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Posted: 14 years ago
really
yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeey
please yaar deewangi or kashish ko bhi update karo na
its been ages now
love u

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Posted: 14 years ago

Wow again updating.. Waiting...😍😍😍😍😍😍

Previous update was awosome yaar...👏👏👏👏

Muskan Precap made me worried about Sam...😲 Ab bechari ke Nakhun aur ungliya kaun bacayega?????????😭😭😭😭

Ab to Geet ke saath saath MK bhi hai.. Hai babaji Sam ko bacha le na.....😉😉😉😉😉
JAldi se update de do abhi......
Love u dear...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Waiting for page 100 to update? :-D
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Di.. I havnt yet commented for the previous update n u r updating again...... Thats good.... But why u r not showing some reham on Deeewangi n Kashish.....
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oh gr8. me just in time. waiting...
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u luk nice shruti waiting like this
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add on waiting as you are updating

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true roops. @ first u scared me shruti!
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nice comic to help pass time
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-truly magical-
part 157

Khan knocked at the door - r u done yet
Geet - just few more minute
when she came out .. khan just dropped open is jaw & kept gaping at her.
Geet - moo band karo
he gulped the saliva - u look like wow!!!
Geet - page 3 thithli & laughed loud
he shook his head & gave her the complete details. He handed the mike, & gun.
Geet - I can't be wired
khan - then u will be by ur self
she rolled her eyes
khan - gun
Geet - r u kidding I will be checked exhaustively
he looked at her top to bottom
Geet - yah ..page 3 ladkiyun ko bhi


Farmhouse
Maan patted her dry & changed her into a night suit. They went down to have dinner. He made her sit on the chair. He pulled his chair, to sit next to her, she waited for him to sit & immediately plonked herself on his lap. He smiled & pampered her further. They fed each other spilling & licking.

Mk was hyper excited, she didn't miss Geet at all. One she was used to Geet's late nights & two Maan was with her, like she didn't need anything else. She insisted in sitting on maans lap all the while confusing Maan further with her age, she behaved more like a toddler now. At wage moment Maan even decided to ask her wat was her age.

Mk didn't give him chance all the while she forced him to play with her. They started with a video game & then moved on to board games. It was 11pm Mk was still wide awake. Nanny was dozing off. Maan & mk giggled & planned to scare her. They turned the TV volume loud & played some horrifying sound, she jerked up in fear, both Maan & mk fell laughing on the floor.
Nanny really embarrassed. Maan controlled his laughter & asked her go & sleep. Later he carried mk to the room. He made her lie on the bed.
Mk - sto.. sto.. sto.. ry
he told her few stories & dossed off next to her.

In the morning Maan got up early & went for a ride on Sunshine. It was 5.30am Geet was still not back, he was worried but didn't know whether it will be fine to call her, her kind of profession!!! he was proud, but definitely didn't want her to be doing this. He went pass the place where they had spend night!! he got down & walked around, a tear rested on his cheek just thinking about those lovely moment. They never committed but he knew she was his then!!! .. then how could things change now!! just because he spoke some rubbish things she is not his!! No ..thats not possible!! she is mine!!! woh sirf meri hain!!! he roared loud spreading his arms, pushing his hair behind.

He came back & took his shower. He called Daadi & asked to send devansh & anjali to farmhouse.
Daadi - wat r u doing in farmhouse
Maan - we r celebrating Mk's bday
Daadi - who is mk?
Maan - Geet 's daughter he said proudly
Daadi was little taken a back.
He ignored it all.

Maan called prem.
Prem - wow u called.. how have u been??
Maan - could u join us in the farmhouse today, we are celebrating mk's bday
prem - nahi yaar aaj nahi ho payenga, mehak ke school main kuch function hain, if u want I could send prince.
Maan - that will be great
prem - ok he will be there by 11
Maan - thanxs a lot
prem - relax..why thanxs & all


Khurana Mansion
Daadi was totally confused why Maan is celebrating Geet's daughter's bday.
Anni - lets do this, send sam with anjali & devansh
Daadi - who teehk ho ga kya?
Anni - every thing will be fine. They will get some time to spend together.
Daadi - will she agree?
Anni - aap baat karo, she may not refuse u.
Daadi was not sure.


Daadi called Sameera
sam - hai Daadi
Daadi - hello
Daadi cleared her throat couple of time & wondered how to tell her.
Sam - ji Daadi
Daadi - actually farmhouse main bday party hain, if u could join.
Sam kept quiet, she didn't want to take an initiative this time, unless he asks himself.
Daadi - please
sam - nahi Daadi aap please mat kanhiyen
she didn't know if it will be alright.

11am Farmhouse
11am mk was ready, after long pampered morning with Maan. He woke her up at 9, got her ready fed her breakfast. They were drinking milk when they heard sam's car. Maan & mk went out to welcome them. Maan clinched his fist when he saw sam with the kids. Sam could sense the tension. She held her hands up - I am sorry Daadi insisted, I am leaving right away.
He smiled weakly. Meanwhile mk said hi to devansh & anjali. Prince's car just come in then. They all rush to welcome prince.
Prince - I came all alone
anjali & mk - really
prince pulling collar up - umm
anjali - we came with sam aunty
pointing at sam who was looking for the next possible minute to leave. She smiled - ok bye
she just pulled out 2 gift packs. She walked to mk kneed down & gave the gift to her.
Sam - happy birthday
mk ran to Maan & hid herself behind him.
Sam sighed unsure how to please kids, she was never great with them. She walked towards Maan.
She tried again - aap ko gift nahi pasand
she buried her face deep into Maan - I don't accept gift from strangers
sam - I am not stranger, I am Maan 's friend
mk hugs Maan tightly - no ..ur not
sam smiled & gave up - looks like even she knows it.. she said it on a light note straightening herself.
Precap
😲😲😲Geet OH!! OOOPS😡😡
-PREV PART 156 NEXT PART 158-
hope u all like the updates. Love all your comments.
Really love reading them
please do keep commenting.
Love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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