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Posted: 19 years ago
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welldone nibbles....carryon ur story it was just fantastic....hum sab paagal logon ki tum aur Guli ofcourse bombi r the sahara to get relief from the original TD........ 😉 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok, for all those who haven't read part 1... this is it:

'i'm starting from where we are now...2D's penniless, Dish living in PK's house with the rest of her family...

America...

Mr. Mehta quickened his pace as he walked along the corrior...he knew that miss. Natasha wouldn't like it if he didn't get the file to her in time... he looked at his watch and breathed a sigh of relief, precisely 1:30...he wouldn't be late.

Natasha (N): Come in...

she answered to the feeble knock on the door...

N: Mr. Mehta...file please...

an elegant hand , recently manicured, indicated to the sleek black file in Mr. Mehta's hand...as she took it her minds raced with a million thoughts...wondering how her family would be at this moment. crossing her fingers she opened the file and scanned the first page.

that was enough...it gave her all the news she needed, she stood up abruptly, her long tresses falling over her shoulders,

Mr. M: Natasha ji...aap teek tho hai?

even before he had opened his mouth he knew how stupid the question sounded... Natasha's lively face was now pale...her eyes which always carried sadness were filled with horror and grief...

this coudn't be...she must have read wrong...but what other explanation could there be...she hadn't been able to gather any information about her family...and know she knew why...

N: Mr. Mehta...abhi jaye aur mereliye ticket book karvaye...meh aaj shaam hi india bhawaz jaa rahi hu.

MR. M: madam, aap yeh kya ker rahi hai...india?...par aap ke appointments..meetings..in sab ka kya hoga?

Natasha turned to face her personal assisstant, her eyes now held fiery anger...

N: Mr. Malhotra, ab kab se mujhe jante hai?...sare meetings, sare appointments cancel kejhiye, martha ko phone kar ke kahiye mera bag pack ker ne ke liye, aur abhi jakar ticket book kar wiye...mere parivar ko meri zaroorat hai!...

she yelled...it was time for her to go to her family...her birth place which she had left all those years ago...it was time for Natasha Bhosle to go back home'

this is probably more confusing than before 😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
#23
nice one Nibbles.....keep up the good work..... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: harsy

welldone nibbles....carryon ur story it was just fantastic....hum sab paagal logon ki tum aur Guli ofcourse bombi r the sahara to get relief from the original TD........ 😉 👏

😆 that was why i started writing in the first place...i'll write the next part in some time

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Posted: 19 years ago
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great part nibbles...loving the story!!!!!!

continue soon please... 👏

btw loving the stuff going on between natasha and adi.... 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanx for the very 1st part!!!!


please cont soon!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok guys, part 8

there's a big hall with lights all round...a staircase to one side and a bar on the other...a few guys are sitting thier drinking and looking at the girls except for one..aditya! he's got his back to the cowd and is just there drinking while his friends aman and rohit (adi was allowed to bring some friends as it'a a party, and they also know gautham so it's okay) are trying to get him to flirt like he usually does.

rohit: arre kya yaar...yeh majnu jesa chera kyu lekar beta hai?

aman: mujhe lagtha hai humare flirt king ko pyar hogaya hai..

adi: aisa kuch nay hain...meh tho is bath par ro raha hu ke meri kismat ais ke mujhe thum dono, bandar jese dost mile...

A: acha..tho hum bandar hain? aur thu? aise lagtha hai ke chothe se bach se kisine chocolate churali ho.

R: are adi, yaha ithne koobsurat larkia hai...agar thuje nay chaye tho teek hai, par humare liye tho kuch patha...jese ki woh! woh blue wali...

adi: woh blue wali ke peeche jo pelwan kara hai na...wo uska baap hai...ake neeche karle warna nikal ke gottia kehle ga (can't remember the name properly, but it's some game with marbles)

a: acha phir, woh jisne hara (green)paya hai...usko jakhe patha...

adi looks at aman and gives him a smack on the back of his head...

adi: bandhar ko chor, thu tho pura ka pura gadha hai. larki dekhne se pehle uska gala dekhna chaye. iske gkale me jo motha mangulsutar hai, woh thuje nazar nay ara?

R: are is ko chor, in sari larkiyo ko chor, usko dekh...woh jo neeche ari hai...

A:WOW! are yaar adi, iska gala dekhliya, chera dekhliya, aur pure body ka x-ray karliya...keay bhi mangalsutar nay hai

R: are dekhna, kya pathaka hai

adi: are pathake ki bath math kar...both dangerous hothe hai...me ni dekhne wala...

A: are dekhna!

adi finally turns around and is gobsmacked...coming down the stairs is none other than natasha! she's wearing a red sari, with a strap blouse, which is tied at the back with six strings (she's coming down one of them curvy stairway so you can see her back as well)

****

Natasha felt very uncomfortable in her sari, she'd been forced into it by Rano (ved and gargi don't care where she goes, so she came to th party), and could feel all the guys following her with thier eyes...especially aditya who's got his mouth wide open 😆

N: (under her breath) is aditya sharma ki tho...ghar mein koi maa, bhen nay hai kya? dil kartha abi ja kar nokhri se nikhal doo.

mercifully she reaches to the bottom of the stairs and is immediately pulled into conversation by a few aunties (the type's that are always gossping)

adi gets up and walks round the hall, firmly keeping his eyes on Natasha.

DK: thum yahi roko, meh abi atha hu

Dish: teek hai

adi notices and walks over to Rano and Disha who are back to sister bonding, but before he gets to them Natasha has freed herself from the aunties and has joined her cousins.

adi: hi Disha!

N: (to herself) oh god, isko yahi ana tha

dish: are adi, thum ne kuch liya?

adi: kya kare...jab yaha ithne koobsurat larkia ho (looking at Natasha) tho kane peene ka kon soche/

N: excuse me...

adi: you're excused (has a small smile) wese disha...thum sach me both acho lagray ho. kash...kash me thumse ek saal,ek din pehle miltha, tho thum mere saath hothi...

rano: adi...(she's already met him) agar jiju ne sunliya tho...

adi: tho mujhe patak, patak kar mare ge...meh janta hu. ek bath bathao disha, thumhara pathi ithna chipku kyun hai?

N: woh isliye, kyu ke aaj kal flirts kuch zaada hi barge hai.
Dish: adi, thum ek kaam kyun nahi karthe, hum esi larko ko doondo, jo koobsurat bhi ho, aur jiski ki shaadi bi na hoyi ho.

Adi: are disha, yeh bi kya bath kahi! Wese tho…both koobsurat larkia hai, par sab natchadi hai. Aaj kal gari ko zaada importance dethi hai!

Natasha face is as red as her sari; she is fuming with anger and is finding it hard to stop herself from slapping aditya.

Before Natasha can come out with a suitable insult, she sees Rano's face. It looks pale and she is staring towards the entrance. Curiously Natasha turns round and is shocked.


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Posted: 19 years ago
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i'm very sad at the moment cause i'm going bck to school tomorrow, plus i've got a lot of exams coming up, so i'll try to write as much as i can today:

part 9.

N: OH GOD! aditya...

adi: adi nahi tho aditya hi sai..kuch tho improvement howi

Natasha is barely listening to him and grabs his hand,

N: aditya, (turns round cause she was still facing the door) yaha se chalo thum..jaldi chalo...

Dish: arre, par thum kaha...

Natasha can't hear disha at all, all she's thinking about is getting her and aditya away from the party as soon as possible.

R: arre, apne adi ki tho nikhal pari

A: kyu? kya hua?

R: arre woh dekh...woh larki tho kudh use kamre meh lekhar ja rahi he

Aman and rohit watch adi being dragged across the hall to a room at the far end (it's not that adi doesn't want to go, he's just shocked cause natasha is holding his hand 😆 )

Natasha bundles him inside the room and closes the door, but leaving it open just a crack so that she can see outside.

Meanwhile Disha is confused as to why natasha's acting so weird,

Rano: di...

rano nudges disha and indicates to the entrance where vedant is standing holding a boquet (i think that's how you spell it)of roses.

he spots rano and disha and walks over holding out the roses.

vedant: congratulations dish

dish:thum yaha kya kar ra he ho?

****
meanwhile, natasha sees vedant and disha talking, but she can't understand what they're saying (failed in lip-reading 😆)

N: is vedant ko bhi yaha ana tha...i hope ke usne hume nahi dekha ho...varna humara poora ka poora plan chopath ho jaye ga

****

vedant: disha...meh tumhare aur brother ki kushia meh shamil hona chatha hu (the 2D's got married twice...they're celebrating thier second wedding anniversary, cause the first one was on contract)

rano: vedant, please yaha se jao. agar jiju ne dekhliya tho...

dk: thum?! 😡 (to late rano 😆) thumari yaha ani ki himat kesi howi?!

ved: please brother...mene jo kuch bhi kiya, meh uskiliye sharminda hu...pease, mujhe maaf kardijiye

****

N: mujhe yeh party nahi rakhni chaye thi...pathana hona chaye tha ke yaha koi na koi garbar ho sakthi...

natasha is just going on and on...but adi isn't listening, cause he's to busy staring at her naked waist! 😆 and unconciously he gets a tighter grip on her hand (she didn't realise that they were still holding hands)

finally natasha realises that she's talking to heself and adi isn't listening,

N: aditya...thum kuch bho...

she gets very angry when she sees him staring at her waist(this girl needs to go to some anger management classes 😆)

N: HOW DARE YOU! thum...i'll...

she quickly frees herself from his grip which brings him out of his day dream

adi: huh? mene kya kiya 😕

N: thum! thum mere kamar ko dekhre the!

adi: kamar?! ab...woh waha thi..tho, meh kya kartha? nazar pehgay hogi.

natasha stomps over to the other side of the room and sits down on a chair, making sure she's a gooddistance away from aditya, he's okay with it cause he can still see her waist 😉

****

dk: dekho, yeh ek party...aur meh is party meh koi thamasa nahi chatha. um isi waqt yaha se cahl jao, warna thume dakhe mar mar ke nikalna pare ga.

ved: par brother, mera yakeen maniye, meh

but rano grabs his hand and pulls him out of the party(super strength must run in the family 😆 )

rano: chalo yaha se vedant, chalo,

ok, that's it for now...i'll write some more later!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Nice one Nibbles.....keep up the good work.... 👏

Vedanth is spoiling the party atmosphere.....😡this person will never learn......

Edited by harsy - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏
that was great part
poor adi 😭 😆 he is cute and 😆
vedant should learn his lesson
plz write soon

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