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Posted: 19 years ago
#61
sorry...didnt realise u wrote a part there..

lol


great part!!!!

i also wonder y natasha is happy....hmm she has something up her sleve 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: blah_blah



i also wonder y natasha is happy....hmm she has something up her sleve 😆 😆 😆

she didn't have sleeves remember?😆

i'll post it in some time...nearly finished..

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Posted: 19 years ago
#63
😆

ill b waiting to read 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#64
guys i'm sooooooooo sorry!!!...my computer crashed and i lost this part plus half my coursework 😭...so i just finished this know...

part 18

Natasha walked into Dishas cabin and was surprised to find everyone there. DK and Gautham were poring over some file...adi was standing to one side and texting on his mobile - and from the look on his face, it was obvious to Natasha that it was some girl 😆 - and as usual, disha was attacking a tub of ice-cream with no mercy 😆...

N: arre...aap sab yaha?!

dk: hah...aur hum sab thumara hi inthazaar kar rahe the..

N: mera? koi problem hai?

adi: arre problem hi problem hai...global warming...corrupt politicians...aur woh hazaro larkia, joh mera pheecha hi nahi chor thi...

N: adi..thum kabhi bhi..

gautham: dekho tashu...hum yeh jana chathe hai ke thumhara plan kya hai? pehle thumne mr.oberoi ko ek acha presentation nahi dhiya...aur kal...

adi: aur kal thum waha karhi hokar ese thalia bhajar rahi thi jese uski shaadi ho rahi ho!

N: meh?!!! aur thum?...thum tho ese flirt kar rahe the jese woh thumhari mah ki nahi...thumhari kisi girlfriend ki umar ki ho!!!

DK: arre plz...larna band karo aur humme sirf yeh bathao keh thumhara plan kya hai...

Natasha gave a huge smile...

N; meh bathao ghi nahi...dekhaou gi...time kya hua hai?

adi: kyu?...us vasudha ko jakhe ashirwaad dena hai kya?

N: (absaloutely steamed up now) adi!!!! 😡

gautham: arre!! bhara (12) bhaje hai...

natasha gave another smile (sending adis heart beating 80mph 😆 ) and switched on the tv....the news was on and a reporter(r) was standing infront of a burning building...

r: mehe kanaka keh godown(is that how you spell it? 😕 ) keh age kari hu, jaha thori der pehle aag lag gayi. is aag meh 6 lokh zakmhi huye hai aur...

disha put down her tub of ice-cream...

dish: tashu...yeh aag thumne lagaye??/

N: woh...di...

dish: tashu..usme che lokh zakhmi hue...che!!!

N: di, relax...woh sab humare admi he..aur unko kuch nahi huwa he...sarri doctors ki report mene kudh banaye hai..aur aag lagane se pehle mene chck kiya tha...aur aas paas meh koi nahi tha...

disha looked a bit relieved but still had her doubts...so she did the only thing she could think of...she carried on with her ice-cream... 😆

N; di...aap office kyu athee hai...esi halath meh tho aap ko aram karna chaye...

dish: arre...ghar par esi ice-cream hi nahi milthe...

everybody joined in on the laughter, but stopped at dishas shocked face...natasha noticed that she was looking towards the door...she turned round and was shocked to see....

thats it...next part...tomorrow!

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Posted: 19 years ago
#65
i bet it's vas at da door! plzzz continue...you are so good at this.....i think i am falling in love with adi! 😳 he reminds me of my best friend whose name is dev. 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#66
😆 😆 😆 disha and ice cream!! i started a good trend on that!!! 😆

whos at the door??

you know wat i hate suspenses!!!!!!....

when i write them its okay!!! but when other people write them!! ahhh!!!! 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#67
haan guli...lol...every1 is following in your footsteps 😆

great part nibbles!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#68
thanks for your comments guys!...it isn't vas at the door but you came close kajal....

Part 19

natasha turned round and was shocked to see ved and rano! (yup...hes alive)

DK stood up in anger...

DK: rano...thum ise yaha kyu lekar ayi ho? 😡

rano: plz jiju...vedant badal gyaa hai...woh abh pehle jesa nahi raha...

DK: mein nahin maan tha...is admi neh mujhe jaan se marni ki khoshish ki, mujhe aur meri biwi ko bheghar kardiya...meh ise kabhi nahi maaf kar saktha!!! 😡

ved: brother, plz...mujhe aj, ithne dino bath patha chal ke aap mujhe both pyar karthe hai...ek crore ka birthday gift diya...aur har mushkil meh mera saath diya...(tears in his eyes) brother plz, mujhe maaf kardiye, plz...

dish; haan DK, humme ise maaf karna chaye...isko apni galthiya ka ehsaas hogaya hai...

N; kya kehrahi hai di...yeh humare dushman ka betha hai...

dish; tho kya hua? plz DK mere liye...plz!!!

DK looked at disha's worried face,

DK; teek hai, par hum vasudha ke saath saath, thumhari mom ko bhi barbad kar de geh, kya thum abhi humare saath ho?

ved: mom...kesi mom? woh, joh ek baar bhi nahi aiy mera haal puchne ke liye, nahi brother meh aap ke saath hu...

adi: thats great!...par mujhe thumhare saath cabin tho nahi share karne pare ga?

after looking at veds confused face he gave a brig grin 😃

adi: arre, just kidding yaar, thum mera cabin lelo, wese bhi meh hamesha yahi hotha, disha ko ice-cream jo deni parth hai...

evryone smiled except for Natasha who gave adi and vedant a look and walked out of the office...

rano: sorry ved...woh hai natasha, meri cousin jo america se ayi hai...

adi: uh...meh jakhe use manatha hu

dish:arre adi, thum math jao, warna woh thum par barak jaye ghi...

adi: relax sweetheart...

DK: sweetheart kaun?!

adi: arre, i mean disha (to himself) yeh jiju sali ek jese hi hai...baas sali kuch zaada hi koobsurat hai 😆

****

adi walked into natashas cabin without knocking and stopped as she was on the phone...he froze at what he heard...

N: arre baby...thum fikar math karro...meh both jaldi bhawas ajao ghi...i'm missing you too...bye sweetheart...

adi was heartbroken...she had someone else in her life...

yeh kaun hai? 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#69
no replies 😭 ...

k, i'll continue anyway...

part 20.

Natasha turns round and is surprised to see adi standing behind her...

N:(smiling) arr adi, thum kabh aye?

adi: ummmm, abhi, abhi...thumara mood badla badla sa laag ra ha hai...kya hua?

N: woh mr.oberoi ka phone ayaa tha(contract guy remember)...aur usne kaha ke humme contract milgaya!!!

adi: tho, thum abhi mr. oberoi se bath kar rahi thi...

N: nahi, ajay se...

adi: (shocked, but trying not too show it) woh...umm...thumara boyfriend?

N: (absaloutely shocked) boyfreind?! (to herself) agar is ko lage ke mera boyfriend hai...tho mera pheecha chor de gha)

N: haan...mera boyfriend...america se...both yaad ati hai uski (BIG smile)

adi is shocked, angry, sad...all at once!!!

adi: (to himslef) ajay huh? dekhna na natasha, thumare gadhe boyfriend ko ghadha nahi banaya tho mera naam bhi adi nahi 😆

adi: ummm...yeh jo ajay hai...

N:(not really listening) adi plz thum abi jao aur woh contract sign karo, mujhe ek meeting meh jaan hai...

she grabs her bag and goes without even listening to his reply...

****

at vas's house...

vas is playing with a very sharp knife and is obviously angry...

vas: yeh godown kese jaalgay?!...aur saath meh contract bhi haath se gaya....kese?! 😡

a servant comes in....

S: memsaab, aap seh koi aurat milne ayi hai...bhijdoo?

vas: (without looking up) hah hah, bhejdo

she is still thinking when in comes....Natasha!!!

N; vasudhaji...

vas looks up and is surprised...

vas: natasha, thum, yaha? kese ana hua?

N: woh news par suna...socha ke aap se mill loo...yeh sab kuch kese hua?

vas (sighs) patha nahi...muhjhe bhi mahi samajh ar raha ke yah kese hua...

N: (to herself) soch thi jao vasudha...yeh tho sirf shur waat hai...esa ghumaou ghi, ke saare hosh kos jaye ghe...

N: arre, vasudha ji sambhaliye, aap ka hath kaat gay tho

(still holding the knife)

vas gives another one of her smiles...

vas: meh vasudha vashisht hu...mujhe kuch nahi hoga! (thats what gargi said, and know shes got two fake legs 😕)

vasudha puts down the knife...

vas: chalo, hum undar chal ke baath kar the hai...

she turns round and walks in, leaving Natasha staring at the knife...

whats going on in her mind? 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#70
great parts nibbles!!!!! 👏

lol..natasha is probs thinking of using that knife on vas..

lol 😆 😆

i would 😡 😆

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