part 2 - Page 5

Originally posted by: guli444

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everyone is replacing me in TD fan fics!!!!!!

honey...no1 can replace u....u hav 9 TD fanfics!!!...

9 brilliant 1s that is....!!!!!!!!!! 👏
(i think its 9)....sorry.......i cant really remember!

ahhhh thanks guys! and guli, i want you to shut up right now, cause i've read every one of your TD FF's, and they are the best!

K guys, next part…I had a lot of ideas, but didn't know which one to go with, so I put it all together in the end…

Part 13

Natasha opened the door to her room; adi had gone to get some stuff from the car so she was guaranteed at least 10 minutes peace and quiet. She looked around, a double bed, a sofa, a table, a door probably leading to the bathroom…. and a door leading outside! Natasha opened the door and found to her delight that it was raining.

It wasn't like she didn't get rain in America, but this one was different. It reminded her off when she used to play with bhaiyya, Di and Rano. She stuck out her hand, then the other, and before she knew it, she had skipped down the three steps and was playing in the rain.

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adi stood leaning against the door, just looking at Natasha. She was jumping and running into small puddles like a small girl. Her face to the sky, a big smile on her lips, her wet sari clinging to her body like a second skin….he could do nothing but stare.

Suddenly, Natasha stopped…. she was in mid-swing when she realised that she was being watched with a bit too much attention. She saw her arms out in front of her, her wet hair, her dirty sari, and was immediately embarrassed. Slowly she started making her way towards adi, nothing but the sound of the heavy rain could be heard. She could feel his eyes following her at every step,

N: (to herself) mere bare meh kya soch raha hoga? Kay yeh mujko ko paagal nahi samajtha?

With these thoughts crossing her mind she didn't notice where she was going and lost her footing on the second step…just when she was about to fall she found herself in the strong grip of adi, and looked into his eyes mesmerised. She felt paralysed, unable to move, and was aware of her heavy breathing.

Adi was aware of her lips, slightly trembling and wet. Without knowing what he was doing, he started moving his face closer to hers…. very slowly….

I'm rubbish at romance so forgive me if you're bored…this is a very short one and I promise my next one will be longer!

Nabz…

welldone nabz.......keep up the good work..... 👏 👏

part 14...this ones for you blah_blah...

adi: (in a whisper)Natasha...

N: (soft tone) hah...

adi: Natasha thum...thum...both bhari ho! 😆

N:huh? 😕 (way to break the romance dude)

Natasha stood up with a completely blank expression on her face...she didn't know wether to be confused...embarassed, or angry, and just walked inside, leaving adi standing, laughing to himself.

10 minutes later she walked out of the bathroom wearing a nighty and a gown, and straight away started pouring over some files...

adi: hum tum....ek kamare meh band ho...aur chabhi kojaye...

N: (without looking up) dresser par dekho...chabhi wahi hogi

adi gave another grin and took a seat next to her,

adi: you know, yeh scenario dekh kar, mujhe ek kahani ki yaad agayee,

N: (not loking up) kaunsi kahani?...

adi: ek larka aur ek larki, esihi barsaat ki raat par, ek kamare meh akele

N: (not paying much attention) hmm...

adi: phir woh larka us larki ke kareen aya...aur kareeb...aur kareeb (saying this he gets closer to her and his tone gets softer)

N: (looking up and in a soft tone) phir?

adi: phir, us larke neh uski larki ka rape kardia

N: (gulps) phir?

adi: phir...usko maar dala...us larki keh cheekeh kisiko bhi nahi sunaidhi...

N: (really scared) phir?

adi: (sits back and says in a louder voice) phir kya...mujhe novel chor kar, kaam jana para. bhoth achi kahani...thum chahi tho meh tumhe parne ke baad deh detha hu,

N:no thanks...esi kahana mujhe nahi parni,

gets up and goes to the bed,

N: yeh lo,

she picks up a pillow and chucks it at adi,

adi: aur kambal?

N: kambal sirg ek hai...aur woh mera hai, goodnight.

adi just looks at her openmouthed as she makes herself comfortable on a double bed, while he's just left with a pilow and a hard sofa.

meanwhile, in mumbai...

DK comes and puts his arms around Disha from the back,

dish: DK, yeh kya kar ra he ho? koi agaya tho?

DK: arre, thum kyu mood ko karab kar ra hi ho....ithne mushkil ke saath tho thum mujhe akele mili ho...thumare azuba, kaki, aur Aai kisse rishthe daar se milne gay he, gautham sanya se, aur Natasha tho puna gaiy hai...

dish:mujhe natasha kahi tho fikhar hai

dk: kyu?

dush: woh adi ke saath gaiy hai....kya patha woh bechara zinda back kar nikile ka bhi ja nahi

dk: hah, woh dakhu ke khandan se joh hai...

dish: dk!!!

dk: sorry, sorry...

they spend the rest of the night in each other's arms, gazing at the stars (soz, can't go further than this cause shes preggie 😳 😆 )

now i'm gonna skip a few hours, so they're at the last part of the meeting...

mr.oberoi (he's the guy who's gonna give the contract): well miss. natasha...i have to say ke aap ka presentation both acha tha, hum aap ko phone kar ke batha deh ge keh agar aap ko contract mila ja nahi,

N; thank-you,

they all shake hands (adi's there as well)

adis got a thoughtfull expression on his face as he leaves the building with natasha, she notices and asks him whats wrong...

adi; natasha, mene thumhe, aur thumari kabiliath koh jaana hai...aur meh yeh ke saktha hu, ke joh presentation thum ne aaj dhiya, woh thumara best nahi tha. kyu?

N: (smiles) iske peeche meri ek bhoth bari waja hai, aur thumhe both jaldi patha chal jaye ga, ke yeh kya hai...

some time later a car stops on the road, and out comes....Vasudha! she's also in puna cause she came for the same contract that natasha and adi came for...she starts to cross the road and is halfway through, when a speeding van hits her! a croed gathers round her as the van drives off,

it stops at a place and the driver turns round to see the damage, he then calls someone on his mobile and says...

driver: aap ka kaam hogaya...

that should be long enough...see you guys later!

thank u sooooooooooooooooo much 😃 😃 😃

love u!!!!!!! 😳

GREAT PART!!!! 👏

hmm...wonder hu it is! 👏

omg i read all the parts! they are fab....u must continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


i love this adi guy!!!!!!!!! 😆

right, my next part...i know you guys want vas dead, but kya kare, if she dies then who will Natasha take revenge against?

part 15

close up of vasudha's face as (ewwwwwwwwwww 🤢 )as she slowly opens her eyes, she moves her head slowly to one side and sees a octor standing next to her,

vas: meh kaha hu?

doc: thank god ke aap ko hosh agaya. aap lilawati (don't know any other hospital's name)hospital me hai. kuch der pehle aap ka accident howa tha.

flashbacks as vas remembers the white van coming towards her and hitting her,

vas: thankyou doctor,

doc:(proper filmi style)aap mujhe nahi, us larki ko thanks kejiye ga, jo aap ko yaha lekar ayi, aur aap ka bill bhi bhara,

vas is completely confused as to who this could be, she gets up and starts walking to the door...very slowly she comes out, we see the back of the girl, and then the girl turns round...and it's none other than....Natasha!

N: aap!...aap uthi kyu, aram kar na chaye na, both zor ki...

vas: kaun ho thum?!

N: ji?

vas: na meh thumko janti hu, na thum mere koi rishtha daar ho....mujhe yaha lekar ayi, teekhai...par bill kyu para?

N: dekhiye, aap waha sark par thi, tho meh yaha aapko lekar agaye...kafhi koon behraha tha....aur bill mene esliye bara kyun ki aap ka operation kar na tha, aur yeh doctors advance mag ra he the tho...

vas looks at her carefully for a moment, and then says with a smile,

vas: thanks, thumne meri jaan bachayi,

N: it's okay...par abhi aap jakar aram kijiye, aap teek nahi hai...aapki koi family hai jisse meh contact kar sakthi hu?

vas: um...nahi...mera koi nahi hai

N: teek hai..aap ander jaye...

once vasudha goes in, natasha goes down the corridor in search of adi...he was meant to bring her coffee,

N: (to herself) stupid! adhe gante pehele yeh keh kaar gaya tha ke coffe lekar atha hu...zaroor kisi nah kisi nurse ke saath flirt kar raha hoga... 😆

suddenly out of nowehere pops up adi!

adi: hi! mere bare meh soch rahi thi na?

N: (gives a sarcastic smile) nahi, meh coffee ke bare meh soch rachi thi...kaha hai?

adi: coffee...woh...meh

N: 😡 meh janthi thi...meh janthi thi ke thum kisi ke sath flirt kar rahe hoge...puna keh hospital meh bhi thum...

she stops abruptly when she sees someone coming up the corridor...

who could this be? find out in my next part...

bye0bye 😛

very interesting!!
witing to read more 👏 👏

👏 that was really gr8. write soon 😃