part 2 - Page 4

😆 lol.....adi bara badmaash nikla!!! 😆 😆 😆

great part!!! 👏

i have school 2mrw aswell 😭

part 10

saighal house after the party,

Rano has managed to get vedant home and he's trying to explain to her that he really has changed.

ved: rano, please. thum meri bath kyun nahi man rahi? meh...meh badhal gya hu. disha aur brother ke sath mene jo kuch bhi kiya, uskeliye me both sharminda hu. meh unki madat karna chatha hu...meh bhi vasudha ko barbad karna chatha hu.

R: please vedant. me thumhe achi tara se janti hu...thum jesa admi kabhi nahi sudhar saktha! thum di aur jiju se door raho, warna thumhare liye acha nahi hoga!

with that she leaves the room. we can't tell wether ved really has changed as his expression is unfathomable (which means you can't tell)

at the office

natasha is sitting in her cabin reading a file when there's a knock on the door.

N: come in,

she replies without looking up and guess who comes in? adi!

adi: hi sweetheart!

N: (to herself) isko aur koi kaam nahi he kya (to adi sarcastically) fly paper chaye?

adi: (absaloutely confused 😕) huh?

N: lagtha hai aaj kaal thum beth kar makhia hi mar the rethe ho. 😆

adi:(giving another one of his grins)look sweetheart...

but he doesn't get further than that cause Natasha stands up gusse se laal 😡

N; kya?!

adi: ok, phir miss natchadi 😆

N: how dare you?!

adi: woh bhi nahi, tho miss bomb?

disha was walking outside natasha's office when she heard shouting coming from inside. she walked in and saw to her horror and amusement that Natasha was running after adi, chucking anything she couls get hold of. finally adi noticed disha and ran behind before.

dish: arre...yeh sab kya horaha hai?

N: di...yeh adi,

adi: finally, aditya se adi...par meh kush thabhi hoga jab thum mera naam muskurakar logi

N; di, is ko kahiye yaha ake mujhe pareshaan math kare...mere pas pehlese ithna kaam hai!

dish: adi...thum yaha kyu aye?

adi: arre, meh tho yaha sirf ek file dehne aya tha (holds up a blue file) par agr nahi chaye thoooooooo....

N; prao mujhe...

adi: pehle achthara se bholo...

N: (gives a small smile) Mr. Aditya Sharma, ja tho aap abhi mujhe yeh file dejiye, ja phir apna resignation letter dhi jiye

adi: thum pichle janam me don thi kya? ithna blackmail karthi ho!

finally hands the file over to natasha who looks at it and is happy straight away.

dish: is file meh esa kya hai, ke thum ithne kush lagrahi ho?

N: di, jis contract ko hasil karne ke liye vasudha din raat menaath kar rahi thi, usi contract ke meeting ke liye humme poona bhuliya gaya hai. (to herself) yeh ho shuruwaat hai vasudha...ek din thum sirf contract nahi, apna hosh, chen...sab kuch kodhoo gi.

that's it for now guys....is there anyone here who wants me to keep ved negative?

i want Ved to die..... 😡 i dont like that character and bring anyother character in Rano's life......Between ur fan fiction is nice.....carryon..... 👏

I can't trust Vedant. Keep him negative and get rid of him, so that he can never harm 2 Ds again.

hey guys!...really wanna say that i had a great day...but i can't cause first day back to school and guess who gets two exams to revise for and a piece of courseowrk to do? LUCKY ME!

anywayz....this ones for mona and harsy (read on and you'll know why)

part 11(i think)

adi: puna?...great, hum kab jare hai?

N: excuse me...tum puna kyu jare ho?

adi: well, with you of course. aur wese bhi, puna se mere both sare yaade jurs howi hai...thume patha, mene apna pura bachpan waha bathaya...par aaj thak puna nahi gaya.

adi gives another grin while disha is trying hard not to laugh...natasha just gives him a weird look...

N; bad joke...aur thum sunlo, thum mere sath puna nahi jare!

dish: nahi tashu, adi jaye ga. afterall, thumhi ne tho kaha tha ke is company ke do representative hoge...ek thum, aur doosra adi...

adi: exactly!

natasha is angry 😡 , she doesn't know what to do...

N: (to hereself)mujhe yeh contract chaye...par do din is bandhar ke saath1 patha nahi kese kaatoo gi!

****

meanwhile ved is sitting on his bed...just staring pointlessly into space when our bandit queen (gargi) walks in...

bq: arre vedant beta...happy birthday!

ved: mom...aap ko yaad raha! mene socha tha ke ithne sarri pareshania ke saath...

bq: hey ved...jo kuch be hojaye, thumari mom thumari birthday kabhi nahi bhool sakthi. aaj shaam ko ek both shaandar party hogi...meh abhi jakar bakhi sare arrangements kar ke aathi hu.

with that she walks off leaving ved thinking about how much his mum loves him when there's a knock on the door. ved goes to open it and finds a man in a grey suit(with matching grey hair 😆 ) standing at the doorstep.

ved: arre, khana saab aap

khana is an old family friend, also a lawyer of the saighals

Khana: arre vedant beta...happy birthday! kese ho thum?!

ved: meh ho teek hu....ap bathaye? kafi dino se dekhanahi, kaha the aap?

khana: arre beta, kya bathao....pichle kuch mahino se me out of town tha...kaal raat hi bhwas ghar poncha...aur aaj subha agaya thumhe thumara gift denekeliye.

ved: gift?

khana: ha! DK beta ne mujhe kaha tha ke thumare birthday par dene keliye,

ved freezes at the sound of DK's name....

ved: brother?

khana: ha...usne thume bathaya nahi, par pichle do saalo se woh thumare liye ek farmhouse banaraha tha...sab kuch thumare pasand ka...both pyaar kartha hai woh thumse....kaha hai woh?

ved doesn't know what to say...he thinks back to all the times when DK gave him the best birthday presents, before ved could even ask for something it would be in his hands. his mother was only obsessed with parties and meeting friends...DK really cared for him and treated him more like a son than a brother...thinking about all this brings tears to his eyes when he recalls everything that he did to DK.

****

a few hours later -

adi and Natasha are driving along the puna highway and adi can't keep his eyes of her. she's wearing a white sari which is slightly see through, and is looking beautiful.

there's a loud screech as adi makes an emergency break...Natasha bangs her head as she wasn't ready for this...

N: thum kya kar ra he ho?! 😡 gari chalani nahi athi kya?!

adi: arre meri ma! meri galthi nahi hai....age dekho,

infront of the car is a man in a police uniform, now walking up to the pair...

police: dekhiye aap age nahi ja sakthe...age ek both bara accident howa hai aur kal thak koi bhi gari nahi ja sakthi,

N; kya?! par humme puri rath kaha bethaye ge?

Police: dekhiye...yaha pas me hi ek hotel he...waha rath guzaar sakthe hai aap.

adi nods his head and moves the car into the direction where the officer was pointing.

meanwhile there is a lot of hustle and bustle as the officers are moving the body into an ambulance van...

police: bechara, jaan ko betha accident me...

we see one of those paramedic beds and a body on top of it, it's covered with a white cloth which has spots of blood on it....suddenly the wind blows and the cloth moves revealing...Vedant!!! (don't ask me how he got onto the puna motorway)

k guys, gotta go!
bye!

Nibbles , thank you sooo much!!!

Just my thoughts on how Ved reached the Puna highway:

May be this farmhouse that dK was building for Ved is in Puna, ved got hold of the papers by lying to the lawyer about dK, then wanted to check it out.

hey guys!...i wanted to say sorry about yesterdays rubbish ending...i was in a bit of a hurry, so i'll try to explain everything today...thanks to mona for her suggestions!

part 12

ok...at the moment we're at the place where we've just seen vedant who's dead...there's a big flashback(take it about 2 hours back) in black and white....

vedant drove along the puna highway as he was making his way back from the farmhouse which had been made for him. he couldn't believe that his brother, the same one he had tried to kill, had spent 2 crores just for him...everyting had been perfect, exactly how ved wamted it...

ved:(to himself) yeh mene kya kiya....brother ka pyar aur disha ki izzat, sab kuch khodiya, aur woh bhi apni galthio se. aaj, meh brother ko batha bhi nahi saktha ke woh mere liye kya hai...

while ved is feeling terrible for what he did to the 2D's, coming from the opposite direction is a large truck. the driver is drunk, and isn't paying much attention to the road...he puts back his head and takes a VERY large gulp of alcohol and doesn't notice ved speeding towards him (ved isn't paying much attention either...too busy recalling good times), suddenly there' a loud crash, and in a matter of minutes, the 2 vehicles explode (don't know much about cars, so if this is wrong, plz forgive me)

that's all about ved, know we are back to the present where adi and Natasha have just walked into a hotel

Natasha looked around the small hotel...people were running around here and there, kids were screaming at the top of thier voices and there was a large crowd gathered at the front desk, which was where the pair were making their way towards...

N: mujhe yeh hotel pasand nahi aya....

adi: i agree, aaj kaal hotel meh koi koobsurat larki milthe hi nahi,

looks over to Natasha with a twinkle in his eye,

adi: aaj kaal koobsurat larkia sirf sarko ke accident meh milthe hai 😉

Natasha gives him a look,

N: (to herself) acha hua ke yeh accident hogaya, warna poori rath iski bak, bak sunni parthi (to the lady at the front desk) excuse me, humme rath ke liye doh kamre chaye,

lady: (very stressed out) i'm sorry ma'am...is accident ke waja se humara hotel pura booked hai, sirf ek hi kamara bakhi hai,

adi: we'll take it (a bit too quickly 😆)

N: kya?! nahi, bilkul nahi, meh tumhare saath kamra nahi share karoogi!

adi: look sweetheart, jah thum mere sath kamra share karo, jah tho phir puri rath ghari meh betho...akeli

Natasha gives him a angry glare 😡, but shuts up, there is no way she's gonna spend the whole night on her own in a car,

ab kya hoga? 😉

bye guys!

wohi hoga jo manzoore Nibbles hoga. 👏 👏

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everyone is replacing me in TD fan fics!!!!!!

loll....

great part....ab kya hoga?????????......

please make adi sing... "hum tum...ek kamare mein band ho....aur chabi kho jaye!!!!"

loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool. ....

luvin ure fan fic......!!!! 👏