MG FF:THE GIFT OF LOVE!!!!~~ PART 45:page 123 - Page 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
nice concept......
i read it in one go
pls add me to ur pm list.....cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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heyyyyyyyyy really lov ur ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
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niceeeeeee update
this time iam remaineded of sillinu oru kadhal movie, you have written it well
do continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx for update soon
u forget me dear
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PART 13
@ KC
Maan returns to his cabin.He wasnt able to brush aside his thots.It luks like MAAN SINGH KHURANA is fearing something!! The loss,the pain,suffering.... 😲
Maan(self-thots):No,i cnt let it happen this time.itne saal, i kpt myself away frm al emotions but GEET she changd me completely.... No!! She brought life to Maan who was dead long b4.Now she is my life and i cant lose her, never... @ any cost!
Geet tum sirf meri ho.... Sirf meri!!!
Maan called Geet @ outhouse again.No one picks the cal! Its 2pm
Maan:May b she is sleeping...
4pm geet stil not picking cals.😕
Maan:kaha chali gayi? Does she even know that it is not safe 4 her to roam around the city.After al HP is not far away frm dilli.lekin aisa to nhe ki wo Khurana Mansion tak pohanch gaye??nhe me geet ko nhe kho skta...
Maan rushes to outhouse.finds no one there gets worried.He bumps into nakul.
Maan:geet kaha he?
Nakul:ji sahb wo to annie ma'm ke saath bahar chali gayi.
Maan:acha. (cals annie)
Annie:hi bro apko aj meri yaa..
Maan:geet tumhare sath he?whr r u? How cld u tke her out without askin me?
Annie:Bro jst relax...geet is hre.I jst had to buy sme jewelry 4 my shadi.nd u tld me to help geet.do u thnk she vl b hapy al alone in that outhouse?
Maan:hmm... whr r u?
Annie:n SPICE mall
Maan:ok i'm coming.

Geet was randomly selectn a necklace and tryin it standing in front of the mirror.
Maan rushed to the shop.He came to her running and hugged her tightly.He was pressing himself against her like he was claiming her,getting rid of his own fears.As a natural reactn she hugged him back.Both were unaware of their surroundings.
Everybody in the shop lukd surprised.MSK n their shop & that too 4 a girl! Luckily there was no media.Annie smiled and looked away murmuring 'geet bhabi'
Both stil in each others arms.
Maan(caressing her hair and back):Cant u tel me?i was so worried!
Geet: if u were so worried y did u leave me alone at al? hmm..
Suddenly they open their eyes, jst luk at each othr & move back.They feel embarassed. 😳
Maan(now angry 😡): hw could u b so irresponsible?bata nhe skti?atleast cal me?
Geet:But how am i suposd to ur numbr? 😕
Maan:u cld hv askd Annie.
Geet:Ha... par use kya lagega?i mean...
Maan:its ok.Lets go nw.
Geet:oh bt v r not done.u can go if u r busy.
Maan:I vl wait. (moves away lil bit & cals Adi)
Adi:M..Maan sir?
Maan:Adi i wnt a phne 4 girls and a sim connectn nw!
Adi:he he he(signature Adi laugh as usual interruptd by MSK)Nhe sir wat do u mean by g..g..girl's phone?😲
Maan:uff smethng trendy nd stylish & get in nxt 30 mins.
Adi:ji sir.

Geet showd the necklace she was tryn 2 Annie.
Geet:pretty na?
Annie:ya but it suits u more.i hav a long face na.
Geet keeps it there unwillingly.Needless to say who bought that... (mahi ve mahi mahi ve mahi ve mahii mahi ve mahiii... ) 😳
Maan drops Annie and Geet @ KM.Daadi watchin them frm upstairs.
Back @ KC
Maan (self-thots):Geet ko me khud se kabi dur nhe kar skta.lekin.. Kuch to krna padega.

Adi comes in.
Adi:sir these are short listed candidates for ur secretary
Maan:no need i hv already appointed one.Ms Geet Handa vl b my new secretary.And make sure no one xcept u knw i suggestd her.got that!
Adi(surprised):Yes sir!


KM
Dinner time.Maan joins them.He is on phne talkin to some client but stops immediately wen he saw Geet on table.Its 1st tme she joined them since they rchd KM.Maan really felt happy.He looked at Geet who pointed at Annie with her eyes.Maan lukd @ Annie thanking her.She jst smiled.Many things were said there without any words.
Dadi enterd.She hesitatd a bit seeing Geet but decided to continue her 'ignore' strategy.Maan noticed that.He xpctd least frm his family but atleast dadi could accept her stay.
Everybody startd to eat but geet closed her eyes and folded her hands.
Maan(with pride):Geet always pray b4 eating. 😊
Dadi imprsd a little!
Geet:nhe Maan not always.wo itne sare items he na i ws askn babaji to help me cntrol myself. 😛
Maan terribly embarassed!
Every1 hold their laugh.Dadi shook her head n despair.
Geet:waise dadima,U luk so sexy even @ this age!!!
Everybody shockd 😲.Dev choked.Daadi could not ignore her any more.She ws feeln awkward not sure hw to react.She jst lft the table quietly.
Maan(again self-thots): Savitri Devi & sexy?? OMG wat s she upto? Pagli (chuckles) 😉
Geet :oops! Is she angry with me?
NT:No geet she jst finishd her dinner.Dadi is on a diet.😕
Geet:Ooo dats y she look so young & beautiful.
Every1 laughs!
Geet:so u guys knw to laugh! Gr8.. Den y r uw al silent al the time?y cnt u b lke this always?

Every1 lovd geet and her innocence. ⭐️
Later wen al left.
Maan:Geet u r joining KC as my secretary frm 2mrw.i knw u r betr qualified bt v dnt hv anthr vacancies.. R u ok with that?
Geet:umm.. Thanks Maan (maan luks questing??) 4 the phne nd job.
Maan:oh! Umm... Geet, @ the office v r jst two colleagues.hope u undrstnd.
Geet:ya ya i knw.u dnt wnt media... My safety rite?
Maan(smiles): gud nite
geet:gud nite Maan.
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NEXT MORNING KC
Geet reached office well in time.Adi gives her briefing.
Maan entered the office at that time.He was happy seeing geet's excitement about the new job.
Sasha noticed Maan & went near him to distract him.
Sasha:MK, Need 2 discuss London projct wth u.(showin files)
Maan(wakes frm thots,shouts):do you xpct MSK to stand at the door & wait 4 ur talk.cme to my cabin! (shuts the door at her face) 😡
Meanwhile geet was havn a gr8 day!She gt nw frnz pinky,pandey ji,Adi sir, Romeo & manisha.
Maan called her to the cabin.
Maan:r u ok?
Geet:yes fine!
Maan:hmm..wel i hv 2 giv u dictatn.
Geet notes down while Maan was havin tough time doin his job,thinking straight not able to control himself. Somehw his task was over. Geet came out of his cabin when she bumped into a cool dude!
He was a charmer...xtended his hand,'Yash Malhotra, naam to suna hoga?'
Geet(shakes his hands almost breakin his bones):Geet Handa(in attitude)
Yash:awww... Ok yar hath thodne wala kaam to nhe kiya mene
She releases her hand and they both laugh.wel that was a special bonding they shared @ the 1st meeting itself.Maan was watching all these frm his cabin.He cannot tolerate al these.. Yash was chatting wth her non-stop & geet responded wel but clearly defined her limits with the hand-shake!
Yash:Anyway i pity u! Ur first job & such a khadoos boss!but dnt worry i'm here ,always.
Geet makes a face and giggles.Yash was abt to continue his Maan bashing again wen he saw MSK standing opp to him with his arms crossed over his chest
Yash:😕 😲
Maan(shouts):i dnt pay u 4 flirting n my office.Back to work now! 😡 😡
Both disappear.
Geet in her cabin(self-thot):dusht...danav mera phla din he office me aur yu chilana zaroori tha?
She sits their annoyed.Maan sees her frm the blinds and smiles 😊
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Two weeks passed & both Maan and Geet had a normal life.wait......normal life 4 Maneet means cute nok jhoks,geet doin smething Maan annoyed...smetimes bumping into each other...eye-lock moments...perfect NORMAL MAANEET life. 😃
Now its the football match day!
ROYAL CLUB had made it grand since MSK is on action! Abhay Sharma was in charge of the event.
Club member:Abhay beta Sharmaji tme pe a payenge na? WO.. V cnt start without chief guest and Maan sir wnt like if v delay..
Abhay(snaps):ya dad s always on time.
Abhay ran here and there to check everything,parkin,food,security... Being a local political guy he arrangd tight security @ the venue. The match was abt to begin Sharma along with Sameera took the VVIP seat nxt to SAVITRI DEVI.
The media had a blast as they had al young hot guys of the city there nd on top of it THE MSK himself! 😉
Both the teams were there.Armaan,Atul,& the whole Sanjivni team on one side wearing red jersey & then comes KHURANAS with MAAN SINGH KHURANA in lead followed by Dev,Romeo,Arjun and others .They are wearing white jersey with black stripes Maan lukin dashing as always.😳
All eyes on MSK but his eyes were on the gallery lukin 4 his geet.Maan bukd tickts 4 allKC employees to avoid unnecessary media attention on geet.His eyes lightened up when he saw her xcited with pinky and yash.
MATCH BEGINS !!!!!!!!!!!!
Commentry:Armaan gets the ball movin to the goal post... May b a goal... But good job by Adi,the goalkeeper! The ball now goes to Khuranas,romeo to arjun,arjun to dev then bck to arjun....... Armaan Malik chasing.. Tackles Arjun...but MSK on charge... forwarding and.. GOAL!!! 👏 👏
KHURANAS are in lead by 1-0 at the end of half time.
Maan again luks @ geet.He was doin al these only 4 her.But geet didnt notice him. She is busy with pinky and yash.geet is eating a chocolate 😲, Yash tryin to snatch it and she hitting him and laughing.. Maan wasnt happy with this.
Game begins! Maan was luking @ her only.But she is least interested.Sameera put xtra efforts to cheer him up which he didn't notice 🥱,NT for Dev,annie for arjun and ridhima 4 armaan.But his geet stil nibbling chocolate.
The ball was passed again.
Commentry:once again Khuranas.. havin their chance Arjun.. MSK makin no mistake he is near the net no-one near...golden chance again..
Maan stil lukin @ geet:luk at me geet... 😡 😡(Getting more and more annoyed) kicks the ball
Commentator:goa.. Oh he misses it & hits a girl in the gallery.

Geet faints .Blood all over there!! Rushed to hospital in ambulance! 😲 😭 😭

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Hope u all like this.Once again remind u most of the scenes are not original & in fact popular scnes and i am showin guts to copy them in my own way.So plzzzzzz let me know if it is turning out to be boring????? comments plzzzzzzzz........................and Thank u for all ur response until now.....nxt update probably tomorrow.......... enjoy all!!!!!!!!! 😊

Edited by madhubala123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
oh...no geet faint ab kya hoga
wel cant wait till tomorrow
continue soon
thanx 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ambbiha

lovely update

ur hav captured al wondeful scenes from tamil movies
continue soon

Thnk uuuuuuuuu so much for the comment.....its good to know those who hav seen the original scenes are enjoyin it in my FF 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: rsroopali

wowwwwwwwww

n dont tell me ke maan geet ko bhaga ke leke ayahai

😆 lets wait & c.............
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: mallu.crowe20

niceeeeeee update
this time iam remaineded of sillinu oru kadhal movie, you have written it well
do continue

thnk uuuuuuu more movies on the way.........😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
loved the updates...............
i know the story of saravanan but glad u r taking some other interesting scenes as well and making it lighter
so teji and lucky r they gud guys r bad guys.............
loved the geet bus catching scene............
cant wait till the day geet also starts to feel for maan

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