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Posted: 14 years ago
it took me an hour to read this update!....i guess i read each lina a million times😆
i m speechless!....
awesome!
glad to see that this time maan didn't disguise himself from geet but came to meet her as her chief!...
loved every bit of it!...their dance...their emtions...their convo...everything!....
especially the song...the song was truly conveying their feelings!....
but what did geet do????....she was in trance of chief and she said yes to dev...ohno!....
finally geet know the truth now that all 3 are same!
poor maan!...how he will be able to make geet understand his position????
plzzzz continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
First of all CONGRATS on the new thread👏

Coming to the update it was......well i dont have words (samajhdar ko ishaara kaafi 😉)

Geet anger,complaints everything was justified......and the way u wrote them was AWWWEEESSOOOMMEE!!!!!!

Again u made me emotional and all teary-eyed with the updates specially wen she said how she hated herself for being touched by another man.

The way u portray emotions is unmatched seriously.

Kudos 2 u reet......ki byapok start holo diner 😃

Love shreya
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👍🏼 i m speechless and i m crying
what an update Reet u r fab writer i love Geet's emotions .........................
plz update soon i m having my exams but i vl wait for ur update as always....😊
And Congratz for ur new thread👏
Edited by bel_ali - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiii reet

first things first...congrats for opening a new thread...THREAD 3......
congo shongo
this calls for celebrations...aur issi khushi mein hum masquerade party mana rahe hain😆

u always used to say that i make u blush...
but this time u made me blush with ur update....

well this is looking like mutual admiration society😆

thnxxx for this wonderful update...
what an update.....u covered so much in a single update...passion, longing, revelation, dev's proposal and what not.......

well if this update was such a fine piece.... i am left wondering what will u do when maan will confess his love...i guess all the girls will be fainting at ur feet😆......

and speaking about my suggestions for ur update...i seriously feel u have a way of visualising possible scenarios for ur updates............which simply turns out to be so heavenly when u pen it down ......

i seriously think whatever i had done(PM exchange)...wud be done by any of ur friends/readers..since they love u so much .......and noone can deny a beautiful person like u..........and since some of them are lovely writers...they wud have been able to give u a much more clear picture which probably i had missed out.........

wen u had asked for suggestions for the song....
u got around 50 suggestions...thats overwhelming........i was like WOW>.....what an enthusiastic response......

the song selection was simply superbbbbb....
of the three songs...i have heard only unbreak my heart before...and i was simply delighted to hear that song once more in context of ur update....
just made my day...
the other two songs wer also melodious and upped the beauty of ur update...loved them.....

as far as the update goes.......u didnt miss even a single emotion...........
romance, passion, drama,sorrow......

the crackling chemistry between maan and geet was explosive and electrifying......
geet recognising maan and the way she voiced her emotions in the concluding part of ur update left me tearyeyed.....and it was heartwrenching to read that..........
the masquerade ball was as expected by me mindblowing........

each and every scene is update has got ingrained on my mind and its like they are dancing in front of my eyes....................

this was truly a magnificent update...

and we wer right in guessing that when u say ur update sucks...it means..its rocking.........

i am completely satiated with this powerpacked update...
i loved it to the core and u did completely justice to it... and as i wished this was not a kekta mata MU.......u brought so much of sophistication and class to this update, ff, characters, ambience......that i am bowled over....................

i hope now u understand the reason why i am hopelessly in luv with ur writing......
its undoubtedly among the best....
who will believe if i say this ff is penned by a medico student......😆

but luv u and ur ffs....
keep writing

god bless u.......

and thnxxxx for acknowledging my tiny efforts( i am so shameless...not an ounce of humility 😆)....although i feel that the comments that i give is nothing compared to updates that u give thats filled with so much love....
thankkkkk you once again for this breathtakingly beautiful update

reva😃
giving u lots of jhappies and kissies to u...muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

P.S>-- i heard u r withholding one update thats ready...but u r making so many changes....
UR delete button will be crying...coz u press it so many times.....
ab batao kitne words delete kiye tumne............
tumhara haath nahi dukhta kya..........😆

had i been in ur place i wud have asked someone to type the update incase if they want one.....me such a lazy bum😆
Edited by Dreamy_Mystique - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
you left me speechless with the update
awesome yaar
loved their convo at the en...loved it to the core....
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG! she finds out!! they kissedd yaayayahhhh
but she is engaged to dev? What?
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg reet!!!!! wat a amazin,gr8, fabulous marvellous update it was......how can sum1 blend every emotions so lovingly n gr8ly......i can sense ur luv n dedication 4 writing frm ur ff.....u r a gr8 writer...really...bliv me i ws literally cryin,smilin yest. while reading.....i ws dreamin each n evry dialoge n stuation u wrote.....i luvd d dialogue when maan called her...LOOKING 4SUM1....i ws cryin wen she ws searchin him,wen she ran 2 stop him,wen she broke down b4 him after recognising him.....i ws jumpin wid joy wen she kissed him,n she recognised him....finally she knows him by face nw....bt i hate dat dev...i felt lyk killin him...i ws imagining d situation...n i found dat dev chipkoo typs...although he has a big personality in ur ff..bt still....bt i luvmy maaneet more den i hate dat dev...n i'm happy 4 dem.....thanx reet 4 givin us r maaneet in a new avtaar.....n ya hw can i 4get...thanx 4 d pm sweety n thanx 4 mentionin my name in ur thank u list..it means a lot.plzcon.soon dear..luv u always...:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
congos 4 the new thread..............n thnx 4 such a wonderful n loooooooong update.........jst loved it😃
loved the essence of their passion .... their dance..... their care..... their unsaid confession to each other loved every bit of it........ finally geet has cum to knw maan aka guru aka cheif is one person only.... his saviour his love...... but wat she said after recognisiing him literally made me cry😭..... 4 me this was the best update till nw.......
but wat is bothering me is dev's proposal..... she said yes to him.... though absent minded but still😕😲..... wat if maan cums to knw abt dat???? wat wud be his rxn???😕😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
you made me cry....😭...its really beautiful update....
Angel.Khushi thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update....😊😊😊😊😊👏👏👏👏👏👏
Edited by kinju100 - 14 years ago

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