MG FF~PREM KI ANOKHI KAHANI~THREAD 1 - Page 14

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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing update ....keep it up dear.👍🏼& thanx for the pm..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow nice update.. luved dadi's plan.... geet also remembers her prince charming.. thts cool.. cant wait for maneet meet.. continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update ... daadi ka plan kamal hai ....

continue soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
Wowwwwwwwwww
So nice
Loveit
Lovely update
Dadi gonna to blackmail woooo
Looking interestingg....update soon yr ican't wait plz update soon and thanks for the pm and do pm me next part when ever u've update...love u alottttt

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Posted: 14 years ago

wow yaar!

what an update! loved it!
plz update soon!

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Posted: 14 years ago
add me to ur pm list....
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 9

Maan reached hoshiarpur at 1 o'clock

He went inside his haveli and shouted

Maan:dev dadi kaha hai

Dev:?

Maan:dev

Annie came running and started crying :bhai dadi

She hugged maan and started crying more loudly

Maan:kuch nahi hoga dadi ko dev doctor ne kya kaha

Dev:bro doctor kuch bhi nahi keh rahe hai

Maan:dadi kaha hai

Dev:room main chaliye

Maan saw that the room was full of hospital equipments

Maan: doctor dadi kaisi hai

Doctor:mr.khurana mujhe aap se kuch jaruri baat karni hai kya hum bahar jaa sakte hai

Maan:ji doctor

Doctor:mr. khurana aap ki dadi ki halat bohut nazuk hai unhe bilkul bhi stress nahi dena hai

Maan:ji doctor

The doctor left while others were laughing in their mind

Maan:dev tum doctor se dadi ke medicines ke baare main poocho main dadi se milke aata hoon

He went inside the room and saw that his dadi was very pale

Maan:dadi aap kaisi hai

Dadi:hum thik hai

They talked for sometime and everyone came inside the room

Dadi:hum aap sab se kuch jaruri baat karna chahte hai

Dev:ji dadi kahiye

Dadi:maan hum chahte hain ki aap shaadi kar lijiye

Maan:nahi dadi main shaadi nahi kar sakta and he left the room

Dadi:dev jaldi jao uske piche

Dev:haan dadi

He went outside and saw that maan was standing in the garden

Dev:bro dadi sahi keh rahi hai

Maan:tum bhi dev

Dev:main toh bas dadi ke liye keh raha tha

Maan:kta matlab

Dev:aap ko yaad haina doctor ne kya kaha ki dadi ko bilkul bhi stress nahi dena hai

Maan:par

Dev:bro please dadi ke liye

Maan:theek hai main dadi se jaake baat karta hoon

He went inside the room

Maan:dadi main shaadi karne ke liye taiyyar hoon

Dadi:sach beta

Maan:hum pehle delhi chale phir yeh sabke baare main baad main baat karenge

Dadi:nahi

Maan:matlab

Dadi:hum chahte hain ki aap ki shaadi yahi hoshiarpur main kare

Maan:kyaaa

Dadi:haan aur wo bhi jald se jald

Maan:par

Dadi:par war kuch nahi

Maan:lekin dadi yaha koi larki nahi hai

Dadi:aap uski phikar mat kariye naintar aur annie hain wo sab sambhal lenge

Maan:theek hai main bahar jaake aata hoon

Dadi:hmm

Maan:naintara tum dadi ka dhyan rakhna

Naintara:ji veerji

After he left the house everyone started laughing

Dev:dadi aap ne kya acting ki hai

Dadi:wo to hai maan ki haalat dekhne layak thi

Naintara:par dadi hum us larki ja pata kaise lagayege

Dadi:hum kal mandir jaake pandit ji se pata karenge shayad unhe kuch pata ho

Naintara:yeh thik hai

While maan was going to the same place where he met geet

Geet and meera were returning home when geet's scooty was out of control

Geet:meera brake nahi lag raha hai

Meera:kyaa

Geet:haan brake nahi lag raha hai

Meera:ab kya karegi

Then she lost control of her scooty and it hit the pavement on the bridge while she fell inside the water

Meera:geeett

Geet:bachao bachao

Meera:main abhi aati hoon kisiko bula ke

On the other hand maan was reached the place

Maan:agar aaj main princess ko dekh sakta to kitna acha hota

He thought of going back when he heard someone calling for help

Geet:bachao bachao

Maan turned back and saw that a girl was drowning

He opened his shirt and jumped inside the water and scooped her in his arms


Geet:bachao bachao and started shouting

Maan:chup bilkul chup

Geet opened her eyes and saw that someone was carrying her

Geet:yeh kya kar rahe ho choro mujhe choro choro

And started beating her and then splashhh he threw her and came out of water

Maan:kaisi larki hain ek to bachao upar se paagal kahi ki

He came and wore his shirt and waited for few minutes

Maan:wo larki kaha chali gayi kahi wo and gain jumped into the water

He scooped her in his arms and saw that she was not responding

He brought her out and kept her down unconscience


He patted her cheeks

Maan:utho utho kahi yeh mar to nahi gayi

He kept his fingers under her nose and saw that she was not breathing and responding

Maan:utho

He pressed her stomach so that the water can come out but was of no use and then he pressed her chest but no water came

Maan:yeh maine kya kiya agar ise kuch ho gaya to

He then pressed her nose with one hand

Maan:mujhe ab yeh karna hi hoga

Then he took a deep breathe and opened her opened her mouth and blowed into her

After sometimes she coughed and the water came out

Maan:utho utho

She woke up with a jerk

Geet:tum

Maan:?

Geet:jao yaha se sab tumhare wajah se hua hai

Maan:ek toh maine tumhe bachaya upar se tum mujpe chilla rahi ho

Geet:tum ne hi mujhe giraya tha

Mean while meera came

Meera:geet:tum thik to hona

Geet:haan

Meera:chal

Geet:tumse bara saadu maine aaj tak nahi dekha

Maan:kya kaha tumne

Geet:saadu, dus siir wala raavan ,dusht danav

Maan:tum

Geet:haan main and started fighting and beating him

Meera:geet chal

Geet:nahi

Meera dragged her while geet stamped maan's foot very badly and they ran

Maan:aahhh tumko toh main chorunga nahi agli baar

He went home

Precap:none

Prev:PART 8 Next: PART 10
Edited by sweety.2 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey update soon yaar ..am very eager to know wat gonna happen next
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg i loved it and best line was-Maan:utho utho kahi yeh mar to nahi gayi😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update
Loved dadi's acting 😛
Yayy atleast Maan agreed
Wonder how Maaneet are going 2 find out about each other
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM

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