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Posted: 14 years ago
another thread ends
this deewangi has made me a deewana, hai yeh Maan mar jayoo is par to
my post😆 update😆
as always with him around she forgets her basic requirements
he scanned the trolly to find that again she missed the packet,
he went to the essentials section and picked up the packet of napkins, she shied cursing herself, inhe yaad hain aur tujhe kuch yaad kyun nahi rahta,
he came back placed it in the trolly and said meri sweety ka mat danto, yaad rahkne ke liya main hoon na. she blushed and placed a soft kiss on his cheek.
they went back to the flat and settled the things, she tried acrrying the baggeges around he took them from her.
itna stress mat karo, main kar lunga, tum jayoo tayaar ho jayo,
she asked kahan jaa rahe hain,
he smirked party
she said how can I come with u for the party?
he said why can't you come to the party with me, fuming in anger
she cursed herself for making him angry but how can she go, it should be his fiance he should take she said waise bhi I don't like parties. Mujhe nahi pasand she then bit her tongue oh yeh main kya kaha rahi hoon
he got angry and pinned her to the wall,
she gulped and said aacha suno, no reply, jada drink mat karna, no reply, thoda bahut chalega style ke liyen, drink karke ghar mat jaana, mama daadi ko aacha nahi lage ga, i will call you and pick you up, us halat mein drive nahin karna
he looked at her remembering how Geet always did so, and said main jyaad drink nahi karonga baba
she said I know you will not but if you want you can
he said you will not mind
she said no, I will not,
he said aur drive karke aaya to,
she said mujhe pata hain aap aisa nahin karoge
he kisses her nose ans said itna yekin karti ho meri bato pe

she nodes smilingly.

Complainingly he says phir mana kyun kar thi ho mera saath chalne se
she smiled naughtily and said koi aap pe drool karega tho main enjoy karonge, lekin agar kisi ne galti se meri taraf dehka bhi tho aap usko pata nahi kya karoge

he hugged her tightly those words ..some one looking at her hit him hard. His heart paced beyond his control his tightened grip expressed it all, he couldn't even stand the thought it made him feel misrable already. He knew she was right!!! he himself won't know wat he might just land up doing. The thought itself made him feel horrible no no...furious..no no ...infurated...

She hugged him closely calming him. She kissed him all over his face. She pulled out little kajal & kept a tika behind his ear.
later Rimi accompanied him to the party sight have made him loose his mind
he was very angry with himself, here is Geet the girl who loved her and he is being feelinhg comfortable not with her but with Meet how can he be so heartless with this Rimi who said she was Geet, and feel that his little wifey is Meet, he was torturing himself with the fight between his heart and mind, he just gave up and sat on thebar stool drinking, unable to control he called her,
he so missed to having his meals with her, he missed her.
He just wished if she could serve him.
He hated to serve himself & on top he was not sure wat he would like. He was so missed her selecting & deciding for him it seemed always perfect with her.
He looked at Rimi who was busy selecting for herself
and then was tempted to call Meet and called her, but what will I say,
she said bolo
Umm he bit his lips
Kya karte ho...she murmured dehko abhi khoon aayega wipe it with the hanky. main hoti tho I would have kissed it hai Babaji yeh maine kya kaha diya

he said missing u
she with her eyes closed thought love u
he says mujhe kuch samjh nahi aa raha ha
kya hain Indian spread hain kya
pata nahi actually naam lika huwa hain..shall I read it to u
nahi just tell me kya kya color hain
he scans through and said some red color says tandoori chicken
she smiles and says Indian hain..ok.. take red wala dry chicken,
umm
then green wala paneer
umm
black wali dal

umm
take roti
kitni
butter wali 3
umm
thodi rice bhi le lo
lekin
take just one serving spoon
umm
aache se khana, sweet bhi lena, chocolate wali ice cream
he smiles
good night
good night..suno ..he feels reluctant to stop her
call cut nahi karongi ...she pulls the spread & doses off.
Rimi wonders what took him so long to get his plate, she busies herself with few models she knew from her modelling assignment,
he came with his plate completely avoiding everyone around
Rimi stood close to him introducing him to the models
he totally avoided she shrugged thinking how arrogant, he behaves so much like a jerk.
he was concentrating on his food and the sound of her breathing. after so many years he thruoughly enjoyed his meal
next precap; Maan heavily drunk😆 Rimi behaves like before, Geet comes to his aide and takes him with her😉
DON"T MIND
if you read this hit the LIKE tab😆


Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazin update. Deewangi maaneet are perfect example of fire n ice
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Posted: 14 years ago
luved it SMJ...😆😆😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: heermeher



Same here Rakhi subha se IF mein hoon kya haal hai okk Muskan 3 direct update for TM where maan knows complete truth after that alternate :) you know how much we luv u


ohi toh, I'm come bacik in regular interval to see may be one more update of tm and deewangi.
yes we love muskan
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: smj1977

another thread ends

this deewangi has made me a deewana, hai yeh Maan mar jayoo is par to
my post😆 update😆
as always with him around she forgets her basic requirements
he scanned the trolly to find that again she missed the packet,
he went to the essentials section and picked up the packet of napkins, she shied cursing herself, inhe yaad hain aur tujhe kuch yaad kyun nahi rahta,
he came back placed it in the trolly and said meri sweety ka mat danto, yaad rahkne ke liya main hoon na. she blushed and placed a soft kiss on his cheek.
they went back to the flat and settled the things, she tried acrrying the baggeges around he took them from her.
itna stress mat karo, main kar lunga, tum jayoo tayaar ho jayo,
she asked kahan jaa rahe hain,
he smirked party
she said how can I come with u for the party?
he said why can't you come to the party with me, fuming in anger
she cursed herself for making him angry but how can she go, it should be his fiance he should take she said waise bhi I don't like parties. Mujhe nahi pasand she then bit her tongue oh yeh main kya kaha rahi hoon
he got angry and pinned her to the wall,
she gulped and said aacha suno, no reply, jada drink mat karna, no reply, thoda bahut chalega style ke liyen, drink karke ghar mat jaana, mama daadi ko aacha nahi lage ga, i will call you and pick you up, us halat mein drive nahin karna
he looked at her remembering how Geet always did so, and said main jyaad drink nahi karonga baba
she said I know you will not but if you want you can
he said you will not mind
she said no, I will not,
he said aur drive karke aaya to,
she said mujhe pata hain aap aisa nahin karoge
he kisses her nose ans said itna yekin karti ho meri bato pe

she nodes smilingly.

Complainingly he says phir mana kyun kar thi ho mera saath chalne se
she smiled naughtily and said koi aap pe drool karega tho main enjoy karonge, lekin agar kisi ne galti se meri taraf dehka bhi tho aap usko pata nahi kya karoge

he hugged her tightly those words ..some one looking at her hit him hard. His heart paced beyond his control his tightened grip expressed it all, he couldn't even stand the thought it made him feel misrable already. He knew she was right!!! he himself won't know wat he might just land up doing. The thought itself made him feel horrible no no...furious..no no ...infurated...

She hugged him closely calming him. She kissed him all over his face. She pulled out little kajal & kept a tika behind his ear.
later Rimi accompanied him to the party sight have made him loose his mind
he was very angry with himself, here is Geet the girl who loved her and he is being feelinhg comfortable not with her but with Meet how can he be so heartless with this Rimi who said she was Geet, and feel that his little wifey is Meet, he was torturing himself with the fight between his heart and mind, he just gave up and sat on thebar stool drinking, unable to control he called her,
he so missed to having his meals with her, he missed her.
He just wished if she could serve him.
He hated to serve himself & on top he was not sure wat he would like. He was so missed her selecting & deciding for him it seemed always perfect with her.
He looked at Rimi who was busy selecting for herself
and then was tempted to call Meet and called her, but what will I say,
she said bolo
Umm he bit his lips
Kya karte ho...she murmured dehko abhi khoon aayega wipe it with the hanky. main hoti tho I would have kissed it hai Babaji yeh maine kya kaha diya

he said missing u
she with her eyes closed thought love u
he says mujhe kuch samjh nahi aa raha ha
kya hain Indian spread hain kya
pata nahi actually naam lika huwa hain..shall I read it to u
nahi just tell me kya kya color hain
he scans through and said some red color says tandoori chicken
she smiles and says Indian hain..ok.. take red wala dry chicken,
umm
then green wala paneer
umm
black wali dal

umm
take roti
kitni
butter wali 3
umm
thodi rice bhi le lo
lekin
take just one serving spoon
umm
aache se khana, sweet bhi lena, chocolate wali ice cream
he smiles
good night
good night..suno ..he feels reluctant to stop her
call cut nahi karongi ...she pulls the spread & doses off.
Rimi wonders what took him so long to get his plate, she busies herself with few models she knew from her modelling assignment,
he came with his plate completely avoiding everyone around
Rimi stood close to him introducing him to the models
he totally avoided she shrugged thinking how arrogant, he behaves so much like a jerk.
he was concentrating on his food and the sound of her breathing. after so many years he thruoughly enjoyed his meal
next precap; Maan heavily drunk😆 Rimi behaves like before, Geet comes to his aide and takes him with her😉
DON"T MIND
if you read this hit the LIKE tab😆



brilliant update shruti 👏, muhhhaaa.
ek tm ke liye bhi likho na.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update muskaan.....

Maan already feels in his heart that this girl has some connection to him!!!!

he feels her inside...

shopping was awesome.. munda dar gaya.. yeh ladki kya kar rahi hai.. woh bhi mall mein!!! he he

she is the perfect wife....

i would love to see them living together.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Excellent piece of work buddy.
Simply loved it .
We all have gone Dewanay 😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
umaaaaaaaaaaaaaah muskaan plsssssssssss update and cant wait to see maaneet SR as they are married legally and of course the part. plsssssssssssss update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow beautiful my dear do yu mind if write for TM too🤗👏 yu see i promise & came so goodnite my dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice.....nw where did this rimi come frm???????

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