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PART 10


Maan reached home and he was fully wet

Everyone was shocked to see him in this condition

Dev:bro kya hua aap to poore bheeg gaye hai

Maan:kuch nahi

Naintara:kya hua veerji kisi ne aap ko gira diya kya

Annie:bataiye na bhai

Vicky:haan bro

Maan:chup bilkul chup mujhe kisi ne nahi giraya hai

Vicky:toh kya hua

Maan:nadi main ek larki gir gayi thi main useh bachane ki koshish kar raha tha aur wo mere upar chillane lag gayi paagal ki tarah

Dev:maan singh khurana par kis ki itni himmat hui

Maan:devvv

He was going back to his room and he was struggling to walk

Dev:bro aap aise kyu chal rahe hai

He glared at dev

Vicky:lagta usi larki ne kuch kiya hoga

Annie:haan

Eveybody started laughing

HANDA HAVELI

Geet reached her room hiding from everyone but her mother saw her

Rano:geet kya hua tu to puri tarah bheeg gayi hai

Geet:kuch nahi ma wo main paani main gir gayi thi

Rano:theek hai jaldi se taiyar ho ja hume abhi mandir jana hai

Geet:theek hai

KHURANA HAVELI

Naintara:chalo annie hume mandir jana hai

Annie:par kyu

Naintara:areh bhul gayi kya hume geet ke bareh main pata karna hai

Annie:chaliye

Naintara:par ghar main dev aur Vicky nahi hai hum kiske saath jayenge

Annie:maan bhai

Naintara:kya

Annie:haan main bhai ko bolti hoon ki hume mandir jaana hai wo hume drop kar denge

Naintara:theek hai

Annie went to his room

Annie:bhai kya aap hume mandir drop kar denge

Maan:main kyu dev ko bolo na

Annie:dev bhai ghar main nahi hai

Maan:theek hai chalo

They got ready and went towards the temple

On the other hand geet and rano reached the temple

Geet met her friend outside the temple

Geet:ma aap chaliye main abhi aati hoon wo apni dost se baat karke aati hoon

Rano:theek hai

Mean while maan reached the temple

Annie:bahi aap nahi chalenge

Maan:nahi tum log jao main yahi pe khara hoon

Geet started talking to her friend and maan started roaming here and there

Geet turned back to go towards the temple when she bumped into someone and was going to fall when a strong hand encircled her waist. She closed her eyes due to fear but she felt that some one was holding her . She opened her eyes and was shocked to see that it was maan

Geet:tum

Maan:haan

Geet:tumhare kaaran aaj main gir jaati

Maan:toh maine hi tumhe bachaya hai

Geet:tum ek number dusht danav ho

Maan:kyaa

Geet:haan sirf dusht daanav hi nahi balki dus sir wala raavan and started giving him gaalis

Maan was getting more angry and he closed her mouth with his hands


Maan:chup bilkul chup

Geet:hmmm hhhmm

Maan:maine kaha na chup kitni bolti ho tum

And geet stamped on maan's foot very badly

Maan:aahhh tum

One of his hand was still on her mouth and the other on his leg then geet bite his hand and once again stamped on his leg and ran away laughing

Maan:ahhh agli baar mili to choruga nahi

Naintara and annie were taking blessings when they saw geet talking to pandit ji

When she left the temple naintara and annie went to the pandit

Naintara:panditji aap ise jaante hai

Panditji:ise kise

Naintara:wo larki

Panditji:wo useh yaha sab jaante hai wo sukhdev ji ki poti hai

Naintara:theek hai

They left the temple.

PRECAP:DADI TALKS TO DARJI

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Edited by sweety.2 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Very nice part
Love it
Mauhhhhhh
Lovely updatee
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luved it
amazing update
do continue soon
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loved it dear !
u write very nicely 😊
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awwww that was amazing part..loved reading it.
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lovely update
Yayy I fink dadi is going 2 go wiv a proposal 4 geet
Wen is maan gunna find out that his princess is none other than geet
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM
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suparb...................
remainee me there first meet
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its very nice will mind find before dadi talking to dargi that geet is his princess or afterward but yaar at list before marriage
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Awesome update
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