Sanaa, that was FAB,Period.
Do u accept online hugs🤗🤗
that was one brilliant piece of work girl.. where is the superlike button?!😆
Ive hardly stumbled across stories involving these touchy kinda topics recently, i must say im still in awe!
-->The USP is the plot Sana.. how much i adored it! what's in the Grey matter of yours?? giving you all Hatke ideas! oh, my... all i could think of was how cool is this plot uve threaded!
-->the scenario's u put up,its very easy to picturize the scene going on there as it folds..
your narrating style is mesmerising, getting us all involved in this story, imagining it happening as spectators..
-->Characters! 👏 a splendid work there dear.. Rids Armaan Muski Rahul! we know them as happy-go-lucky characters mostly all the time, but here it was so easy for them to fit in these shoes!
Loved the first part of the story(court).. i was almost certain what was going on in her mind, sympathised with her, felt how uncomfortable it must be for her but most of all,i felt a sense of Pride for her.. for standing up against even when facing it is the hardest thing to do..
-->Armaan!! girl u have the knack in bringing out all possible Armaan's!!
i wanted to hate him, just for a moment.. but couldnt.. something told me, complete the OS then judge him!
-->Incident after Supermarket, i looved it how Armaan listened to her, letting her talk.. vent out her feelings.. Rids is one hell of a strong character!!
also could you please post this and Love, maybe in other separate single posts? ?just a suggestion, i know this thread contains all your short stories but i somehow feel it will garner more views if posted separately.. Ignore this if u feel otherwise..
Please continue this soon.. im very much eager to read what happen's next.. pretty pleachh!!
Cheers (still in awe with the story)
Prarthana😊
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