MG FF:THE GIFT OF LOVE!!!!~~ PART 45:page 123 - Page 6

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this is awesome!!

Originally posted by: -afsha-

U gav shock in that update

Maan married Geet how wen n whr

Many quest

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Originally posted by: ambbiha

great update

😊😊😊

i felt ur story s quite similar to the remake tamil movie saravana

wat ever it s! i really love it wen it comes to maaneet

😉

Well i'm planning to write more FF's based on certain regional language movies which i feel required a passionate couple like MAANEET 😳 wat say????????should i continue???

Originally posted by: madhubala123

YEs thats what i said before starting to write.Since i'm not dat creative i just wanted to write on MAANEET including scenes which i wishd were filmd on them. 😉 Well basic story line is similar to saravana.I always had the feelin that original GHSP also matches the storyline somewhere.Instead of dat Dev it should hav been smething like this.Thats wat i'm doin in this FF.People make movies from book so y not try the reverse???? 😆

Well i'm planning to write more FF's based on certain regional language movies which i feel required a passionate couple like MAANEET 😳 wat say????????should i continue???

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Updating in a rush.Sorry if i dnt live upto ur xpectations..This is really a hectic month.so cnt say wen will i cme up with nxt update....vl try my best to update soooooon.Plzzzzzzz read and do comment 😊

PART 11

Geet gets out of the car.She s wearing a sky blue color suit lukin completely worn out and lost.She was pale and lifeless.
Everybody in KM was shockd on seeing her.They all had the same thought running in their mind,'wat was Maan up2?' Seeing no reaction frm his family Maan himself broke the silence.
Maan:Nakul,madm ka saman outhouse me rak do.(to geet) Andar jao geet
She quietly obeyed.
Maan:Geet is.... my friend.She lost her family in an accident.Now she has no one.So she vl live here.
The Khuranas couldnt take all these.First Maan brings a girl out of nowhere & says she will live here.Sharma was fuming with anger.Savitri Devi lukd at him helplessly.He dragged Sameera with him & left.Maan didn't even bothr 2 notice them 😡.Daadi was abt to say something but he cuts her off.
Maan:Agar geet ki jagah koi ladka hota to bi ap mujse sawal karti?
Daadi held her head down.Maan got his answer.He was goin 2 outhouse when he saw Annie.
Maan:Annie,I'm....
Annie:no bhai,no need 2 say anything.I can understand.

His eyes were filled.He hugged her.
Maan:Geet akeli he.She needs our help.You vl b with her na?
Annie:yes bhai
Maan felt better.He was about to leave when Annie called him,'bhai u r too good'
He just smiled and went to outhouse.
Maan was a bit hesitant.He knocked at the door.There was no response.He opened the door and looked around.Geet was standing near the window,staring at the endless sky.Maan just stood there lukin at her.Her eyes had so much pain in them.He wantd to go near her,take her in his arms and erase all the pain in her soul.But here,he had to fight with his own emotions.He is NOT her LOVER!! 😲 or atleast she is nt aware that how madly he is in love with her.As for now,he is just a protector!
She is his life,yes evn above his love.He was in no mood to think abt himself.All his thoughts were to brush aside her sufferings.Her innocent voice shook him frm his inner turmoil.
Geet:Maan,ap kab aye? I ddn't notice.
Maan:No its ok.I jst came now.(He ws nevr gud @ xpresn wth wrds & 4 the 1st tme he regretted that)Geet this is ur home now.if u need anything just call me.I dnt want to leave u in this outhouse.But i hve to talk to my family first,and then this was the best optn to avoid unnecessary media attention.em..well i'll be around here all the time.so u wont feel awkward at all and...
Geet:its ok Maan.u dnt hav to xplain al these.i understand.
Maan:hm.. take cre f urself.watevr hapns life has to move on.
Geet:i know that maan.i feel that somewhere far my family will be watching me.I have to live my life 4 them.They want me to be happy.I cnt live in my past and have to move on.But the fact still exists that they are not with me anymore.
Saying this she broke into tears 😭 😭 😭. Maan couldnt bear to see her in tears.Somehow he felt that she had to do this.This vl reduce her sorrows.He just went near and placed his palm on her head assuring that he will be with her always.He left her alone and went back to KM.
Everyone in KM panicked as they knew he was comin .His bootsteps were enough for them to anticipate his temper.
No one dared to talk to him.Maan threw himself to the bed.Finally daadi went to him.
Daadi: Maan r u goin to office 2morrow?
Maan:yes daadi.
Daadi:ok come down 4 dinner.
Maan:But i'm not...
Daadi:Maan now!
He just obeyed.On the dining tble,Dev,NT & Annie were havin their dinner.
Maan:Nakul Geet ne khana khaya?
Nakul:ji madm ne unka khana outhouse me bhejne ke liye kaha he.
Daadi & NT gave an unapprovin luk which Maan ddnt even notice.
NEXT MORNING,
Maan was getting ready for office.But he was worried.She is all alone in the outhouse.He feared whether she will go into some kind of depression.No,he had 2 make sure that she is not left alone.wat would he do?No one in KM was much interestd in her.How to make things better?
He was brought back frm his thoughts when he saw her angelic face through the window.This was more beautiful than the sight of rising sun.He felt like a new flower blossomed in his garden.He was in a trance forgetting all his worries & pain.He wasnt able 2 take his gaze off her.She was wearing a green suit.(Any description will be less.Just recall the scene when Geet was admiring the beauty of the white rose in garden after comin from bath.... Maan gazing...Mahi ve mahi...Mahi ve...Mahiiiiii.............. 😉)
He wasnt able to control himself.Her wet hari,her fresh luk after the bath all was makin him insane.The garderner found Geet lukin at the white rose.He signalled whether she wanted them.Geet nodded for a yes.The gardener plucked it carefully and gave it to her.She took the flowers and was about to leave when she saw him.She could read his eyes even from such a distance.
May b bcoz she was made for him..........
She couldnt stand his looks and ran inside the outhouse 😳.Maan came back to his senses.Now he didnt want to go near her!!!!!! He wasnt sure of himself.Anyway he was relieved that she is ok now,may b that emotional outburst had lessened her burden.A sense of prode came to him thinking how bold and brave his love was.With that cintentment he left for KC.
Meanwhile Daadi was also watching Geet in garden from the mansion.Luckily(or unluckily..)she didnt see Maan! Daadi felt a sense of compassion and love towards the innocent girl.She wanted to talk to her but changed her mind when Sharma's words came to her mind,"Be careful Savitriji aj kal ladkiya to aise hi nikal jati he bade ghar ke ladko ko phasane ke liye."
Daadi preferred to ignore Geet and anything related to her as she was such an unimportant part in the life of Khuranas.

Little did she know that this girl was more than his life for her grandson!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😊

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yet another short update.......comments plzzzzzz.........

Originally posted by: madhubala123

Updating in a rush.Sorry if i dnt live upto ur xpectations..This is really a hectic month.so cnt say wen will i cme up with nxt update....vl try my best to update soooooon.Plzzzzzzz read and do comment 😊

PART 11

Geet gets out of the car.She s wearing a sky blue color suit lukin completely worn out and lost.She was pale and lifeless.
Everybody in KM was shockd on seeing her.They all had the same thought running in their mind,'wat was Maan up2?' Seeing no reaction frm his family Maan himself broke the silence.
Maan:Nakul,madm ka saman outhouse me rak do.(to geet) Andar jao geet
She quietly obeyed.
Maan:Geet is.... my friend.She lost her family in an accident.Now she has no one.So she vl live here.
The Khuranas couldnt take all these.First Maan brings a girl out of nowhere & says she will live here.Sharma was fuming with anger.Savitri Devi lukd at him helplessly.He dragged Sameera with him & left.Maan didn't even bothr 2 notice them 😡.Daadi was abt to say something but he cuts her off.
Maan:Agar geet ki jagah koi ladka hota to bi ap mujse sawal karti?
Daadi held her head down.Maan got his answer.He was goin 2 outhouse when he saw Annie.
Maan:Annie,I'm....
Annie:no bhai,no need 2 say anything.I can understand.

His eyes were filled.He hugged her.
Maan:Geet akeli he.She needs our help.You vl b with her na?
Annie:yes bhai
Maan felt better.He was about to leave when Annie called him,'bhai u r too good'
He just smiled and went to outhouse.
Maan was a bit hesitant.He knocked at the door.There was no response.He opened the door and looked around.Geet was standing near the window,staring at the endless sky.Maan just stood there lukin at her.Her eyes had so much pain in them.He wantd to go near her,take her in his arms and erase all the pain in her soul.But here,he had to fight with his own emotions.He is NOT her LOVER!! 😲 or atleast she is nt aware that how madly he is in love with her.As for now,he is just a protector!
She is his life,yes evn above his love.He was in no mood to think abt himself.All his thoughts were to brush aside her sufferings.Her innocent voice shook him frm his inner turmoil.
Geet:Maan,ap kab aye? I ddn't notice.
Maan:No its ok.I jst came now.(He ws nevr gud @ xpresn wth wrds & 4 the 1st tme he regretted that)Geet this is ur home now.if u need anything just call me.I dnt want to leave u in this outhouse.But i hve to talk to my family first,and then this was the best optn to avoid unnecessary media attention.em..well i'll be around here all the time.so u wont feel awkward at all and...
Geet:its ok Maan.u dnt hav to xplain al these.i understand.
Maan:hm.. take cre f urself.watevr hapns life has to move on.
Geet:i know that maan.i feel that somewhere far my family will be watching me.I have to live my life 4 them.They want me to be happy.I cnt live in my past and have to move on.But the fact still exists that they are not with me anymore.
Saying this she broke into tears 😭 😭 😭. Maan couldnt bear to see her in tears.Somehow he felt that she had to do this.This vl reduce her sorrows.He just went near and placed his palm on her head assuring that he will be with her always.He left her alone and went back to KM.
Everyone in KM panicked as they knew he was comin .His bootsteps were enough for them to anticipate his temper.
No one dared to talk to him.Maan threw himself to the bed.Finally daadi went to him.
Daadi: Maan r u goin to office 2morrow?
Maan:yes daadi.
Daadi:ok come down 4 dinner.
Maan:But i'm not...
Daadi:Maan now!
He just obeyed.On the dining tble,Dev,NT & Annie were havin their dinner.
Maan:Nakul Geet ne khana khaya?
Nakul:ji madm ne unka khana outhouse me bhejne ke liye kaha he.
Daadi & NT gave an unapprovin luk which Maan ddnt even notice.
NEXT MORNING,
Maan was getting ready for office.But he was worried.She is all alone in the outhouse.He feared whether she will go into some kind of depression.No,he had 2 make sure that she is not left alone.wat would he do?No one in KM was much interestd in her.How to make things better?
He was brought back frm his thoughts when he saw her angelic face through the window.This was more beautiful than the sight of rising sun.He felt like a new flower blossomed in his garden.He was in a trance forgetting all his worries & pain.He wasnt able 2 take his gaze off her.She was wearing a green suit.(Any description will be less.Just recall the scene when Geet was admiring the beauty of the white rose in garden after comin from bath.... Maan gazing...Mahi ve mahi...Mahi ve...Mahiiiiii.............. 😉)
He wasnt able to control himself.Her wet hari,her fresh luk after the bath all was makin him insane.The garderner found Geet lukin at the white rose.He signalled whether she wanted them.Geet nodded for a yes.The gardener plucked it carefully and gave it to her.She took the flowers and was about to leave when she saw him.She could read his eyes even from such a distance.
May b bcoz she was made for him..........
She couldnt stand his looks and ran inside the outhouse 😳.Maan came back to his senses.Now he didnt want to go near her!!!!!! He wasnt sure of himself.Anyway he was relieved that she is ok now,may b that emotional outburst had lessened her burden.A sense of prode came to him thinking how bold and brave his love was.With that cintentment he left for KC.
Meanwhile Daadi was also watching Geet in garden from the mansion.Luckily(or unluckily..)she didnt see Maan! Daadi felt a sense of compassion and love towards the innocent girl.She wanted to talk to her but changed her mind when Sharma's words came to her mind,"Be careful Savitriji aj kal ladkiya to aise hi nikal jati he bade ghar ke ladko ko phasane ke liye."
Daadi preferred to ignore Geet and anything related to her as she was such an unimportant part in the life of Khuranas.

Little did she know that this girl was more than his life for her grandson!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😊

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yet another short update.......comments plzzzzzz.........