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.Dalisay.

@.Dalisay.

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#41

RES (for mizi ,nehu & khush)
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*EDIT*
Ive posted my comments on pg. 8 :)....do check out !

Edited by ANrucha - 14 years ago

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: ANrucha
RES (for mizi ,nehu & khush)
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LOL 3 birds with one stone? 😲

Or rather, three comments in one res? 😆 😆 😆

Now that's talent 👏

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#43

Nehu, that's a very cute scene sweetie 🤗

As I said before, lovely scene...nice way to describe Nikki's (and our) obsession with his sexy voice 😳

And also the fact that they don't even speak to each other...seems like platonic love, but isn't. And of course, the dhamaaka at the end...lets us imagine the rest of the story

Starts off with a hug, and ends with...well, the fact that it doesn't have an end makes it all the more better for me 😃 Dunno about the others, but I loved the open-endedness of your scene ⭐️

You have a very sweet style...keep writing! You'll get better as you write and I'm really looking forward to more scenes from you! 😃

Nicely done!

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Namy

@Amy_an

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#44

@ Mitzi, Comment edited on pg.4😊

@Nehuuuuuuuu… Am so glad to read ur new scene🤗It's so cool that u've started writing OS at regular interval.. Though, I was expecting FF this time, am happy that u'vent atleast stopped writing OS…

I just loved the way you expressed the whole scene as if someone's Nikki' Diary.. I actually visualized the scene .. Awesomely written Nehu.. Lovely fairytale kinda scene.. 👏

Am so happy that u r gonna continue this scene.. Am eagerly waiting to know what'll happen when Nikki'll encounter with 'owner of that sexy voice'😍.. Keep it up and please continue this scene soooooooon😊

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@spln

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#45

aww cute scene Nehu - sorry about the delay in commenting, but I did get around finally! is this going to be?! or are u planning to take it ahead of here as a fic? you could actually transform it to abhi's past and post it for the AN challenge couldn't you? cause there was that mystery element of the phone calls all through the scene?

just a thought... =)

cheers,
nj

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mitzification

@mitzification

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Nooooooo Nehu ... I am left hungry for more ... aage kya hua ... what happened in the second meeting .. did they like each other or did he shout at her ...? maybe she again screamed at some chooha and he was like ... y do u scream every time u see me ...........

agge likho naa please

loved the way she bumped into him , felt sad at Nikkis lonliness also like the fact that she screamed hahahah

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Namy

@Amy_an

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Hey Guyz,

Updated Part 17 of FF Its only you.. Hope u'll enjoy reading it.. Kindly drop in ur comments, if u like it :)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/41512300

Cheers,

Namy

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NEHU

@Glitter_In_Eye

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#48

First of all thank you all for your lovely comments
@Richa Well how do you know that it was Abhi, I never mentioned that😉
But I know the mention of that sexy voice made it obvious who could that be but I deliberately didn't mention that.😉

@Khush First of all, I owe you a big thanks for helping me edit this scene. And again a thankyou for your appreciation. It really means a lot.😊

@Namy ahem ahem What should I say to you, you are my buddy and I was expecting this comment coming from your side even before you told me. I'll surely try to continue soon.😃

@Nj I feel so delighted to see your comment. Well, about your suggestion, I want to tell you that this scene was actually written with the intention of being the first part of my FF (which only a very few people know) for the writing challenge and due to this reason only, I never mentioned Abhi here. But then I suddenly got struck with loads of college work and gave up the idea of writing an FF and posted it as a scene. Again thanks a lot for your lovely words😊

@Mitzi Thanks for your lovely words. I'll try to continue this scene but don't expect me do that soon..😛 Till then, keep on imagining whatever you want to😉

@Res will be waiting for your comments.

And thankyou anu008 and Sheena for liking the scene.

Edited by Nehu_1 - 14 years ago

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Namy

@Amy_an

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Nehu_1
First of all thankyou all for your lovely comments

@Namy ahem ahem What should I say to you, you are my buddy and I was expecting this comment coming from your side even before you told me. I'll surely try to continue soon.😃

Nehu ahem ahem😳 you are my buddy and nw am questing you to continue this OS and thn transform it into short FF😊 I don't want ur try, u'll have to continue it.. *Watchin u vd wishful eyes*