~deewangi~ maaneet ff THREAD 8 PT 70 PG 142 27FEB - Page 45

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update Muskan.....i am loving this...plz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ek tho itna pyar se yanha..wanha kiss karten hain phir ..couch main so ja...umm..twisted her lips. Couch main soyee meri juti... main tho yanha soven ghi..he smiled & hugged her closer...

am total fida on these lines ... his lil wifey is soooo adorable ...

cant wait for the next part .... update soon muski

love
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update.....!!!

loved this line..."Ek tho itna pyar se yanha..wanha kiss karten hain phir ..couch main so ja...umm..twisted her lips. Couch main soyee meri juti... main tho yanha soven ghi..he smiled & hugged her closer"

donno how manhy time i read this line...!!!

mushki love u yaar for this update...!!!

loving the way their life is moving without thinking reality...!!!

pls update next part soon...!!!

OMG if u will give such kind of precap...how u expect us to wait for next yaar....pls try to update in morning...!!!

plsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb update already waiting for next
A poem for deewangi, not written by me but a famous urdu poet (Syed Wasi Shah)
zakhm muskuraate hain ab bhi teri aahat per
dard bhul jaate hain ab bhi teri aahat per
shabnami sitaron main phool khilne lagtey hain,
chand muskuraate hain ab bhi teri aahat per
umer kaat di lakin bechpana nahi jaata,
hum diye jalaate hain ab bhi teri aahat per
ghantian si bajti hain, raks honey lagta hain,
dard jagmagatey hain ab bhi teri aahat per
teri yaad aaye to neend jati rehti hai,
khwaab toot jaatey hain ab bhi teri aahat per
jo sitam karay aa ker sab kubool hain hum ko,
hum khushi manaate hain ab bhi teri aahat per
ab bhi teri aahat per chand muskuraata hai,
khwaab gungunaate hain ab bhi teri aahat per
tere hijr main hum per ek azaab taari hai,
chonk chonk jaatay hain ab bhi teri aahat per,
dastakain sajaane key muntazir nahi rehtey,
raastay sajaatey hain ab bhi teri aahat per.
ab bhi teri aahat per aas laut aati hai,
hum diye jalaatey hain ab bhi teri aahat per
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: softly_spoken

superb update already waiting for next

A poem for deewangi, not written by me but a famous urdu poet (Syed Wasi Shah)
zakhm muskuraate hain ab bhi teri aahat per
dard bhul jaate hain ab bhi teri aahat per
shabnami sitaron main phool khilne lagtey hain,
chand muskuraate hain ab bhi teri aahat per
umer kaat di lakin bechpana nahi jaata,
hum diye jalaate hain ab bhi teri aahat per
ghantian si bajti hain, raks honey lagta hain,
dard jagmagatey hain ab bhi teri aahat per
teri yaad aaye to neend jati rehti hai,
khwaab toot jaatey hain ab bhi teri aahat per
jo sitam karay aa ker sab kubool hain hum ko,
hum khushi manaate hain ab bhi teri aahat per
ab bhi teri aahat per chand muskuraata hai,
khwaab gungunaate hain ab bhi teri aahat per
tere hijr main hum per ek azaab taari hai,
chonk chonk jaatay hain ab bhi teri aahat per,
dastakain sajaane key muntazir nahi rehtey,
raastay sajaatey hain ab bhi teri aahat per.
ab bhi teri aahat per aas laut aati hai,
hum diye jalaatey hain ab bhi teri aahat per




Sooo Beautiful!!!
❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: softly_spoken

superb update already waiting for next

A poem for deewangi, not written by me but a famous urdu poet (Syed Wasi Shah)
zakhm muskuraate hain ab bhi teri aahat per
dard bhul jaate hain ab bhi teri aahat per
shabnami sitaron main phool khilne lagtey hain,
chand muskuraate hain ab bhi teri aahat per
umer kaat di lakin bechpana nahi jaata,
hum diye jalaate hain ab bhi teri aahat per
ghantian si bajti hain, raks honey lagta hain,
dard jagmagatey hain ab bhi teri aahat per
teri yaad aaye to neend jati rehti hai,
khwaab toot jaatey hain ab bhi teri aahat per
jo sitam karay aa ker sab kubool hain hum ko,
hum khushi manaate hain ab bhi teri aahat per
ab bhi teri aahat per chand muskuraata hai,
khwaab gungunaate hain ab bhi teri aahat per
tere hijr main hum per ek azaab taari hai,
chonk chonk jaatay hain ab bhi teri aahat per,
dastakain sajaane key muntazir nahi rehtey,
raastay sajaatey hain ab bhi teri aahat per.
ab bhi teri aahat per aas laut aati hai,
hum diye jalaatey hain ab bhi teri aahat per



WAH WAH WAH.........awesome.........beautifully written 👏 👏 👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago

Aww geet is drooling over maan. 😳Love how they cannot stop themselves from touching each other.

Naahi they were about to kiss but got disturbed by the phone. Aww me so glad geet knows that maan loves her but is just running away from his feelings.

love the poem
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: komlika



WAH WAH WAH.........awesome.........beautifully written 👏



year....this is very cute nad apt foor deewangi...!!!

loved reading it...!!!

thanks dear for posting...!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb poem
well written👏
loved it !!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part ...... waiting eagerly for next part

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