MG FF:THE GIFT OF LOVE!!!!~~ PART 45:page 123 - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
luved it
awesum update
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62

Oh toh they are nt married😕

U broke my dream
Liked the update
1st tym in any FF im nt liking Dadi at all
Loved Maan's concarn for her
He loves her madly
Wanna knw wat happend in past
Plz update soon n lil longer update plzzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: MSgayatri

i guess that i am missin out smtin but isnt arjun bro of geet??

then how come he is gettin engaged to annie an geet dsnt hv any family now??

First of all thank u so much for ur interest in my FF.I hope its not thst boring.Wel the name ARJUN was actually my mistake .I gave the same name to 2 characters 😆 unintentionally created confusion in the mind of readers.Ok, i vl clear it nw.ARJUN HANDA is Geet's bro and ARJUN rathode s NT's bro.They r 2 different people.....
Edited by madhubala123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Oh toh they are nt married😕

U broke my dream
Liked the update
1st tym in any FF im nt liking Dadi at all
Loved Maan's concarn for her
He loves her madly
Wanna knw wat happend in past
Plz update soon n lil longer update plzzzz

Oh sorry............marriage vl take place after a long time....... but it vl surely tke plce in te most dramatic way..........Initially i ddnt want to giv such an image to Daadi.But somehow the story demands this...nd vl try 2 make my update longer for sure.........😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65

Really busy frnds but trying to update.probably vl hav a surprise viva 2mrw but still i'm updating.wondering whether i'm wastin my time just to bore u all??plz giv me honest response!!!!!!! waiting for the same!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PART 12

'MAAN SINGH KHURANA @ KC' after 2 yrs,thats the big news 4 delhi that morning! MSK gets off his car in his office attire.(recal MSK @ Canada embassy) He s followd by bodyguards shielding him wel frm the media.The KC employs were panicking.They knew their peaceful life 4 last 2 yrs vl nw b terribly shattered.Adi follows MSK to his cabin.He xplains KC'S current status nd the clients they r nw workin wth.
Adi:After the cmpletn of CWG works KC s @ the top sir.No one can touch us.
MSK:Wat abt those French clients?
Adi:no response s..s..sir
MSK:Follow them & get the details until 2mrw.This is not the rate @ which i wnt KC'S progress.wonder wat u guys hv been doin these 2 yrs.
Well KC is the no.1 as Adi said.But there remains the fact that no one could cover up 4 his absence lst 2 yrs.nd who can replace Maan Singh Khurana.
Maan was havin a busy day @ office.Its after 2yrs that he s full-incharge of KC again.wel amongst al these he managed 2 cal geet every hour.
Maan: Hav lunch on time.I hv handed a list to mohan including all your favs.jst go through it and make any change if u want.
Geet:ok Maan i vl manage & u jst concentrate on ur work,ok.
Maan:hmm..
Geet:wat? I' m goin 2 hang up.
Maan:par geet suno... Hello... smirks.
He luvs the way she dominates him.Their 1st meeting @ HP.
(FLASHBACK)
@ HP
Maan @ Handa haweli!
Maan:Yaar yaha aye ek hafte ho gaye.i hvnt yet seen my geet at al.Wen vl u introduce her to me?
Arjun(stil annoyed): i never promised u anything like that.
Maan:do u treat ur saala like this in HP?
Arjun:enough
Maan:ok i hv to make a video conference @ 4.wen vl ur guys fix the netwrk prblm?
Arjun:This is not US ok.it will take many days may b a week
Maan:uff..but this is important.
Arjun:then go to town.Anyway u wntd 2 visit Golden tmple.go 2 Amritsar.
Maan:ok. But wat abt my jeep?
Arjun: i dn think daarji vl allow u 2 use it hre after that 1st day drama.
Maan(shouts):Then hw am i supposed 2 go?
Arjun:by bus.
Maan:wat, Maan Singh Khurana in bus?
Arjun(smiles): thats wat i'm tryin to tel u.This is not at al ur league.u can stil go back to delhi by ur jeep.
Maan:Amritsar ki bus kitne baje he?
Arjun:in 10 mins or else u hav 2 wait for 2hrs.
Maan clenches his fist and runs to bus stop.He just managed to get into the footboard when some unknown force made him to turn back.There comes his angel.Geet, she is wearing a 'davani'.Davani is a south Indian attire also known as half saree.(hope u remember Geet studied in Chennai)back to the story,
Its a white color skirt with simple purple border,with same combinatn of deep cut blouse and white dupatta.She is running towards the bus extending her hand to Maan to hold her.Maan's mouth fell open as he saw her.He didnt fail to notice that she had tucked the pallu of her dupatta by her waist like she is well prepared for a fast run and that was makin her curves more visible to him.She pleaded him to hold her.Maan luked at her.It was then that he noticed two guys followed her. They lukd like sme wrestlers frm akhada.
Maan(to bus conductr):stop the bus bayya wo ldki...
Condctr:Are saab in sab bato me na pado to he acha he.
Maan ws least interested n d tlk.In the meantime he extended his hand to geet.she got hold f him and jumped.She landed on him and in a jerk he held her tightly in his embrace.His one hand was on her waist and other on her back which was almst bare with nly the thin blouse.Unknowingly her hand went around him and she dipped her head on his chest,her eyes still closed 😳.Maan was on cloud nine as he found his girl and that too this much close.He wishd this moment last forever and ever.He couldnt ask for anything else.
They remained in that position for a few secs when geet came back to her senses. She raised her head and looked for conductor.
Geet(stil in Maan's arms)to BC: oye khote ab bus rokne ke liye bolna padega kya?
Maan who was in a dreamland came back to the bus hearing her words! The BC gave him 'i told u already' look.

The bus stopped.She released herself frm his grip and got off.Maan followed her involuntary.She went back to those muscle men.
Maan(self-thot):y is she goin bck to those gundas who were after her?
He raises his eye-brows.Before any1 could react Maan punched the muscle men . They tried to defend but this is MAAN SINGH KHURANA!!! 😉
Geet:oye,hero kya scene he?chod bi do unhe.
Saying this she burst into a series of laughter 😆
Maan stopped and looked at her confusd but lovingly!
Geet: to ap muje in badmasho se bacha rhe the? Laughs... Ye HP he aur yaha kisi ki bi himat nhe ki GEET HANDA pe hath lagaye.

Maan still confused!! 😕

Geet:ye log mere daarji ke akhadewale he.meri inse shart thi ki bus me phle kon chadega.(proudly adds)bachpan se me hi jeeti hu!
(to the men)ab do mere shart ke paise warna daarji ko bata dungi ki apke pehelwan to sheher ke chikne ke samne tik nhe paye (laughs again)
Maan amused by her childish behaviour (self-thot):MSK & 'chikna' 😲 .But this is geet & she had all the right! 😳

He loved her even more now.The way she treated him like an ordinary guy.He s nly used to & fed up of girls drooling ovr him.But this was different.Geet was goin to leave but she lukd back,showd two 1000rps ntes,winkd at him and smiled.Maan smiled back.She ran away happily.
......................
Maan was smiling (his famous 'punnagai mannan'(means king of smile,actualy a classic tamil movie starring kamal hasan in 80's.Maan's smile always reminded me this smile f kamal n the movie! )smile 😊.Someone knockd in his cabin.
Maan:come in.
Dev:bro,wo..actually i hv to ask you smething..plz dnt refu...
Maan:cme to the point
Dev: i want off day frm office on alternate days for the nxt two weeks.
Maan:y dnt u jst say u wnt to leave the office.either way i'm not concerned.By now i know well u r gud @ nothing other than...(Maan hits his hand on table.Dev moves back)
Dev:nhe bro,ROYAL CLUB's football match is coming n two weeks.That Armaan Malik captain of Sanjivni's hv openly challengd Khuranas.Its a matter of pride now.not nly me Romeo,Pandey,Adi & Arjun(Rathode) r joining.
Maan:ok,do watevr u want.nd i dnt want Khuranas to lose nywhre evn if a game!
Dev:But there s a problem Yash had a smal accident.So he wont b able 2 play.We need one more player.
Maan:u seriously dnt xpct Maan Singh Khurana to look for a 11th player nd coach ur team,rite?
Dev:no bro,i vl manage.
Maan(self-thnking):Football! Geet is always an activ person.This is a good way to cheer her up.
He cals Dev back.
Dev:Yes bro.apne bulaya
Maan:hmm... Yes wo... Inform the Royal club u got ur team finalised
Dev:but bro who vl replace yash?
Maan:me.
Dev(shockd):Bro,i said football not golf.
Maan:i heard u & i am in ur team.any problem?
Dev:no probs bro.I jst askd.apne to football engg. Ke baad... (Dev stopd just realising he used the most wrong sentence!He held his down )
Maan(shouts):Out!! 😡
Maan leans back on his chair.Dev's words stil linger round. Apne football engg... His memories wnt bck far may b 7yrs back.

He closed his eyes.Many pictures came to his mind.A girl running to him,he fallin frm a bike,Maan closed in a room,Dev lukin @ him,daadi's helpless eyes full of tears,Maan on his knees...
Maan opened his eyes.He went to rest room & splashed water on his face.He heard a girl's voice calling him,Maan... Maan... He splashes water again and again...

He luks @ the mirror and finds a completely diff image of himself in the mirror,a young Maan of 2o yrs,wearin a jacket over a black vest lukin like a cool college guy!
Image of Maan:kaisa he tu Maan?? (laughs!!)
Maan loses himself and breaks the mirror!!!! 🤢
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Amritsar:
Teji is walkin to and fro in an old haweli which luks like a hideout.
Teji:itne din hogaye aur wo lucky koi bhi khabar nhe laya.
Biji:are usse kabi koi kam hua he kya dhang se?
Teji:ab muje khud hi jana padega
Lucky comes running.
Lucky:biji geet ka pata chal gaya.
Biji:kaha he wo?
Teji:oye jaldi bata.
Lucky:ye nhe pata ki pata ki wo kaha he.
Teji:phir kya mu leke aya he
lucky:nhe veerji geet ko dilli ki train me chadte hue statn mastr ne deka he.
Biji and Teji look each other.
Biji:puttar,tu dilli ja aj hi.
Teji:ji biji. Geet ko to me dundke hi rahunga.

😲 😕
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hope u al liked this.comments plzzz....not a long update but this is not short either 😆

Edited by madhubala123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66

Sorry if i left to pm any1.stil not good at that.........😊

Do comment plzzzzzzzzz............m waiting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
Nice part.... loved it Thanx for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
Nice updaye
Evn Maan hav past lets c wats it
Geet was so jhali
They 1st meet was fab
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
wowwwwwwwww
n dont tell me ke maan geet ko bhaga ke leke ayahai
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
lovely update
ur hav captured al wondeful scenes from tamil movies
continue soon

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