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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
Hey sabiiii :))) the scene was painful yaar his last I LOVE YOU to her made my heart melt......abhi chala gayaa!! awwwww... 😭...per achaa likha haii .....keep it up!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh Ghosh! Sabz that was sooooooo heart wrenching but beautifully written.. If the scene had been little longer and I would have definitely cried very badly.. Very emotional and very touchy… My heart literally skipped a beat at d last line of ur scene.. Brilliantly written..

Phew.. nw I need to go and watch AN blizfull, passionate, romantic momentz all over again so that my heart can start functioning in it's normal rhythm..

PS: Please do write a hilarious/romantic/gleeful OS on AN soon :)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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@Hey Khush, wht r u upto yaar?? Giving us slow poision Ur making me more n more impatient by extending ur sneak peak...yaar please give my heart some peace n post ur scene soooooooon. plzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Edited by namy_an - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
Hey Sabii, that was a so emotional, even I felt like crying... Very well written indeed... Keep writing such more stuffs.....😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Khushboo_AN

LOL none of you were believing the existence of the scene so I decided to make you miserable *laughs evilly*
With all the pestering and teasing, you asked for it! 😛
Now I'm gonna take a loooongggg time to write it coz its a really long scene so you'll just have to wait and suffer *laughs like Gabbar Singh and waltzes away*


Khussssssssssshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, do you have any idea how evil you are? You have even broken the record of that Gabbar Singh.......
Post your OS Khush😡
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
@Sabii...very touching scene.
Beautifully written 👏
I'm a sucker for tragic endings, so I absolutely love it 😃
And yes, if I remember the story was cooked up by you and Sheena, also including Armaan at some very disturbing point 😛 well, disturbing for me at least 😉
Or do I not remember correctly? 🤔
Anyway, coming back to the topic, its a lovely piece...I love how she was so determined to be in denial, to not accept the truth even as it glared at her face...
And the "PS I love you" at the end...accompanied by the mischievious smile...perfect.
Summed up everything so nicely, I can't explain.
And even through all the darkness surrounding them, he still manages to comfort her, be her pillar of support when he's the one who's slipping away.
Beautiful.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
aww sabii that was so emotional


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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
neha ur scene was nice plz continue soon


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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
res 😛
Edited by mitzification - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
I am giving you part 3 on this condition that you dont cry later if I discontinue it , also no complaining for small part .. u want long part u write it urself. (Looking for a beta reader .. pls pm me )
Part 3

Nikki sat in his car and Abhi drove looking straight ahead lost in his own thoughts , he wasn't much of a friendly company was he ..... khadoos , her mind drifted to the meeting .. they had met the health minister ! .. suddenly the true implications of this project were becoming clear to her . It was a prestigious project ,she was meeting high profile people and the realisation of this project would lend a new future to Sanjeevani. And she would be a part of this , this made her feel proud and bubby .. she wanted to discuss and gush about meeting the minister but Abhi still sat lost in his own thoughts. After few attempts to get him into a conversation Nikki finally fell silent .

"That bloody Patil ...." Abhis voice suddenly broke her reverie "Nikki , did you see how he was trying to sabotage this project "

" But Abhi .. the minister has given us a positive response "

"Did you see the nonsensical things he was asking about land permits, staff qualifications , totally irrelevant stuff "

"Abhi calm down , I don't think the minister will be influenced by this , he seemed genuinely interested in the project " Nikki said as her hand rose and cupped Abhi's hand lying on his lap ,in an attempt to calm him . Abhi was ardently looking into Nikki 's eyes when he became aware of Nikki's soft hand on his . He looked down at it and Nikki followed his gaze becoming aware and removed her hand , she lowered her eyes as Abhi's eyes darted to her face. " I gota go'.gnite" , she said in a soft whisper , and got up and out of the car. Abhi sat in the car for some time mesmerised by what had just happened.

Nikki walked into Sanjeevni feeling more enthusiastic than she had felt in Months. Armaan took her into a side hug and said " Modi is doing rounds of the OPD ... you don't go that side and you will be safe" Nikki gave him a small smile and thanked him for his help.

Today was turning out to be a quiet day for Nikki , aaj itna khali khali kyun lag raha hai ?, Modi is not shouting here that's why ... humm OPD wale interns ki watt laga raha hoga aaj . Finished with her work she walked towards the caf to grab her lunch, invariably her feet turned towards OPD , she looked around but didn't see him , then she went to the cabin still no Modi, feeling slightly dejected she went to the cafeteria.

Eating at the lunch table Nikki recounted yesterdays events to her friends "Dinner was good ....we met the Health minister ! , guys this project is so prestigious if we get it, it will be so glorious for us " she gushed . " haan, haan Modi's doing a good job. He gets a fat cheque for that" interrupted Armaan . This quietened Nikki a bit , well yes he got a big cheque for his efforts ,it's no big deal no need to think so highly about that Modi and start thinking that he was actually nice , this though brought her back to earth and she left for the post lunch duties.

The second round of duties went smoothly but there was a restlessness inside her, she had still not encountered monster Modi , had the earth swallowed him ? she wondered .She left her duty to look for him , checking the whole hospital and still not finding him ,she finally decided to check his cabin . She knocked and went inside but he was not at his desk either but then her eyes fell on his sofa and there he was fast asleep . Stupid Modi ! , her instinct was to startle him , he went around the hospital shouting at everyone about duty and work and here he was sleeping in duty hours, as she went near him , she took in his features. He looked better when he was not shouting at people or ordering them about , calm and composed he looked almost cute while sleeping , as she approached to shout in his ear to jerk him from his sleep a new line of though took over , maybe the poor guy was exhausted , he did work very hard for the hospital , they had gotten back so late last night and yet he was in the hospital well before her . This made her abandon thoughts of troubling him and she turned to go, a soft smile gracing her face. As she turned , her eyes fell on some files heaped on his desk , curiosity made her move there and she started straightening the files. The rustling sound woke Abhi , as he sensed something amiss .

" Dr Nikita what do you think you are doing " he shouted .

" I was just .."

"Who the hell gave you permission to touch my files "

" lekin main .."

"' lekin kya '. What are you doing in my cabin "

"Stupid, arrogant sadu , I should have followed my instincts and woken you by shouting in your ear . I was just being helpful and you are shouting at me '.. " saying this she moved out of his cabin ,slamming the door regretting not scaring the daylights out of the sadu .

Edited by mitzification - 14 years ago

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