Stardust - Link to thread 2 on pg 1 - Page 67

Originally posted by: Ethereal-Path

Too early to demand for an update?!!

Just can't resist the temptation.. :P

Originally posted by: nyxx

Wow. Im absolutely intrigued, and in love with your writing. Ive probably mentioned that before, but I really do mean it. I havent read in a while, especially with University taking a toll on me, but Im glad this is what I read first!!

Youve depicted a completely different tale, Armaans a lawyer, and Riddhima is a doctor, and we have Rahul and Muskaan who I always imagine to be their pillars, and we also have a dog, Sahil. I love all their characterization, youve took into account at illustrating not only their personalities, but the little details they notice, they care for, and the actions they do...especially the court scene in the beginning between AR...you got me gripped right from then. Special mention to their dialogues, they are to the point and perfect for each situation...especially the ones exchanged between Armaan and Riddhima, be it the court room scene, or the supermarket, or the while at a cafe..and then, at the restaurant. However, but more than that, its their eyes that speak volumes. They both notice the other soo well...and you could tell that Armaan is going through a turmoil, or atleast he will since right now, Riddhima has got him all curious, intrigued, and enchanted...hes noticing soo much about her...and he should, because we all know that its going to be him who is going to save her.. protect her...and love her :) I feel for Riddhima truly, but I love the way youve given her character such confidence! Atta girl! She can take down anyone...for suree!! And, Armaan has already witnessed that, but he also knows that shes fighting, and is asking for someone to save her...awwwhh! I can keep blabbing away I knowww...but I'll end it here, saying that Im in love with your writing😳

Oh and yes bring on PART B...ASAP😃😳

Take care!!

- Dee