Heartbeat -An AR Mini FF *Completed* 21/3/11 - Page 35

Originally posted by: geetika_263

awesome part
it was very emotional loved it
thanx for d pm...

Originally posted by: AMMY12

Nice.

Originally posted by: kangel

😭

i am soooo sad rite nw!!
i juzt cant beleive it....
ridz gave up on her lyf
for her love-ARMAAN....

she did as she promised
but it was truly a heartbreakin end....
i love happily evr after luv story's
cz it suxx wen sumthng lyk dis hapns
for ppl who deserve to live in love....

but odrwise
u've written it very beautifully.....
keep writing!!!
thnx fr d PM'z......

and lovely banner.....luv it!!

love
-KIN😊

p.s: updat ur odr FF toooooo....


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Edited cmnt lollll mah one houuur izz uppp ;D

nice part.
i agree that not all love stories have a happy ending
i wished this one had a happy ending
anyways i loved ridz's letter. it was so touching.
beautiful story. loved it
thnks for pm

Originally posted by: hotKaJen

nice part.
i agree that not all love stories have a happy ending
i wished this one had a happy ending
anyways i loved ridz's letter. it was so touching.
beautiful story. loved it
thnks for pm

Originally posted by: Crazyy_Fan

k...i rslyy din expect u to update sooo earlyyy...😲 did not read d part yet..though i hav pressed d lyk tab coz i noe itzz gonna be gr8 as usual :)) i m relli eager to rd it...will be bak in 1 hour or soo 😳 till then reserved ;))

Edited ;)

Lolll mah one hour izz up sooo damnnn earlyy 🤣

I LOVE U 🤗

I m sooooooooooo glad that u went ahead wid ur plan 😃 The part wazz beautifullyyyy written....u trulyy captured all d emotionzz perfectlyy in ur update :D I had tears in mah eyezz az i read d update...u seriouslyy deserve a lotttt of appreciation for dis ff.....not everyone has d courage to write such fanfics...n moreover write dem soo beautifullyyy :)) I loved d letter...d wayy Ridzz gauged hizz reaction to evrything..dere memoriezz......superb :))

We both know you'd have done the same thing in a heartbeat if I was in your place!

You get to keep the most important part of me after I'm gone'my heart and our memories.

👍🏼👍🏼

Thanxx a loootttttttt for d dedication 😳 though it waznt rellii necessaryy...i just gave in mah 2 cents 😳 But i loveddddd dis lol 😳 Once again amazingg part :))

hey a beautiful story...brought tears to my eyes..good work :)