Created

Last reply

Replies

219

Views

14.8k

Users

11

Frequent Posters

mona05 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#11
Nibbles, Read the last 2 parts at one go. Brilliant, do continue.I like this angle of a cousin kelping the 2 D's.I love the possessive DK. Disha se zyada kaam mat karwana, nehi to DK ko gussa aayega.
harsy thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#12
a post dedicated to Harsy....wah kya baath hai....harsy bahuth kusha hua..... 😉 😆

Nice storyline with garam masala..... a bigger flirt than DK.....hihihi.....continue ur story dear.....waiting for ur next part..... 👏 👏
Tomiko thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 19 years ago
#13
ahhhh thanks so much guys...if i have time i'll do one tonight...otherwise tomorrow!
Piku_S thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 19 years ago
#14
👏
keep up the great work nibbles
it fuuny and good
Tomiko thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 19 years ago
#15
thanks for the comments everyone!

part 6

aditya sighs...and shakes his head, but before he can comment on the lack of avaialable girls, he stares dumbfounded, his mouth hanging open, at the girl stomping up to the entrance 😲 .

adi: bomb!

2D's: kya?

the 2D's are totally confused 😕 , where did the bomb come from? But there eyes are also drawn to Natasha, entering the building, obviously in a bad mood 😡 .

****

3000 rupees! that's how much the guy took to repare her care...AND she wouldn't get it back till the following week...

N: (to herself) agar woh flirt mujhe phirse milgaya tho meh usss...

she glares at the flirt gawping at her...

****

N: thum!

adi: ji is nacheez ko adi kehte hai...

N: mujhe thum hare naam se koi lena dena nahi hai! tumhare wajha se mujhe apni gari agle hafte thak nahi milegi

Disha: are Natas…

DK: (whispers in her ear) chup karo…both maza ar ra hai.

Disha: par…

DK: shhhhhh

and he goes back to watch the beginning of world war 3…he might not know Natasha that well, but at the moment she looks to him as the poor aditya sharma will have a black eye before the end of today 😆 …

Adi: aur mera yeh gal…jis par apne apneh hath ke saath chumma diya tha, who the lipstick se bhi zaada lal hogaye…un ka kya karoo? Aur waise bhi…gari aap zaada thez chala rahi thi.

N: What? Are you crazy 😡 ? Accident meri wajha se hua? You idiot…thum jante bi ho ke thum sarak ke ulta pase ghari chala rahe the?!!!!!!

Her face is red with anger 😡 , any second now this stupid jerk will have another one of her hands kissing his cheek…

Adi: excuse me…aap yaha kar kya rahi hai?

N: meh yaha kar kya rahi hu? Pehle tum mujhe bathao ke thum yaha kyu kare ho?

Adi: well, pehle tho mene poocha tha, par phirbe me bathatha hu….meh yaha kaam kartha hu…both high position par…waise agar aap mujhe sorry kahi gi…tho aaj raat meh aap ko Chinese kilao ga…

Natasha stares at him with her arms across her chest…observing his irritating grin…

N: (to herself) oh…tho kaam karthe ho, teek hai… (to adi) thum yaha kaam karthe ho….aur meh yaha ke boss hu!

Aditya Sharma looks like a baloon whose air has been taken out …he gulps

Adi: boss?

N: ha! Mein Natasha Bhosle hu…Disha saighal ki cousin…is company ki partner…aur tumhari boss! Stupid!

And with that she turns round and flounces off to her cabin…

DK gives a hearty laugh, and even Disha can't stop a small smile from escaping her lips…look like ther'll be some fun in the office after all…

One hour later

Disha is in her cabin sorting out some folders, while Adi is playing with a pen…

Adi; mujhe ek bath bathao disha…yeh thumhari cousin ithne natchadi kyu hai?

She looks up and sees his thoughtful expression, sighing before she replies…

Disha: uski koi galthi nahi hai…halath ki galthi hai…Natasha hamesha se both khush rehthi thi…agar uske ke ako mein asoo hothe…thabi chehre par muskurahat…par ek din, uski sariyah kushiya bikhar gaye..
Adi: esa kya hua?

Disha with a sad expression: uski shaadi hogaye

Adi gives a loud laugh…

Adi: disha…jab bhi kisi ki shaadi hothi hai, tab uski khushiya toothe he hai…

Dish: nahi…who shaadi se tho both kush thi…par uska pathi bayman nikhla. Shaadi ek dum bath, who usko America lekar chala gaya, aur pir….

She stops abruptly…

that's it for today guys...see you tomorrow!

mona05 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#16
waiting for the next part for some more fireworks between Natasha and Adi 😳 😆
bina4u thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#17
Nice Nibbles 👏
plz cont
Tomiko thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 19 years ago
#18
part 7

disha stopped abruptly at the sound of knocking at the door.

dish: come in...

DK walked in with a smile on his lips which soon faded away at the sight of adi,

dk: thum abi thak yai ho?

while saying this dk hastily shoved a something in his pocket,

dk: mene socha ke kab ke ja chuke hoge,

adi: hey dk, meh kese ja saktha hu?...thumari pregnant wife, aur uska kyal rakne keliye koi nahin? both na insaafi hai yeh. isle mene socha ke me isko apni thodi si company de detha hu

dk: ab meh agaya na hu? ab thum jao, wesebhi mujhe disha se kuch bath karni he...

adi: (a grin on his face 😃 ) koi bath nahi, thum dono bath karo...meh disturb nahi hoga, aur waisebhi mujhe koi kaam nahin...

dk: (murmuring under his breath) natasha thumhare bare meh sai ke rahi the...

adi: apne kuch kaha?

dk: nai, meh tho kera tha....

but before dk could continue he was interrupted by some more knocking on the door. before either of the 2D's could answer, aditya replied for them...

adi: come in...

Natasha and Gautham entered with smiles on thier faces 😊, but natasha adopted a stony stare at the sight of adi...

N: (to herself) lagtha hai meri kismat meh iska chera hi dekhna likha hai 😡

dk: ab thum logo ko kya chaye? 😡

dk was getting really angry....first sala adi wouldn't leave, and know his sala and sali came to give him more grief...

everyone was taken aback by this question except for natasha (she simply though that her jiju was annoyed with aditya)

N: sorry jiju, par hume apse kuch zaroori bathe kar ne thi,

dk sighed, he would have to wait until he went home to talk to disha...

dk: betho...

all four of them (disha's still standing and adi's all ready taken a seat)

luckily for them, Disha's office had five seats on which they couls all comfortably sit and talk...bu unluckily for natasha, she had to sit near aditya, which was the only availabe seat.

N: jiju, yeh lijiye...

natasha handed dk some keys..

dk: yeh kya hai? 😕

N: yeh he aap ke nay ghar ke chabiya, ap usi chol meh reghe jaha aap ab rehthe ho, bas ek aur ghar mein jo PK ke ghar ke bilkul lage hai...

adi: par kyu? mera mathlab hai ke ab unke pas paisa hai ek bara ghar lene ke liye, tho us chol min kyu?

natasha controls her self just enough o answer his question...

N: dekiye Mr. Sharma...

adi: wese sab mujhe adi bulathe hai, aap bhi bulaye na (seeing natasha angry he quickly adds...)par aap mujhe Mr. Sharma bhi bhula sakthi hai, kyun ki aap ke mu se yeh bhi both meeta lagtha hai...

by now everybody in the room is smiling (p.s. gautham' already met adi) except for Natasha who is uming with anger 😡 😡 😡

N: MR.SHARMA, meh yeh ker rahi thi ke agar Vasudha ko kabhi shak hua ke unko barbad karn ke phiche di aur jiju ka haath hai, ho woh sare shak door hojaye ge jab woh indono ko chol meh rethe hoyi dekhi gi. har party, har function, har meeting meh representative me aur (BIG sigh with a dirty look)mr.sharma hoge. is company me 4 partners he, aur mera aap se koi bi rishta hai, kisiko bi nahi patha chale ga.

(finally gauthams' turn to speak)

Gautham: par ek party jaha ap dono ko jaana hai (indicating the 2D's)

dish: kaunsi party?

brother and sister smile,

G: aap ke pehle anniversary ki party.(probably been longer in TD) hum ne office staff, aur koch kaas dosto ko bhuliya hai.

2D's gobsmacked...didn't remember that it was thier anniversary (Dk remembered 2 hours ago, just before he met adi...the thing he was shoving in his pocket was a gift for Disha)

adi: hey congrats!

adi shakes dk's hands, and then disha's, holding hers' a lot longer, but lets go when dk gives him a death stare.

see what happens at the party in my next part...

(any ideas on how to ruin vas are very welcome)

bye for now...nabs
umi82990 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 19 years ago
#19
i really like this...it' really good...
*Guli* thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 19 years ago
#20
👏



that was excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i just read it from the beginning too good!!! you comment on mines i just had to comment on yours!! please cont soon cuz i will be waiting!!


oh yeah where is part 1?? I cant find it!!!! someone send me the link please!!!!!!! i was confused when i read part 2!! 😕 😕 😕



anyways honey please coot soon!!! 😉

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington

1 years ago

⭐Back⭐ Arhi FF | Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon: Chapter 3 - Part 3/3

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: goodkashish

6 years ago

Kassir ...Sujal&Kashish...Part 28 - Pg 33

Kassir Extremes Intro 9pm - London Airport - Christmas Day It was a cold chilly night in the beautiful city of London. We arrive at Heathrow...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".