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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
hey.. that was beautiful...😃 you knw, after reading your ff, kuch der ke liye main bhool gayi thi ki Capt Rajveer was declared dead in LRL after Rajeev's exit.. its so realistic.. 👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
thanks for the wonderful update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
hey manali😃
you have manage to write the update from your busy schedule thanx for the update😃😃
the update was awesome and beautifull and wonderful(kuch zaada ho gaya shayad😆) but update was very nice👏👏👏
loved the scenes of raj and naina in the car and in the hospital too👍🏼👍🏼
everybody was shocked to hear that captain salve and nandini are sisters😲😲😲 and even gets more shocked to hear that captain salve is actually major bhargava's wife😲😲😲
and in the beginning the punishment rounds given by abhi and naina were too good👏👏👏
and and and the nick name given to dr.shalini that was very new and sounded like original😆😆😆 mother india
in the last part raj said simply to naina as a ray of hope ⭐️⭐️⭐️
again the update was very fantastic👏
thnx for the pm and do update soon😃😃😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
Reserved Sorry comment niche add kar diya hai
Edited by dazzling_glory - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75

Hiii Mana how r u?

awesum upd
fantastic
mindblowing
do cont. soon
thanx for d pm
Love
Deepa
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76

Superb…tooo good👏

Abhi had become over protective when it comes to Raj's safety. He does not want to take any chances and so ensures that the security is flawless. He is not able to face Raj because of his guilt. 😭But Raj ke jaisa forgiving dost hote hua unhe chinta karne ki zarurat hi nahi. Both the friends are cheerishing their reunion.

Naina is feeling guilty about discussing Abhi's personal life in court. Abhi understands her hesitation and tries to lighten the situation. He is infact very impressed by the way naina has defended Raj in court.😊

The conversation between all the friends was SUPERB…😉

Alekh is worried about naina and careless about his own wounds. Pooja is her chirpy-self teasing Ali as always. Huda is back to his flirting and leg-pulling. Yudi is still has become mature. And all of this is because their Rajveer Sir has come back. Their hard work has paid off. Raj and Abhi enjoy listening to all the nick names that their cadets have come up with. 😆

Raj is overwhelmed to hear their voices again….he is proud of how much they have achieved while he was away and thankful to all of them for what they have done for him

Raj and Abhi are shocked😲 to hear that Smriti is Nandini's cousin and Bhargav's wife. They are impressed about how their cadets have been able to gather proof…something which they being intelligence officers were not able to do.

Abhi envy's Raj for being so calm and composed even in such adverse situation. Raj tells him that this is only because he has his naina with him. Raj ka yeh confession naina ke liye sabse anmol hai.

Hope everything goes well at the hospital and Smirii does not create any more problems.

Please continue soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
#77

main na niche se suru karti hun...!!! mera fav scene tha voh...jab raj ne naina ko uss ka 'ray of hope' kaha...!!! awesome scene tha yaar...

okay...ab suru se suru karte hain...

baht garmi hai yaar...!!! main apne yahan ke climate ki baat nahi karr rahi hun...!!! balonwale bhai saheb ke entry ki baat karr rahi hun...!!! raj toh hamesha kisi novel ke charac ki tarah...hamesha maafi dene ke liye khada rehta hai...par jo taklif abhi ke liye humain hui uss ka kya...??? main toh kabhi bhi uss ka muh todd sakti hun...

vaise bhi voh kafi guilty feel karr raha tha...!!! par sach kahun yaar...mujhe iss se koi farq nahi padta...!!! mera gussa abhoib hi usi jagah par bana hua hai...

ab naina kyoun guilty feel kaarr rahi hai...!!! raj LRL me ek hi santh-mahatma bana hua tha...kya yeh kamm tha jo yeh bhi aa gayi...!!! khair Abhi kitna bhi naina ko support kar le...mere liye toh voh RAAVAN hi rahega...!!! aur haan...agar voh use support nahi bhi karta na toh bhi naina jeetegi hi...!!! yeh mera bharosha hai...apne Kumbh-mele ki bichdi hui behn Mana par...

mobile scene bhi baht badhiya tha...!!! Raj ki tarah main bhi kafi khush hun...!!! vaise bhi jab Raj apne 6 packs ke sath hota hai...aur sabhi sath me hote hain toh scene ek damm se change ho jati hai...maza aa jata hai...

ab raj ko jyada surprised hone ki jarurat nahi hai...!!! uss ke cadets use baht pyar karte hain (mere jitna nahi...thoda kamm hi sahi...par karte toh hai)...toh itna toh karr hi sakte hain raj ke liye...!!! lekin voh naina se jyada impressed tha...jo ki voh KMA ke first day se tha...!!! khair ab voh badh bhi gaya hai...!!! hamare liye Subh-Samachar...ha ha ha...

HAILA...yeh kya jhatka hai yaar...smriti...us takle ki biwi...!!! jiss ke sar par ek baal bhi na tikk saka... uss ki biwi hai SMRITI...

naina ne kya kaam kiya hai yaar...!!! chun chun kar badla le rahi hai...apna HOME-WORK achhe se karr ke aayi hai...jab ki voh HOME me nahi HOSTEL me rahti hai...ha ha ha...sab ko jhatke pe jhatke diye ja rahi hai...ha ha ha

toh abhi rajveer sir kafi confident hain...!!! kyoun nahi...ab unn ki best cadet jo unn ke sath hai...aur voh bhui khullam-khulla...!!! voh toh pakka Raj ko bacha kar rahegi...voh Doc tujhe koun bachayega...

chal jyada soch mat...aur next ud post kar de jaldi se...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
Great update. 👏 👏 👏
But i missed RN in whole update. I mean Abhi was with them so they did not get the privacy.
Naina was feeling guilty that about she did with Abhi but Abhi was understanding this time and he chose Raj's innocence to be proven first than his past.
Naina ki hi baat sunega Alekh bus baaki koi bhi kuch bhi kehta rahe vo nahi sunta hai. Sach kaha na ki dono Kumbh mele me bichde bhai behan lagte hain.
Huda ki bhi sab watt lagate rehte hain. KItne khush hain sab Raj k vapas aane se jaane tab kya hoga jab Raj humesha k liye un k pass vapas aa jaayega.
Poor Abhi us ko nahi pata tha ki us ka itna accha naam rakha hai cadets ne. Sab se tolerable name bataya Naina ne to bhi Abhi ko jhatka lag gaya na.
Thank god vo gaya to kuch der k liye jis se Raj and Naina ko kuch time mila phir bhi kuch baat nahi ho paayi. Ab kya karein ye Raj Naina jaldi apne natural mode me vapas to aayenge nahi.
Please try to update it soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
loved the part
awesome
amazing
excellent
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: esha143

Haaayeee Doc...what an update...itniii saariii info de daali tu ne ek hi jhatke mein...but it was useful... woh Salve...uss Maj.Bhargav ki wife😲😲...ye sab se bada jhatka tha mere liye...God no wonder she's so shrewd in her ways...ek jaise langoor ek hi saath hoteh hai na...inn dono ka case bi waisa hi hai... the cadets phone call was hilarious...loved it totally...n at the last part Raj's near confession was so sweet...I know its not a confession but in the current circumstances its more than what we can ask for...I just want him back to the academy soon...wonderful update as always...😊

Thank u dear Siri !
Salve pe meri purani khunnas hai na...issiliye mere mann ki ichcha maine yaha puri karli...😛😆
and u are right...it wasnt Raj ka confession, but for the moment usne itna kehdiya wahi kaafi hai...haina??😛
thanks a ton again for liking the update...stay tuned !😊

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