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m.jatain

@m.jatain

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1331

hey reet when will u update part33...do update soon...and except my request also...do pm me tooo...

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AnamikaLuvsMaan

@AnamikaLuvsMaan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1332

congrats for the new thread👏

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AnamikaLuvsMaan

@AnamikaLuvsMaan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1333

In Love With Enemy wow..!

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baisakh45

@baisakh45

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1334

Maan didn't know when he uttered those words...will come back to him one day ...and stab him till death ...

Human beings often play with words ..and in rage spill something which they even don't mean...but destiny plays with them.,..making the words uttered by them to come back to them like boomerang ..!

what's this?plzzz don't tell that u r going to unite dev & geet & maan will have to utter it "mrs malhotra"plzzz don't do this ever.plzzz.if u can't unite them make them dead.but not with someone else.we can see them dead but not with anyone else.plzzz at least keep this simple request.plzzz

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sneha

@snehaluvmaaneet

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1335

No no no it s nt posible
no part aftr 28 m feelng like cryng here bcz i have 2 wait 4 nxt
REET standingomsn 2 u the way u wrte
ths story made me official mad m readng it frm last 9t even n't carng i have 2 sleep i jst falen wth my phne screne n indiaforums and ths maskman's lovestory
when i gotup again started

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sneha

@snehaluvmaaneet

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1336

Cmng to story NO WORDS JUST WOW SUPERAB
I JUST LOVED IT TOOO MUCH
evry part their frst kiss
her submisn
his care
her wait pain
his pain
the way he made her wear sweatshrt
the way h care 4 her
never letng her alone
the way he fekt pain i too felt
i was cryng at sme moments
smiling when he made her blush
i feel numbnes n their intimacy
frm last day m n their world n my hostel room bed i havnt talkd 2 frndz
so involved
UR CONCEPT TSTORY LINE SO DIFRNT INTRSTNG LOVNG enjoyng gurmeet and drishti feelng ths
i was scared at violence he kiled those man

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sneha

@snehaluvmaaneet

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1337

I dnt knw wht i have wrten
wht m wrtng
knw just 1thng
plz plz update it plz

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maanmeet1

@maanmeet1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1338

hey reet hru? logged in after a very long time n chked for d update here n muskanp's new FF...waiting for ur update has its own charm bt got to read few updates together and man...wht to say...u r constantly evolving as a writer...

u wont remember me coz u have so many fans bt i use to ask many questions abt MSK being chief and is dev good or bad...u r among my fav writers here...i wish someone makes a serial or something on ur FF...its brilliant...

U WERE BEST AND NOW U R BESTEST 😊 OR ANYTHING WHICH IS MORE DEN BEST...

wht apt choice of songs...few are new for me and i searched dem and did i like dem?...i loved dem...i read d story once again...read dat u wont b updating soon...and wht to say for dat...i was gonna ask for an update just like others bt study comes 1st...

the way u have written der emotions, turmoils, expectations, love, insecurities were apt...felt like dey were teenagers in love...while reading i felt der pain, der happiness joy, anger, helplessness, i cried, smiled felt shy at times...in short ur story touched my heart n soul...

in love vd enemy--d captor itself is very different and interesting...wanted to write so many things bt ran out of words...what to say...may b someone tells u about my comment and u read it...

i wanted dis to go on and on...i wish to c dem together...hope ur line mrs. malhotra never becomes true...

so much love, pain...amazing...i fell in love vd dem, der love and every word written by u...these guys r taking risk bt his risk is doubled coz of her and she is ready to leave everything for him...awesome...when will v get to know more abt him? when r u gonna update? sirf itna batado...can u give ur write up to someone who can post it here? oh man i dont wanna disturb u in any way bt dying to read it further...

wish u d best in life and may someone takes ur story and make a serial...i wish someone makes a serial on muskanp's deewangi...

god bless u guys and keep entertaining us like dis...