geet be happy with dev or being selfish and wanting her for himself but he put all things in prespective and made him believe that he had nothing to offer her if he married her. An awe chothu called informing about geets birthday thought that part was really cute and lightened the atmosphere of maans pain. Seriously maans monologue was written perfectly it was so him and had all the emotions in realistically.

Geets masquerade birthday party wow you surely have outdone yourself the way dev told her the flowers and bracelet wasn't from him but incognito she understood straight away that her chief is here and she wanted to get him before he left her again awe the need was portrayed nicely and then he came forward she recognized by his voice and need asurrance that he was there and not a dream so she stepped forward once a time and maan emotions during this was also the same and so when she realized that it was him she grabbed him so that he couldn't leave her and she kissed him conveying how much she missed him and craved for him and he responded the same. And awe geet not wanting to let go as maan is her need and she wasn't ready for him to go maan felt blissful as she answered his unsaid questions and showed her love for him without saying the 3 words and wow the way you wrote the part where he was going and she rushed to get him once it sunk in he was leaving awe that was a magical moment how innocently she asked him not to leave he that it melted him and he didn't want to leave her but he had to go relunctly and oh no geet was in her thoughts about maans word before his departure that she unknowingly said yes to devs proposal which she still is unaware of as before she could realise the goons attacked. I liked her thought when she was thinking that chief was always there when she was in trouble but where was he now but hence he came and rescued his love but have to much info making her out two and two together and I must be honest that was the best revelation the way you put the pieces together and awe how maan was stuck when she was figuring it out and then demanded a kiss which he had to give into and in that one kiss maan gave up anwas tired if hiding his identity and geet understood that this was his chief who was inspector maan swell as guru and awe her emotional breakdown is understandable as she is in the thought that he didn't trust her so hence the disguises but the reason is more deeper which I hope maan has a chance to tell her anyways you must know by now that I loved this update and can't wait to read more 😃 and a big hug to show my appreciation to your writing skill and how much I love this ff 🤗