FF Pyaar Ka Woh Pehla EhsasTHRD2-NOTE/90 - Page 19

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NOTE:

OK,So i have decided to show Maan-Geet Consumnating their marriage.At first,I had doubts on my ability to write and decided not to.But after thought,I came to the decision i would.I am only 14 and have never had sex myself so i don't really know much about it,how it feels etc.. apart from Films,Dramas and books.I tried to do justice to the scene and the feelings they experience.I wanted to make it realistic.Whilst i sat there in front of my lappy,I was soo nervous and scared.I just kept reading the sentence in bold below and not knowing what to write next.I was shivering.It felt like my Suhaag Raat/Morning,Not Geets.Maybe thats how attached i am to my characters.If there any mistakes.Pls forgive me,I tried my best and am happy with the outcome.I hope you are too.Pls comment and tell me what you thought of it.

Sara x

Part 56

He pulled me back down into the bed and wrapped the duvet around us.He wrapped his arms around me and pulled me close,Leaving no distance between us or our bodies.

I gazed at him and he looked back at me,his eyes full of love.He began tracing patterns on my hand gently.He pulled back the collar of the jacket i was wearing slightly and skimmed his nose against the skin there,making me shiver.But not with the cold,with his proximity.He planted butterfly kisses across my neck,moving up slowly towards my face.He kissed the corner of my lips and then moved on to my cheeks,eyes,forehead,even gently kissing my ear.He pulled back slightly and looked at me.He whispered"Geet,Are you ok?" I knew what he was doing,I understood his gesture.He was asking for my approval,making sure i wasn't uncomfortable with it,asking if i was ready.And surprisingly,I was.I was ready for this,this was what i wanted.For him to pull me close and...I nodded my head,Saying my approval and moved closer to him.He tugged on the jacket and the buttons opened,exposing me.He moved his head further down and began to kiss my bare chest and stomach.I held him tighter,Pulling him closer.He hurried up then,as if some deep urge was pulling him,driving him crazy.He tugged at the zip of my pants and took them off whilst i undid his shirt and stroked his muscular chest.It was so perfect!!! Finally,we were both naked.Completely stripped of anything,clothing,shame,shyness.He looked at me one last time and then thrust himself into me.My first feeling was of pain,it hurt like nothing i'd ever experienced before,it burned.I wanted to cry.I pulled him closer and moaned,trying to rid the pain.Then,the pain changed into pleasure as we went further and further,taking me into a completely different world.All i could see was him,I could only feel him,he was everywhere,Surrounding me,overriding me.I heard his moans,giving me more pleasure,making me hold him tighter,dig my fingernails into his back.And finally,we reached that point.I exploded with delight and both our moans became louder and our hold on each other tightened.A few moments later,We lay there panting,regaining our breath.He turned towards me and smiled.I hugged him.

Maan:Geet,I love you.

Geet:I love you too.I really do.

SCENE CHANGE.GEETS HOUSE IN NEW YORK.

Meera:Why haven't they come back yet? We've been waiting since ages.

Auntie:Dont worry,They'll be back soon.Let them enjoy on their own for abit.

THEY BOTH GIGGLE.

SCENE CHANGE.GEET AND MAAN.

I looked at Maan,He was still sleeping.I stroked his face,blushing.I sat up and yawned,assessing my body.It was still the same yet it felt so different.I felt content,happy.It felt nice.I looked at the clock.Shit!! It was 2 o clock!!! Our flight was at 7,we had to pack and go back and tell everyone we were leaving.I shook Maan.

Geet:Maan!! Maan,Wake up!!!

Maan:Let me sleep.Lie down.

He pulled me back down on the bed and trapped me in his arms.

Maan:Hmmm...Geet,Shall we do it again? We need all the practise we can get.We need to become experts.

Geet:(Smiling)We don't have time.Its 2 o clock,Our flights at 7.

He sat up with a start and ran his fingers through his hair.

Maan:Really?Oh God!!! And i was enjoying it here aswell.

Geet:Me too.I'll miss it.

Maan:We'll visit.How about you Pack and i'll go downstairs and check out?

Geet:Ok.Sure.

He ran towards the door and was about to walk out when i stopped him.

Geet:Look down.

Maan:Oops.Errmmm...

Geet:Your clothes.Here.

Maan:Thanks.What would i do without you?

He quickly kissed me and ran out of the door.I put on a robe and started packing,There wasn't much to do,Everything was back at the house.i pulled out the suitcase,What was in here? What was Meera's surprise for me to wear? I emptied out the bag and found skimpy items made of silk.Oh God!!! It was lingerie,Maan must have already seen it that night when i fainted.What must he have thought? I would kill Meera,She wasn't getting away.I grabbed the clothes Meera had left for me to wear in the suitcase and put them on the bed,They were cool:Shorts and a top.Good for flying.I grabbed a towel and went in the bathroom.I showered quickly and dried myself.Where were my clothes? I was sure i'd brought them inside.Oh Shit!!! I must have left them.I wrapped the towel tighter and went outside tentatively.I could hear Maan's Voice and someone elses.Who was it? I peeked and it was a guy of our age,I'd never seen him before.I couldn't go out while he was here.I ran back to the bathroom and the door slammed shut by mistake.Oh well!! Looks like i'd have to stay here!!!

Meanwhile... in the room.

Angad:Why did the door slam?

Maan:I don't know.I'll go check.

I walked past the bed and saw some clothes laid out.They must be Geet's.Had she forgotten them here? And thats why she'd come out but gone back in seeing Angad? I picked them up and took them with me.I opened the Bathroom door and walked in.Stood in a corner was Geet,Wrapped in a towel.Drops of water dripped down her body tantalisingly,Arousing me,my emotions.She looked relieved to see me and ran towards me.

Geet:Thank God!!!

I stood there looking at her.My hands automatically began twisting around her waist,Pulling her closer.She didn't shy away,like i'd expected.Her shyness had gone,disappeared.She was comfortable around me now.Good!! I drew patterns on her waist and dryed the water with my fingers.

Geet:(whispers)You always look for excuses to come close to me.

Maan:(aggressively)I don't need excuses, I have the right.Youre mine.

Geet :Really?

Maan: Should i prove it?

I pulled her closer again,she was leaning on me.

Geet :As much as i'd love that, I don't think we should, Should we? Otherwise, we'll be here all day. And we have a flight to catch and a lot of packing waiting for us.

Maan :(Huskily)Tonite.

Geet: On a plane? I don't think so.

Maan: Tomorrow Night doesn't sound as seductive, Does it?

Geet :( Laughs) Nope. Now go,So i can get changed.

Maan: Do i have to?

Geet: Yep.Or you'll just stare at me and dream.

He left and i dressed.Who was outside? Only one way to find out!!! I walked outside,nervous.I always was when i met new people.It was a guy,Quite young.He was ok looking,Maybe 6/10.He wore jeans and a shirt and he was sat laughing and talking to Maan.

Geet:Errmmm.Hi.

Angad:Hi,You don't know me do you?

Geet:No,Not at all.

Maan:This is Angad,Geet.He was the doctor who came the other night and he's a friend of mine from high school.And today,i met him downstairs in the lobby and i thought i'd bring him up.Last time you met him,you were unconscious.

Geet:Ohh,So youre the doctor? Thanks alot for that day.

Angad:Its my job.So,youre better now?

Geet:Yeah,I feel great.

Angad:Good,I said it was just a common cold but Maan,Your Husband was worried to hell.He thought you were dying or something.

Maan:Ok,Ok,Enough Making fun of me.Angad,We need to go.Were flying out today and we haven't packed yet.

Angad:Well,Have a good trip and ring me Maan.You know,Using a PHONE?Something you failed to do all these years?(Smiling mischeviously)And BTW,Youre shirts wet.Look.

Maan:Oh Ermmm...Ok,I'll ring you.

Angad:Bye.

He left and we walked downstairs to the taxi waiting for us.He shoved the suitcase inside and came and sat next to me.I snuggled close to him and rested my head on his chest.We arrived back at the house quite quickly.There was no traffic.Everyone was waiting for us inside.Meera ran up to me as soon as we stepped inside and hugged me.Then,she dragged me upstairs.I looked back at Maan with an apologetic face.Once upstairs,She sat me on the bed and ocked the door.

Meera:Ok,Spill.

Geet:What?

Meera:Now.

Geet:What now?

Meera:Dont act that innocent,Geet.

I wasn't going to tell her anything.It was private.

Meanwhile downstairs...

Uncle:Are you Ok? Did you have a nice time?

Maan:Ermmm...Yeah.

Uncle:Good,I hope you enjoyed it.

Maan:Errmmm...Yes.I'll just be back,I need to get something.

I got up and fled.Was he REALLY asking me about my first night with his niece? Seriously? And what was i supposed to say? Oh,Yeah,Your niece is great at sex,I loved it? I walked past Geet's room and heard them both arguing.Again.

Geet:Meera.Its private.when you get married,I wont ask you about your sex life,Will i?

Meera:But you will,Though.Pleaseee!!!! Atleast tell me why you rated him 0/10 in that matter?

Geet:I...I didn't.

What? She rated me 0? Seriously? Well,Id show her!!

Meera:Yes,You did.

Geet:It was a mistake.

Meera:So hes better than 0?

Geet:N...No

Meera:Ohhh,So he doesn't even qualify? Hes even worser than 0?

Geet:Oh,Shut up!!! And anyway,what was the need for you to pack all that lingerie in that suitcase?

Meera:You'd need it.It adds a sexy touch.And,no offense but your body isn't particularly curvy.

Geet:Thanks!!!

I got up and walked out of the room,annoyed.Seriously,she was so annoying!!! And i bumped straight into Maan who was stood outside.

END

Precap: MAAN-GEET IN THE HALLWAY.

Maan:So what number was i?

Geet:I..Im not telling,Now let me go.

Maan:I wont.And if you don't tell,Then i'll undress you right here and...😲😳

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lovely update sara...
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Awesome update yaar love maaneet suhagraat continue soon i m waiting

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