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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

@Mitzi...I'll be late as usual, but I can do the beta reading.

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

@Muni...that's really cute! 😃

And superbly cheesy LOL 🤣

Honestly I can never imagine Abhi saying something like that but yeah, it did make for a fun read...

Write some more! Would like to see a proper scene from you! 😃

@Muni and Mitzi...please add "Scenes Written by <your username>" at the top of your posts containing your work...makes the indexing easier and people can also find the pieces easily.

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

@Mitzi...nothing more fun than seeing Nikki annoy the hell out of Abhi 😆

Frankly, I was pretty disappointed when she moved away instead of waking him...though I do agree he looks adorable when asleep 😳...but then I'm glad that she did manage to get under his skin at the end 😆

Nice!

A longer part maybe, next time? *bats eyelashes*

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mitzification

@mitzification

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#74

wow there will be 4 new updates on this thread before the day is over

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NEHU

@Glitter_In_Eye

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

@Muni that was really cute, a very good try indeed....😊 Keep on writing dear such more stuffs...
@Mitzi Though you warned me but I still want start off with saying this- Please continue....lol.... That was really sweet update... totally liked it....
And that was so funny
she had still not encountered monster Modi , had the earth swallowed him ?

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mitzification

@mitzification

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Posted: 14 years ago

#76

I like this os , its sweet n made me senti too

now give us the happy os

btw yeh bhe happy he tha !

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#77

Wow...Nikki is indeed a true blue M&B romantic!

I'd give anything to have a guy like Abhi, and here she is testing his ability to romance *sigh* I never understood the lady...women are weird 😕

Anyway, that was the cheesiest question I've ever heard, and honestly I didn't understand why he put forth so many reasons in the first place when he could've asked her to forget about the flower lolz the flower isn't more important than his life...extremely immature of Nikki to ask him something like that. I wanted to smack her across the face...😡

And I know I'm being harsh on you...poor you, started writing for the first time, and see here I am going on and on about how strange Nikki seemed to me. *slaps forehead*

But I can't help it...the desire to be honest always wins out when it comes to AN...I like to see them as they are, and I really coudn't imagine Nikki saying anything of the sort, sorry about that 😳

But one thing I loved...like, absolutely loved, no matter how cheesy and M&B, was the response from Abhi. 👏

Typically quiet, and typically avoiding saying it to her face 😆 But the way he conveyed it was wonderful...I loved it. Weird, yes, coming from Abhi, but I guess posed with such a question, he is the kind to react like this. 🤔

Nicely written though...short and simple. I like it 😃

Sorry for being so damn discouraging but yes, this piece doesn't portay AN exactly as we know them, but certainly, a very nice read...⭐️

Again, the quietness of Abhi, of course, is bang on target! 👍🏼 And Nikki's clumsiness and never ending complaints 😆 Yeah, those are definitely AN 😉

And heyyy it isn't depressing lolz! It was nice...more of the emotional kind.

You're getting there...I like your ideas, girl. Really good 😃 Keep writing...they're not exactly ANistic as we're used to, but they are definitely very good. I don't mean to demean your work, really. All I'm saying is that this isn't AN as I saw them. 🤔

But the idea, really, is superb. Loved it. 😃

Looking forward to some more from you soon, since it seems that you're on a roll! 😃

Nice! Nice! 🤗

Edited by Khushboo_AN - 14 years ago

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.Dalisay.

@.Dalisay.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#78

Muni I loved your first attempt alot!!! bt it wa short janaa...:(...bt how cutely he kisses her on her nose tip 😆😳
I loved it! Do write more ...plzz
🤗

Edited by ANrucha - 14 years ago

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.Dalisay.

@.Dalisay.

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#79

*Edit*
Hey mitziii ...thanks alot fr continueing...😊😃
Nice updateee !!!!!😳..waiting 4 moreee ;)

Edited by ANrucha - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#80

munni - is this second OS inspired by some online blog/freelance post? I've read a near identical scene somewhere - although it involved non Indian characters...

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