-truly magical- MAANEET FF thread 18

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Araina

@-Araina-

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#501

Originally posted by: my_maan_geet
can anyone plz give me link of maneet xpress...............

here you go. i typed it in search boz n found it. there are more than i threads for it. here's the first one:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/chat-clubs/1633944/maaneet-express

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Muskan

@muskanp

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#502

-truly magical-
part 156

He tried not to look at her in that way, but wat else was he used to ever since he as seen her met her, felt her, how can he suddenly shut himself completely like she meant nothing.. he couldn't!! neither was her looks helping. Why was she still looking at him like that.. why did she still!! he was getting restless & anxious. Her looks were more like teasing his senses, was it she doing unknowingly or did she do it purposely, but he knows for sure his Geet was way too naive!!! then how could she move on..when she was only his!!! how could she..he banged his fist on the dresser.. she stood there numb, probably she didn't even blink with his sudden moment! emotionless, blank, this time blank not able to understand his frustration, but she was probably numb to his temper, it didn't bother her any more, neither did it matter any more!!! she didn't want to be away from him again, she didn't want to push him to a level where he again had to send them away & wait for him endlessly which was painful, aching, agonizing, for she was not sure if Mk would be able to bare it. For her! !! she never understood wat was happening, neither did she understand when they fell in love, when he just become her every thing, when they got married, how she was still alive staying away from him 7yrs nor did she now!!! nothing ever made sense, but every thing was magical ..strangely even those years away from him were very special because of Mk.

She heard the foot steps rushing up, she immediately slipped into her t-shirt & wiped maan's hand that was bleeding & held it behind just in time when mk ran in with a bunch of fresh flowers.
Mk - mama mama I made this for u
Maan looked at Geet, she was still holding his hand behind, she didn't want mk to see is bleeding hand. Then he noticed mk was not stuttering at all.
Mk - main ne sunshine main ride kiya, she is so so so sweet. Woh bounce bounce karta hain! Ha ha ha !! Mujhe sunshine ke saath rahena hain.. she ran out.. main phir se ride karongi.
The moment she went out Maan held Geet's shoulder in amusement - she didn't stutter at all!!
Geet looked at him strangely
he was so delighted, he very very happy - u saw she didn't
Geet - she never does
he smile was washed off - lekin maine tho humesha usse
Geet barked - thats because its u, she turned her face in anger & left
he didn't understand. Because its me!!! but why?? he grabbed her arm & turned her at once - but why? The look on her face, now, could turn his blood to ice. She was furious, why!!!!why !!! !... why!!!! her eyes were spitting fire & she was mad at him, after all this mk went through..u ask why!!!!..how could u Maan?? how could??? why!!!! I don't believe this!!!! she said in repulsion.
Maan - Geet u r not making sense here
her phone rang
she ignored the phone & snapped her arm - u r not making sense.. u never did !!!! u never did !!!!
she spat in anger & answered the call on her phone

Geet - wat is F****** problem
Maan definitely didn't know this Geet, he just left her to answer the call... with those words echoing in his head u never did !!!!u never did !!!!u never did !!!!
Khan - woh dinner party
Geet - umm
khan - 11pm
Geet - I will be there.

Geet finished the call & stood at the window looking at the field.
Mk was riding sunshine & Maan was walking beside her she was happy, smiling, giggling. She got ready & went down. Inhe aache se pata hain, woh inhe kitna miss kartin hain, phir kyun aisen baten karten hain. She went to the kitchen & made dinner for them. She put the dinner on the table. Mk & Maan came in fully muddy. Mk was crying sitting in maan's lap.
Geet - kya huwa?
Mk - da da ...da da ...da da ...da da ...da da ...
Geet looked at Maan
mk took his hand & showed the bruise to Geet.
Geet - kuch nahi huwa baby halka se laga hain
she continued crying, kissing his hand.
Geet - dehko mama ne kya banaya, she pointed the dinner spread.
She as still weeping holding his hand. Maan couldn't believe his bruise could bother his angel so much. It was magical only other person who cared for him so madly was Geet. Mk was Geet in all means to him, she loved him as much, so innocent, so divine.
Geet looked at Maan to convince her.
He snapped out of his thought - see I am perfectly fine sweetheart.
Geet - challo challo dono jaldi se naha ke aavoo.
Mk - we..we.... we.... .. w....w...w...w...w....ill ba.....ba....ba....ba.....th to...to...to........ge....ther???
he didn't understand, he felt bad that she stuttered again. So she did stutter because him & now because of his bruise.
Geet - hain baby u both can bath together.
Maan - yah yah yah !!.. it will be fun, we will do bubble bath.
Mk hugged him & kissed him with all her muddy face.
Geet told nanny to arrange the bath tub & change mk. Nanny took her & went to the wash room.

Geet cleared her throat, he turned to see her.
Geet - I have a some case to look into
he narrowed his brow & looked at her waist
Geet - I will be fine
it was really cute & adorable to the DCP GK.. seeking huby bee's permission.
He definitely didn't approve.
She rolled her eyes - suno tho
Maan - jab tumhe meri baat sun ni nahi hain tho, why r u pretending.. u really do
she pulled his collar jerking him in anger - maine aapki kaun si baat nahi mani
she left the collar in anger & shayad aacha hota aapki koi baat nahi maanthi
tho mat mano .. he jerked off
nahi manongi. She stamps her foot on the floor in anger & goes to the room
he rubs his temple & wonders why was she being so difficult, wat did she want from him.

Now she even regrets their past he thought.

Mk starts screaming from the washroom - da...da...da...da...da...
he instantly smiles & goes to the wash room, she was sitting in the bubbles all around her. She kept blowing the bubble in air. Jal... Jal... Jal... Jal...di.
He immediately changed into his shorts & joined her in the bubble pool. Geet came in to see him bare tone, masculine body, with bubble all over. She immediately looked at the nanny & yelled at her to go out. Maan exactly knew wat was bothering her. But why !!! he really had to talk to her, know wat she wanted, wat was bothering her more of all why was it bothering her now.

She was so tempted to glance all over him, she stopped, stepped close and then leaned against the wall. The vibration of her inner core gave her the answer wat she longed for. The need she craved was deep inside . And as she tried concentrated away, she still could smell the intoxication of his scent and its strong flavor and taste was almost more than she could stand and would not resist.

He tried look away from those yearning eyes. She was beautifully innocent still he thought. Her hair was pulled back with a clip. She seemed so vulnerable, they way she was catching his glimpse, he actually felt consciously flattered. Her eyes really complimented & she was so nave not able to hide, then why??? wat is it she wants??. He closed his eyes & then opened to see, she was gone .. gone leaving him puzzled & baffled, mazed.

Geet rushed down the steps. She drove to her house. She had no time, she had to dress up differently today, it was an important party. She couldn't mess it up. It was a make of do situation for her. She really had to work on the make up to hide all the blue & red blood clots on her face & body. It took her more than an hour to get that look on her.
Khan knocked at the door - r u done yet
Geet - just few more minute
when she came out .. khan just dropped open is jaw & kept gaping at her.

Precap
picnic main sam!!!
-PREV PART 155 NEXT PART 157-

hope u all like the updates. Love all your comments.
Really love reading them
please do keep commenting'.
Love
muskan

Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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Shithy

@M_shithy

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#503

Me first...yappi......................................🥳

Nice update muskaan...

Please sort everything soon;.

Edited by M_shithy - 14 years ago

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nan_10

@nan_10

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#504

lovely ....geet trying her best to whoo her husband who already fida on her but poor maan not able to understand.... need to understand more abt mk.....nice bubble bath..waiting to where the dinner is at

Edited by nan_10 - 14 years ago

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Shruti Jain

@smj1977.shruti

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#505

she never stammers

wow

geet is right in her own way

how can maan ever think she moved on

and why is Sam on the picnic😡

Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago

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Sameenaas

@Sameenaas

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#506

Awesome update..... Luvd Geet drooling over Maan 😳 😳 😳
So mk doesnot stammer.. Its only wen she is with Maan.. Poor girl...
So Khan shocked to see Geet.... Hope Maan also sees her.....
Wat is Sam doing there 😡 😡 😡

Edited by Sameenaas - 14 years ago

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Araina

@-Araina-

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#507

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awesome ud

i'll say it was surely worth refreshing the page 5 times in a minute. 😆 😆

uffoo, both of them need to sit together and settle their scores once and for all

just like maan, i love it when mk doenst stutter.

hehehehe it was cute how, for once, geet was seeking hubby's permission. 😳

but as usualy they end up fighting. ufff

well, if khan is gaping @ her than maan would pass out if he saw her. 😳

that would be a delight.

now what is this party for?? 😕

and samm!!!!! 😡

nd yes, if you dont mind, when u ud next, can u post the link of the kind of dress gk is wearing???

pls.. i would love to see how she looks... pls... 😛

Edited by Princess_Khushi - 14 years ago

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#508

how dare sam come on our picnic!!!!!!!!!!!!😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

kya yaar teen updates=6days se tu hume picnic ke sapne dikha rahi hai..aur abhi bobm phoda!!

not done muski😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

so its 6th day end right???????😭😭😭😭

babaji bas ek aur din!!!😭😭😭😭

and dare u go acc to GHSP time range!!!😡😡😡😡

waha to ek din=2 weeks!!!😭😭😭😭

i hope geet gets angry on maan..how can he even think that she moved on!!!!😭😭😭😭

mk doesnt stutter.....then why was geet blaming herself...about the premature delivery??? i thot wo isliye bol rahi thi...tu bhi na ...twist pe twist....

are u like gonna use that song??? hero wala?? plz plz plz muski.....use karo na...for their milan....😳😳😳😳😳

Edited by aashluvsmaan - 14 years ago