Destiny's Play-Pt XXXIII(Pg 144) 4/3

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Posted: 14 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: KavyaNaik123
lovely update,,,,,,,,update some more parts naaaaaa,,,ur writng is too gud

Thanks. I'll be updating a couple of more parts later in the day.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: holyangel
aweee.... that was so emotional...

loved both the parts... 😍

Thanks holy angel. Be prepared with your tissues because it is going to get more emotional in the coming updates.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#263

awesome updates loved them a lot

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Opti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: zahra15
lovely part.........both were very nice ..........wats up with maan......y did he have to bhave like this....hope he changes soon....

Thanks Zahra.You'll get to know what is troubling Maan in the next two updates.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: zaara2212
oh gosh what is Maan upto why is he distancing himself

tx for the update

Please be patient. You'll get your answers in the next two updates.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: sindu555
loved the updates ...

I feel bad for Maan ... he's trying to distance himself from Geet but in the process he's hurting himself too...

continue soon babe

love

Sana

Yes, both Maan and geet are suffering because of Maan's confused state of mind. Will post the next update in a while.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: PaintedSky

"Over the last couple of months they had bonded well and moved from strangers to friends. Was he willing to take the next step to becoming her lover? He was not sure whether he wanted the status quo to be altered but was it not his fault for acting increasingly familiar with her and letting her build her hopes? How long was he planning to extend this platonic relationship? He did not have an answer to any of the questions. "

these lines made me think like that. To me marriage is a bond that is forever. So, when ever two people got married they should at least give a chance to their relationship. As Maan in this ff is a very caring, self esteemed person and he is true to his relations and responsibilities so its obvious that he will also give Geet what ever she deserves. (well die hard fan of Maaneet, cant think ill or other way about them)😆

Loved the updates and waiting for the next update :)

Dont worry, Maan will make his marriage work. He just needs to clear his head.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: Preethi-Premi
Hi Opti, this is the most down to earth Fanfic i have ever read. I am so loving the very normal life of Maneet.. Please PM me when you update this.
I think Maan is unsure because he is still thinking about his first love which i guess is Sameera...

Thanks. Do send me a buddy request so that I can PM you when I update. Lets see if your guess are right.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#269

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1
awesome parts. love them.
geet loves maan deeply.
maan also loves her may be but want to create distance between them,
Geet fulfill her all duty.
aahh arjun.
update soon.

Thanks Prithvi. Yes, Geet loves Maan. Maan has to figure out his feelings which he will in time. Arjun is my villian so he will behave like this and maybe even worse!