part 2 - Page 6

yaar hamesha suspence kyu????????????

great part..

lovin ur awesome fanfic..

continue soon yaar!!

soz it took me so long to write this part...i was to busy with some hwk.

k...part 16

Natasha was shocked to see gargi coming up the corridor (imitating the bad boy limp cause of her operation 😆 ), wearing a green sari (and looking as 🤢 as ever). she relaxed when gargi walked past the pair, completely ignoring them

N: (to herself) gargi puna meh...vasudha se tho nahi milne ayi hogi, phir...

she was brought back to reality when she felt adi nudge her, and was even more suprised to see rano!

rano: didi, aap yaha...woh bhi adi ke saath?

adi: well, hum apna honeymoon advance meh celebrate karne aye hai (grinning at Natasha's stare)...thum bathao, thum yaha...aur woh, what's her name?...gargi saighal bhi tho yahi thi,

Rano: (looking a bit sad) woh...vedant ka accident hogaya hai

N: what?

rano: hah...kal raat puna highway par....woh coma me hai

(sorry guys, promised that ved would die...but kya kare? can't make rano vidwa again)

N: oh...well, gargi apne bete ke bhare meh chintha kar thi rahegi, aur humare plan keh beech meh nahi aye ghi...rano, mer bath suno...vasudha ise hospital meh admitted hai....meh yaha jabhi aao, thum mujhe nahi janti, ok?

Rano: teek hai

****

back in mumbai, adi and Natasha have come back...disha is in her office with DK...she is 5 months pregnant...is sitting thier snacking away on ice-cream while DK is doing some work...Natasha walks in to the very unromantic mood...

N: di, apne ad...ICE-CREAM!!!! (goes crazy cause she LOVES ice-cream)

N: mujhe bhi dijheye na...

Dish: mmmm...nahi, yeh meri ice-cream!

N: jiju! di ko kayeh na!

dk: arre disha, isko dedo....wese bhi subha se thum paanch daabe ka chukhi hu

N; paanch daabe?! di...ap upne liye kaa rahi hai..yaa pureh parivaar ke liye?!

dish: dk...isko kahona!

dk: arre kya kahu? sai tho keh ra hi hai...

but before he can continue, adi comes in with yet ANOTHER tub of ice-cream...

adi: here you go dish...thumhari ice-cream!

dish: oh thanks!!!

she eagerly puts down the last one (it's finished by the way) and starts on her seventh,

N: ADI!!! 😡 meh thumhe subha se puri office meh doon rahi hu...aur thum di kehliye ice-cream lek kar ar rahe ho!

adi: sorry babe...par woh meri boss hai

N: di thumhari boss hai....aur meh kya hu???

adi grins...

adi: well...thum tho meri...you know...

N: WHAT!!!

adi: ofcourse...dekho...meh shakal se duffer lagtha hu..us ka meh kuch nahi kar saktha, yeh chera tho bhagwan neh mujhe dhiya hai...par akal both hai...ab thum jo har pal mere sath flirt karthi rethi ho...

N: meh thumhare saath flirt nahi karthi! thum...di, jiju...kya meh iska saath flirt karthi hu?

Dish: arre...meh thumhari di hu..iska mathlab yeh nahi keh har waqt thumhara sath lao gi...meh janthi hu...thum adi ke sath both flirt karthi ho

Natasha is just gaping at them cause they've all got straight faces...she storms out of the room, and as soon as the door's closed, everyones bursts into fits of laughter...

soz guys...i didn't plan this one, so anything that came to my mind i just write down...

critiicize me all you want...

Originally posted by: blah_blah

honey...no1 can replace u....u hav 9 TD fanfics!!!...

9 brilliant 1s that is....!!!!!!!!!! 👏
(i think its 9)....sorry.......i cant really remember!

1. Through thick &Thin
2. New Love Story
3. Reuniting the 2 D's
4. Size Doesnt Matter
5. Disha &Disha (started by you blah_blah)
6. TD Fast Forwarded
7. TD Fan Fiction (started by Kajal)
8. Mere Jeevan Saathi
9. Pyaar To Hona Hi Tha
   

Yes you are right... 9!!!!

Originally posted by: nibbles

N: di, apne ad...ICE-CREAM!!!! (goes crazy cause she LOVES ice-cream)

N: mujhe bhi dijheye na...

Dish: mmmm...nahi, yeh meri ice-cream!

N: jiju! di ko kayeh na!

dk: arre disha, isko dedo....wese bhi subha se thum paanch daabe ka chukhi hu

N; paanch daabe?! di...ap upne liye kaa rahi hai..yaa pureh parivaar ke liye?!

dish: dk...isko kahona!

dk: arre kya kahu? sai tho keh ra hi hai...

but before he can continue, adi comes in with yet ANOTHER tub of ice-cream...

adi: here you go dish...thumhari ice-cream!

dish: oh thanks!!!

😆 she eats more here than in mines!!!😆


please cont soon!

looooooooooooooooooooool...great part...

yaar guli....ab fanfic mein ice-cream compitition!!!!! 😆

hehehe

Through thick &Thin
New Love Story
Reuniting the 2 D's
Size Doesnt Matter
Disha &Disha (started by you blah_blah)
TD Fast Forwarded
TD Fan Fiction (started by Kajal)
Mere Jeevan Saathi
Pyaar To Hona Hi Tha


Yes you are right... 9!!!!

yay i was rite!!! 😃

guys, i'll try my best...but i don't think i can write my next part cause it's eid today...

k...i've got evrything planned out for the next part...but i had a three hour exam today...then went to meet my mate...and know my brother wants to go on...so pakka tomorrow

its okay!!

i will be waiting!

k...

part 17...

adi is waiting for Natasha outside as he has to take her to a business party. in this party mr.oberoi (puna contract guy) will announce who he's giving the contract to...

adi: yeh business parties bhi kithne boring hothi hai...par waha natasha hogi...hai...

he's just lost in his dream world when he sees natasha walking down the stairs towards him...she's wearing a long white sparkly dress with very thin straps...her hair is up revealing her back, and she holds a small purse in her hand.

adi is standing infront of her with his head to one side...simply staring

N: (to herself) mujhe tho eseh ghoor raha hai, jaise me koi showpiece hu

she clicks her fingers infront of his slightly open mouth and brings him back to reality...

N: is duniya meh esi both larkia hogi jinko pasand hoga thumare liye modelling kar ne keliye...par meh un mese ek nahi hu, aur is waqt mujhe ek party par jana hai, aur wo bhi thumhare saath...tho chaale?...

adi: huh? oh...oh yeah..chalo...

****

at the party...

Natasha walks in and immediately starts looking around,

adi spots Vasudha wearing a lime green sari with a gold top...and not forgetting the tattoos (she isn't to hard to visualise cause this is exactly how she dresses on TD)

adi: woh raha humara target...

Natasha gives him a a weird look...

N: thum pichle janam meh army meh the kya?

and she walks off leaving him to suss out what she just said...

N: arre vasudha ji aap?

vas turns round and gives a smile as she remembers the young girl who saved her life...

vas: natasha, right?

N: jhi..aap ki thabiyat ab kesi hai?

vas: meh tho teek hu...thum...

adi: arre natasha...thum mujhe apni dost se milao na...

N: uh...yeh hai vasusha...hum puna meh mile...aur yeh hai aditya sharma...

vas: hello...

adi takes vas's hand as she extends it, and instead of shaking it...he bends down slightly and kisses it...
Natasha gives him a adisgusted look...

N: sorry vasudhaji...larki deki nahi aur flirting...

vas: larki? (laughs obviously knows her age) meh koi larki lagthi hu?

adi: dekho vasudha...umar dil se honi chaye...aur wese bhi, 25 se thum ek din bhi nay zada laghti ho...

N: (to herself) maska tho ese lagar raha hai...jaise is vasudha ko kajaye ga 😡

N: wese vasudha ji...aap yaha...mr.oberoi ki koi kaas dost hai aap?

vas: nahi...meh tho yaha contract ke liye aiy thi...

natasha pretends to look confused...

N: contract? meh yaha har competitor ko janthi hu...aap kis company se ayi hai?

vas: meh kanaka ki malkin hu

natasha is raging inside cause kanaka belongs to her di and jiju...adi notices the stare she's used on him so many times...only a hundred times worst directed at vas...he decides to step in...

adi: uh..par kanaka tho kisi DK saighal ke naam par hai

vas: kya karre...jab koi company sambhal nahi saktha...tho phir kisi aur ko yeh zimedaari uthani parre gi

natasha clenches her fists as she tries really hard not to slap vasudha...luckily mr.oberoi goes on stage and starts his speech...

mr.o: thankyou ladies and gentlemen for coming...both kushi ho rahi hai mujhe yeh bathane meh...ke is saal ka contract bhi kanka ko gaya hai!!!

everybody starts clapping...even natasha, and she has a smile on her face...not a strained one...but she is actually happy that vas got this contract...

adi looks at her and is confused

adi: yah natasha ithne kush kyu ho rahi hai?

the end!

soz guys...gotta go

dont worry...

i will wait!! 😛 😉