part 2

ok, i'm continuing my story...

India,

Disha Saighal sat silently on the steps of PK and Jharna's house...watching the sunset...recalling past memories of her and DK...the time he first made her his wife...the time he told her he loved her...she could still feel his grip on her hand when DK had swung her towards him.

She sighed, why couldn't everything be the same?...why had there have to be so many problems in her life?...she sorrowfully re-played the scene in her head...only an hour ago...but it seemed like eternity...

1 hour ago...

DK: kyu? kyu thumne mujhse jhoot ble disha kyu? mene jab thumse kaha tha ke gar bet kar aram karo...phir thum bar jakar kam kyu karne gaye?

Disha felt helpless...what would she say to him?...he was angry right now and wouldn't listen to her at all...but she had to make him understand.

Disha: Dk...meri bath samajhne ki khoshish karo...thum janthe ho ke Jharna aur PK yeh ghar kese chala rahe hai? is ghar mein ithne sare lokh reh ra hai he...aur sirf PK kamane wale.

Dk: disha..mein hu na...meh naukhri karooga...thumhe karne ki koi zaroorat nahiye he.

But now disha was to angry to care...things she had never though of cam tumbling out of her mouth.

Disha: tum? agar thum naukhri karne wale hothe, tho aaj mujhe kam nahi kar ne partha, kodh bina naukhari ke bet he ho, par apne ego ke wajhase mujhe kam kar nehiye dethe. jab thumhe koi kaam miljhaye ga...aur gar meh pese aneh lage ge...thab mujhe yeh bath kehnaa!

with that she stormed out of the house...leaving DK staring at her with disbelief.

present..

Disha sighed, she had better go in and smooth things out with DK. She stood up and started to make her way back, when she heard a car come up the driveway.

she turned round and saw a black mercedes, she could see a driver at the front...was this vasudha again,come to taunt them?

disha was getting ready to face vasudha when a young lady of 23 stepped out the car...she was wearing a light pink trouser suit, decorated with beautiful white flowers.

disha didn't hear her gasp, or say 'di', the next thing she knew the two cousins were holding onto each other tightly, tears streaming down thier faces.

disha pulled back and faced Natasha, 3 years and she still looked the same, except for the mischevious spark which had gone out of her eyes...this wasn't the sweet innocent Tashu that disha knew so well, this was Natasha Bhosle, a mature business woman who had experienced more than her share of pain.

N: di...yeh sab kya hogaya...mujhe patha hi nahi chala..warna meh both pehel aa jathi.

Disha: woh sab bathe choro...ao, andher a kar sab se millo.

Disha led the way into the house she had grown so fond of. inside, azooba, gautham, suhas, sukanya and jharna were seated, talking, trying to take thier pain away. But as soon as the two walked in, everyone stood uo, shocked at what they were seeing, jharna was bewildered...who was this?

Natasha first touched the feet of suhas and azooba, seekign thier blessings, and gave her brother a big hug, no one said a thing, what was there to say? then she turned to face sukanya in the tensed silence..what would happen?

Natasha turned away in disgust... no matter what, now this was the only feeling she would have in her heart for the lady who had once been her mother...as far as Natasha was concerned...her mother had died 3 years ago.

hope you guys like it!

nice nibbles.... 👏 but yaar u can continue it in the first part post itself dear....no need to create new post.... 😊 Keep it up....waiting for ur next part...

part 3

k...i'm continuing...but please reply!

gautham walked up to natasha and put his ar round her...he still remembered how possesive of her he used to be, when they were only kids...but know he felt everything had changed. when his little sister had needed him the most, he had been held back by his mothers kasam, the same mother who had destroyed natasha's life, the same mother who was responsible for thier present condition.

gautham: tashu, gussa penkhdo, yeh tumhari maa hai, bhoth pyar kar thi he woh tum se.

n: pyar? bhaiya aap kis mitthi ke bane hai? is...is aurat neh kisi ko bhee nay chora...ek crore tho kab ke katham hogaye hoge...

she walked up to face sukanya...

n: jis bethi ko aap ne shaadi ke naam peh ek crore kehliye bheja, aaj uski hesiath us mr.veer thakhur sebi zaada hai. mujh par aap ke both ehsaan hai...mujh ko paala...keliya..phariya...batheye, kithne pese chiye aap ko? 5 crore?...10 crore? meh ek kaam kharthi hu... aap ko ek blank cheque dethi hu..uspar jithnee rakham barnhi he barlo...

unable to listen to another bitter word, disha stepped in.

disha: tashu..yeh tum kya ker rahi ho? kaki ab sudhar gaye hai...

n:jiju kaha hai?

she didn't want to talk anymore on this subject

disha: kyu?

n: di...pichle theen sal se aap ne meri jo madhat ke thi...ab usko chukane ka waqt agaya hai...ab dekhna...yeh vasundra, gargi aur vedant ko meh kese seedha kar thi hu...

ok guys...i'm ending this part here...but please reply...cause there's no pint of me writing this if no one likes it.

Nibbles why do u think its not nice......its very nice and start continuing ur story....... 👏 👏 May be the reason of not replying ur post might be it is carrying forward to next page so most of our I-F mates r not catching it......continue it dear......everyone will reply......

thanks harsy...will write next part soon.

i have jus started to read it..
nibbles....ure fanfic is BRILLIANT!!!! 👏 👏 👏

amazing!!....keep the awesome wrk up!!!!!

im sure every1 luvs it....!!!!!! 😳 👏 👏

nibbles, well done. I am enjoying it. Please continue.

Ok guys I'm continuing…

Part 4

There is a confused 😕 atmosphere as Natasha declares she will help them to destroy their enemies.

N: Di, meh jiju se milna chathi hu… bathayena… kaha hai who?

Before Disha can reply, DK. comes out of the room, upset at shouting at disha. He's thinking about how best to apologise when his eyes are drawn to Natasha, the only unfamiliar face in the crowd.

Dk: yeh kaun hai?

Before anyone can reply, Natasha walks up to Dk and holds out her hand. as he shakes it he is informed that she is Natasha Bhosle, sister of Gautham Bhosle, and has come to help them.

DK gives her a puzzled 😕 look,

DK: lekin, jaha thak mujhe patha hai, Gautham ki tho koi bhen nahi.

Natasha gives a strained smile,

N: meh janti hu ke aap ko bhi meri thara sab ke upar ek file rakhne ka shauk hai. Di ko pehli bar milne sa bath, apne un par ek file mangwahi thi…us pe mera naam nahi aya hoga, kyu ke theen sal pehle, meh shaadi kar ke America chalhi gaye.

DK: oh… (he still can't work out why everyone looks so tensed)

Without wasting any more time, Natsha starts to draw up her plan.

N: jiju, agar hum us Vasudha ko harana chathe hai, tho phir hum ko sabse peleh uske mehal phar ver karna chaye, jo is waqt Diamonds Forever hai. Hum market meh ek competitor ko kara kareghe, aur sath sath, vasudha ko nuksan ponchae ge. Ja tak who humare company par nazar dahle gi…thab thak both dher ho chuki hogi.

DK: joh tum ker rahi ho, woh sune meh both ahsaan lagtha hai, par asliath meh, both mushkil. Iskeliye pehsa chaye, skilled workers chaye...

Natsha gives him a smile, this time a genuine one...

N: meh janti hu, par mere pas pehsa hai, workers hai, bas ek bath ki kami hai...ek eligible partner ki. Kaye...aap mere sath kaam karege?

DK: teek he...par hum shuru kab karege?
Natasha's smile becomes even wider...probably for the first time in 3 years, she has truly been happy.

N: bas, humare managing director kah inthezar hai...

(view of a man driving an expensive car, furnished with leather, we can't see his face...just hands on the steering wheel)

Gautham: par yeh hai kaun?
Gautham who has been standing quietly on one side, finally speaksup...he wants to make sure that his sister is employing the right people.

N: fikar math kee jhiye bhaiya...woh ek both he kabil aadmi hai...apne kam ko both seriously letha hai...

(the same man walking into a loud club – view from the back – people dancing and drinking)

N: uska naam aditay Sharma hai...

("hay adi!" someone shouts from the mass of people, and finally the man turns round, revealing a handsome – but not as good looking as DK 😉 😳 – face)

that's it for now...when you read, PLEASEEEEEE! Post a comment, even if its a small one!

Happy New Year everyone...hope all you dreams come true! 😛

Nibbles that was brilliant.....u want a comment so here goes my comment......u write in a filmi style woh andaaz mujhe pasand hai..... 😉 By the way ur story line is different....nice...keep up the good work..... 👏

ok guys, i'm dedicating this one to harsy, who's been really nice and commented after evry part...thank - you!

part 5.

it's been a week since the saighals and bhosle's met Natasha, and a lot has changed.

the company is now up and running with 4 partners - Gautham, Disha, DK and Natasha - 50 workers, and already some distributors and suppliers.

on the road -

Natasha checks the clock in her car, satisfied that she will get there on time, maybe even early. she is thinking about old times, flashback of a house, bhosle house. women and kids seated everywhere. natasha's sitting in the middle with rano and disha on either side, laughing, joking and applying mehndi to her hands...

BHAM!

she is brought out of the past as her car has hit someone else's. the stupid driver was on the wrong side of the road. frustrated she gets out of the car, fuming with anger, inspecting the damage done, now she will have to send the car to the garage, and she'll be late for work.

****

Aditya can't believe his luck...first day to work and hes already met with a beautiful accident. the girl standing in front of him is gorgeous, wearing a flowing white skirt and a full sleeve white top which just reveals the top of her shoulders, sh makes him forget the bad sprain in his neck.

she stands in front of his window, angry, but that adds to her beauty. he gets out of the car and gives a silly grin.

****

Natasha can't believ it...this guy has trashed her car, made her late, and is now smiling like a monkey (😆 she doesn't know it's her marketing manager)

adi: hi

n: thum ko dikhta nahi hai kya? apne driving par concentrate kiya karo...

he sighs,

adi: jab ithna kubsoorat nazara ho, tho kaun kambakht driving par concentrate kar he...

n: WHAT?

adi: ek bath bathaye...ap ka dad terrorist hai?

n: excuse me? (to heself) hai bhagwan, lagta he yeh pagal khane se bhaag kar aya hai.

adi: woh kya hai, tum bhilkol bomb ke thara lag rahi ho.

he gives a bigger grin than before 😃

natasha also smiles in return, and gives him a tight slap!!!

aditya is dumbfounded, no girl has ever slapped him before

n: i hate irresponsible people, and i hate flirts! 😡

with that she turns round, gets in her car, and leaves, leaving the poor guy to nurse a sprained neck and a red cheek.

at the office-

Disha walks along the corridor towards the entrance, she is well aware that she's meant to be resting in her cabin, rather than running around the office, but she can't help it. It doesn't matter if DK will be angry with her, she's a partner of this company, and will do as much as everyone else.

she stops as she notices a man (one of his cheeks slightly redder than the other) make his way through the entrance. before she can say anything, DK comes out of nowhere and stands beside her.

DK: Disha...mehne thumhe kaha tha ke cabin meh aram karho, mar thum tho...

by this time, aditya has noticed the 2D's and walks up to them. he instantly recoginses DK and put forward his hand.

adi:Mr. DK Saighal...mera naam aditya sharma hai.

DK: oh, tho aap hain aditay sharma...

when they release each other's hands, aditya notices a beautiful standing next to him in a sari,

adi: aur aap jaisi koobsurat larkhi yaha kya kar rahi hai?

the stupid man talks directly to his boss, infront of her husband!

DK realises straight away he's a flirt and closes his chapter. he puts a protective arm round disha and replies...

DK: yeh hai disha, meri wife...

adi: (to himself) mera tho bad luck hi kharaab hai...pehli natchari, dhoosri shaadi shudda...

that's enough for now...i've tried to make it in a lighter mood as evryone knows that TD is following a very serious path at the moment,

happy new year!