Heartbeat -An AR Mini FF *Completed* 21/3/11

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ssh57

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Posted: 14 years ago

#361

It was a cute ff which made me cry a lot. I know life isn't a bed of roses. It's filled with tragedies. But at least in fictions we can imagine a perfect world with all happiness?

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Aanya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#362

Originally posted by: anu_isha
superb ff
. Very touching . I really have no words to express specially after last update.

It was awesome.
Plz pm me whenever u start any new story.

Thank youu 🤗

I have an FF running here called LOVE IS... !!!

xoxo

Aanya

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MY AR FF: LOVE IS... : Link - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1611044

MY AR Mini FF: HEARTBEAT: Link - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1640957

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Aanya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#363

Originally posted by: cutiepreet
hayyeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee u made me cry...:(
but a beautiful realistic love story that left lots of memories of AR...awwww it was just beautiful....wonderful n very memorable...<3

Awwh thank youuuuu 🤗

xoxo

Aanya

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MY AR FF: LOVE IS... : Link - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1611044

MY AR Mini FF: HEARTBEAT: Link - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1640957

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unknown.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#364

hiiii

da ending was so emotional :(

but alsoo gud

and i must say u rite soo good :D

harneet <3

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Aanya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#365

Originally posted by: Harneetluvesksg
hiiii
da ending was so emotional :(
but alsoo gud
and i must say u rite soo good :D

harneet <3

Awwh thanks Harneet 🤗

xoxo

Aanya

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MY AR FF: LOVE IS... : Link - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1611044

MY AR Mini FF: HEARTBEAT: Link - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1640957

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jannat4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#366

hey dear
just finished read ur ff
its awesome
such an emotional concept
hats off.........👏 👏 👏 👏
u wrote it so beautifully..........
though i cried at d end.......😭....but i agree its a perfect suitable ending
nd everyone not gets a perfect ending in love
poor armaan.............
but he took a perfect well decision in d end..........
nd riddhima's decision was toh marvelous breath taking and shocking too.....😳
do write more...............

lots of luv
jannat

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Maheen!!

@--Mahi--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#367

Awwwww seriouslyy outstanding yaar!!
u made me cryyy!!
I rarely cry on reading any FF yaar but ur Ff got tears in my eyes!!!I just love it yaar!!Hatss off to u!!!
Still couldnt stop cryingg...Lolxx!!
Butttt Awesomeee yaar!!!Keep it up!

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Aanya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#368

Originally posted by: jannat4ever
hey dear
just finished read ur ff
its awesome
such an emotional concept
hats off.........👏 👏 👏 👏
u wrote it so beautifully..........
though i cried at d end.......😭....but i agree its a perfect suitable ending
nd everyone not gets a perfect ending in love
poor armaan.............
but he took a perfect well decision in d end..........
nd riddhima's decision was toh marvelous breath taking and shocking too.....😳
do write more...............

lots of luv
jannat

Thank youuu 🤗

Yeah...it was totally senti 😆

Imma focus on Love Is... now!!!

xoxo

Aanya

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MY AR FF: LOVE IS... : Link - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1611044

MY AR Mini FF: HEARTBEAT: Link - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1640957

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Aanya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#369

Originally posted by: honeey_16
Awwwww seriouslyy outstanding yaar!!
u made me cryyy!!
I rarely cry on reading any FF yaar but ur Ff got tears in my eyes!!!I just love it yaar!!Hatss off to u!!!
Still couldnt stop cryingg...Lolxx!!
Butttt Awesomeee yaar!!!Keep it up!

Awwh thanks Girliee 🤗

xoxo

Aanya

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MY AR FF: LOVE IS... : Link - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1611044

MY AR Mini FF: HEARTBEAT: Link - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1640957

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repercussion

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Posted: 14 years ago

#370

It was an ending worth the pain. It was a happy ending for me. It always is! Big time sucker for dysptopian conclusions...I can't help but fall in love with this ff. Although I'm not very sure if a heart can be donated by someone who's like alive alive...as in not a cadaver or anting...I'd brush that though away! I had imagined Armaan walking out of the some huge hospital as a reputed cardiologist, smiling to himself. Well..it all came rue...and the bigger the better!

I lover the letter, although heart-wrenching. And the concluding line...her heart and single heartbeat. I sat back for a few minutes and th line kept reverberating in my head...like one of those concluding lines from my favorite novel.

Indeed, who get's lucky enough to hold the heart of a beloved for the rest of their lives. This was a job well done, in fact very well done. And I'd hope there are many more to come. In a way, if Armaan would have passed away in Riddhima's arms...it'd have been depressing but cliche, right? As in the ordinary...but the way things changed in the matter of a few minutes blew my head off!

I hope anyone and everyone who's ever been through such a situation, lost their beloved on an operation table find peace. Life goes on, ironically. And that the sad part, even more depressing than the loss. Life's more heart-wrenching than death. For all die, only a few live!

Cheers!

PS ...I'd be eager to read more from a talented writer like you! Drop me a PM when you write next, pls, for I don't wanna miss out on any of it!